@KoA, that is much better! It looks like you kind of have two different furry parts...if you turned the lower one into part of the abdomen and gave it a second set of stripes, it might look better (match the wings a bit more, since they all have two parallel stripes), but at this point I'm just getting nitpicky. If you stopped there, I would still be happy!
So the gem on the tip of the body: does it glow? Because it looks like it could glow. ^_^
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