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Old Aug 9th, 2012, 10:42:09 PM   #2
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  • Mention Ground-types in c&c, especially Seismitoad, because they can block Volt Switch and most won't take much from Overheat. In addition, Hidden Power is a pretty bad move to be locked into. Seismitoad is noticeable for being able to easily tank any of Zebstrika's attacks besides Hidden Power Grass.
  • Mention that Zebstrika is arguably the best revenge killer in the tier in Overview
  • Give more examples of what Zebstrika can revenge besides weather sweepers. Gorebyss, Rotom-S, Cinccino, etc.
  • Mention that Lightningrod gives Zebstrika a Special Attack boost which Sap Sipper doesn't as a reason why it's first on the set (you mention this in the overview but not in the set comments)

There really isn't that much to add here; good job. Try finding more teammates for AC but otherwise there isn't anything to add there.

Make these changes and find more teammates and

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