Rofltanker: You should mark Rattled on Dunsparce as a DW ability, but that's minor, so Approved.
akela: The (*)s actually dont need to be included anymore; they were part of an old mechanic for Smeargle that's been phased out. You can leave them in if you want (i think i never bothered to take mine out lol). Approved.
HLDR: When you're reducing Speed on -Spe natures, you divide by 1.15, not multiply by 0.85. Breezi's Speed should actually be 73 (Machop's stays the same). Also, Machop should also start with Vital Throw, as it learns it as Level 25 in Gen 4. Those are minor though, so Approved.
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