Here are my replies to
Poppy,
alexwolf, and
jc104.
Replying to
Poppy:
Replying to
alexwolf:
Replying to
jc104:
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Thanks for your offer to grammar check whenever stuff is ready! For now, here are some specific comments concerning your suggestions:
Arceus-Dark
- Yes, the word choice of "wreck" is not the best. In fact, it is likely this sentence will be reworded to better fit the "dark" theme of the overview.
- I think the word "nonimmune" was used as an emphasis on how no Pokemon is immune to His STAB Dark-type attacks. This sentence might be split up or reworded.
Arceus-Dragon
- Imbued will be changed to something more appropriate.
- The intention of "few dragons can claim" was to state how Arceus-Dragon is one of the few viable Dragon-types in Ubers which can use a Calm Mind set effectively (AKA Giratina formes and Latias/Latios). I suppose this sentence could be reworded to emphasize this fact.
Arceus-Rock
- I'll see if I can reword this. I too am not satisfied with this sentence.
Arceus-Steel
- Yes, durability isn't the best word. My intention was to show how Poison-type attacks are ineffective against Him. I'll change it to something more appropriate.
Thanks
jc104 for your input!
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Thanks for all your input! Any applicable suggestions will be implemented as soon as possible.
If anyone has suggestions on word/phrase choice, we would really appreciate it. It's always welcome. Thanks.