Not looking to seriously rate, but I just wanted to point out that Lavos and others have always told me that Keldeo should always run a water-STAB. I told him no, and was particularly reffering to the SubCM set when I said this, the set your using. So kudos for not using a water STAB and making Jellicent cry :D Couple of nitpicks to say and that's it really!
Lucario: Bullet Punch over Crunch, its better in the long run. Crunch is hitting what? Jellicent? Keldeo can SET UP on that thing. Why kill it? BP hits Terrakion, Gengar, and other ghosts types.
Keldeo: Use Icy Wind. My team liked the HP Ghost thing, but this team just prefers icy wind for DNIte. It means you can't quite set up on Jellicent easily, but hey, it still can't do anything but taunt you and hope a scald gets a crit anyway.
Gar: WoW over disable is very good, for the reasons Jimbon said.
That's it my man! Love the team! Earned a luvdic from yours truly ;] GL with the team!