[Silvershadow234]

Hey there. This looks like a pretty solid team, with not a lot of weaknesses, so well done on that.

However, Suicune and Hitmontop really don't fit in with the offensive nature of the team. Suicune is a wall, and completely loses your momentum. That Hitmontop set is really quite poor, as it has to rely on Sucker Punch for damaging ghosts, which is not good. This won't even scratch Cofagrigus or Dusclops, so you won't actually be able to spin. Mismagius often carries Substitute as well-and if not, carries Will-O-Wisp. If you use Blastoise over Suicune, and then Mienshao over Hitmontop, then your team is much more offensive. Blastoise is a much more reliable spinner, and can actually spin against ghosts thanks to Scald/Toxic. Mienshao is the perfect momentum gainer-the SubPass set can set-up a Substitute on loads of Pokes and then BP out to Snorlax or more worryingly Yanmega. HJK does a ton to Bronzong, who looks like it could be a pain for you to deal with without Suicune. Stone Edge is great for hitting Chandelure who think they can switch in on HJK for free, as well as Arcanine/Darmanitan for super effective damage.

Here are the sets:


Blastoise (F) @ Leftovers
Trait: Torrent
EVs: 252 HP / 252 Def / 4 SDef
Bold Nature
- Scald
- Rapid Spin
- Roar
- Toxic

Mienshao @ Life Orb
Trait: Regenerator
EVs: 252 Atk / 4 SDef / 252 Spd
Jolly Nature
- Hi Jump Kick
- Substitute
- Baton Pass
- Stone Edge

GL and I hope I helped. Also, one minor nitpick-running HP Fire / Ice over Pain Split over Pain Split is a much better idea, because you need to trick your scarf away for it to work. Hitting Escavalier for 4X super-effective damage with HP Fire or Flygon for 4X is very useful as well.