On the bulky Attacker, why is Fire Blast listed before Aura Sphere? Getting past Dialga and Tyranitar is HUGE. Jirachi, Bronzong, and Metagross are uncommon anyway. I also want a Substitute slash somewhere, as SubCM is a perfectly viable set. Probably on the last slot, after Ice Beam.
note:I am not mentioning specially defensive Dark Arceus with Payback -.-
Why is that? You should list every Pokemon that is capable of beating the Pokemon you're writing about, and that is viable in the metagame you're writing for. Thus, add Dark Arceus, Psychic Arceus, and Scarf Kyurem-B. Forretress can do some damage with its Gyro Ball, and only fears Fire Blast. And yeah, do mention Specially Defensive Giratina.
QC Approved 3/3