Just trying to finish this up, and after seeing some suggestions in general, I've "trimmed the fat" from it so to speak.
Final Submission
Aurumoth, the Judgment Pokemon
Black: Luck charms are made from their golden bodies. Though normally tough, they will become brittle around negativity.
White: Pieces of their armor are often collected for charms, however sometimes Aurumoth wants these back.
B2 W2: Charms made from their shells for luck are said to reflect the nature of their owner. Whether good or bad luck is granted depends on how badly Aurumoth wants its shell back.
Serious, informative, with a lil bit of wit.
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Last edited by KoA; Nov 13th, 2012 at 10:28:09 PM.
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