^I think your chapters are bit too small (as in the focus). Try to make each chapter a bench mark/milestone. Like for the first chapter it could be between starting your journey and defeating your rival on route 22. The next could be from where one left off all the way to getting to the entrance of Mt. Moon. Three would be from Mt. Moon to defeating Misty. And so on and so fourth. Defeating major events are really good places to stop a chapter.
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