I think Choice sets are usually split into two separate sets; Normally they don't play similarly enough to justify having them on the same set - ex. Choice Scarf Garchomp is primarily a revenge killer, while Choice Band Garchomp is primarily a "hit shit hard" Pokemon. Also, I think Fire Blast should be put over Fire Fang on both Choice sets because it 2HKOes Physically defensive Skarmory, which Fire Fang doesn't do, although Choice Band can justify using Fire Fang since it does more damage to Ferrothorn than Fire Blast (80 base SpA lol).
On the Swords Dance set, maybe AC mention dropping the Defense IVs to 10 (11 if the leftover 4 EVs are placed into Special Defense) to prevent Genesect from getting the Special Attack boost? It's irrelevant if you're using Life Orb, but with Yache Berry, it prevents Genesect from OHKOing you with Ice Beam through Yache. I'm not a QC member but I think Aqua Tail might deserve a slash with Fire Fang if Garchomp is being used on a Rain team.
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