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Old Nov 12th, 2012, 8:43:51 PM   #67
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Final Submission

Aurumoth, the Seraph Pokemon

Black: It is nearly unnoticeable when its wings are tucked in, leaving only its horns visible. Aurumoth are prideful, however, and will become hostile upon being mistaken for Sawsbuck antlers.

White: An Aurumoth can bend light with its six wings, creating illusions. It will make itself appear as anything from a tree to a Pokemon Center to avoid battle.

Black 2 / White 2: Aurumoth often disguise themselves as legendary Pokemon to scare away enemies. Unfortunately, this tends to lead to a dramatic spike in reported Ho-Oh sightings.



Justification: I kept it light and witty, with the White entry a little more lighthearted than the Black entry. The BW2 entry was inspired greatly by Verminator's submission. I kept allusions to both its Illusion ability and KoA's lore about how it tends to cover itself with its wings.

I tried to portray Aurumoth as a shyer kind of Pokemon who would prefer to avoid battle completely or make its enemies flee as opposed to a direct confrontation; I believe that this ties in line with the idea of angels and seraphs being elusive. The entries are humorous but contain actual content that describes both the Pokemon's personality and its abilities, something I'm rather proud of.

I changed the wording in the first two entries to avoid using "invisible" and "visible" in the same sentence and to avoid the word "disguise" coming up twice in two entries. While I'm not 100% satisfied with the way it sounds overall, it has improved a great deal.
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