Sigh, seems I'm the only one giving feedback...
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iamdanielcruces - I love the general idea behind your descriptions. Black is humourous yet informative, and White is as good. I have nothing to say.
LouisCyphre - I fail to see humour in these. Whilst they would make excellent Pokedex descriptions normally, humour is what bugmaniacbob is begging for.
RavensNation - I know you disagree with what bugmaniacbob has said, but humour will get you slated.
Shelmet - Oh goodness. You certainly tried for humour, although it seems a little immature and... Raseri was right.
Yilx - Very good. Subtle and witty, each entry is well written. Don't change a thing.
jagged_angel - I also cannot see humour in these entries. I know you're trying to be subtle, but bringing out the humour a little more wouldn't hurt. For the White entry, replace "is" with "as".
Adams - Dex entries tend to be longer than what you've come up with. The entries seem a little vague, and doesn't tie in with humour.
capefeather - The White and Sequel entry is fine. However, the Black lacks humour. You're not wasting your time, but I believe you can improve each entry.
nyttyn - Needs more humour. I understand what you're doing with the Black/White 2 entry, but it seems forced and not needed. Try coming up with something else.
WebsterVanCooney - Very nice. I'm not gonna say your black entry copies mine, but it certainly is similar.
Scoopapa - The black entry is... I dislike sex jokes with pokedex entries. The other two are very good, however.
Jebus McAzn - I'm lovin' these. The White entry seems awkwardly phrased however, I'd work on it.
Bull of Heaven - The Black and White entries are too similar, but I love the B/W 2 entry.
Rediamond - Good job.
SubwayJ - Very nice, although the B/W2 needs more humour
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Anyway. my one:
Aurumoth, the
Divine Pokemon
Black: Its gold is often used to coat Magikarp caviar as a gourmet dish. Once eaten, many experience a sense of pure gratitude,
and a sickly sweet aftertaste.
White: Although scientists have yet to uncover its prominent attributes, it is rumoured to roam near bright lights, harshly headbutting them repeatedly.
B2/W2: Its stinger changes colour in seemingly random patterns. For this reason, they are often used as Christmas decorations, providing spectacle and wonder.
Alternate: It is not uncommon for an AURUMOTH to detatch its thorax once hurt. This thorax is then powered by gold dust, and becomes a VENONAT.
I added the Alternate just in case anybody prefers this to one of my other entries. I really want feedback on this!