Aug 12th, 2012, 10:56:40 PM
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The higher I get the lower I'll sink.
Join Date: Mar 2011
Posts: 361
<@Redew> jellicent <@Redew> how hammered are you <&Jellicent> i am a hammer
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Originally Posted by Fat Delidove
Dat Koffing made my day.
We want MORE! Could you make Electrode?
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Originally Posted by Fat Furosuto
Nice! I see a big improvement with diglett and dratini there. Only thing I would suggest is to make the lineart smoother. Or, if you're having difficulty with smooth lineart, then maybe try doing a rough border, but maybe with action lines, or make it look really accented and jagged for the lineart. Whichever works for you, just try and find a style and don't be afraid to explore with different things!
I hope my critique and advice helped you. Keep up the great work man! For a simple yet effective pokemon I would try snivy, since smooth and jagged lines could work for it either way. :D
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Thanks :>
Edit: i thought of adding sparks after I posted the original, so here's one with sparks.
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