Aurumoth, Repentance Pokemon
Black: Through a combination of mental and physical training, this pokemon can use its thick wings for both attacking and defending, though if too harsh of a blow is taken, the psychic connection to the wing will temporarily fade. It harbors a deep-seated wrath that it seeks to control.
White: Using its surprisingly sturdy, golden, shield-like wings, this pokemon can assume a wide variety of defensive stances and can even use its abilities to disguise itself. It is said that in the early morning they reflect sunlight off of their wings onto themselves to purify their minds of former misdeeds.
Black/White 2: This pokemon spends all of its time secluded in a mountain forest to atone for a past action. It uses its sharpened abilities to defeat and outwit any intruder that threatens its solitude.
I tried to incorporate as many things tying it together as possible, such as including all of its abilities, the mixed offense of its stats, and in a way the “risk” theme with it being dangerous for the trainer to attempt catching it. The mountain forest seemed obvious, it’s bug type, so the forest is a little cliche, but oh well. The nature plays along with the heavenly part, as well as a mountain being towards the heavens. I tried to play the “fallen angel” sort of thing into it, with it voluntarily secluding itself to atone for a past sin, but still a work in progress due to its obvious latent aggression. I also noticed a pattern of white entries showcasing physical attributes, while black entries were about how it battles, so I included that.
Well, now i don't have to restrict the entry to make it funny, so there are a couple changes. In overall flavour, it became more grim, and almost sorrowful (as fitting with real dex entries, it shows an underlying pain, but keeps it kid friendly). I used the differences between the black/white entries to highlight that it is striving for redemption, but not there yet. (I kind of envision the innocence>wrath>repent to play out through the evolutionary chain, just as it does in the moveset) I made sure not to say what it seeks forgiveness for, because that would honestly fit in a prevo dex entry. I also wanted to include the fact that even though the wings were made of gold, they still make up its 99 base defense, and their weakness lies somewhere else.
Last edited by Shadowhand; Nov 13th, 2012 at 5:55:21 AM.
Reason: made submission final