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Old Dec 2nd, 2012, 2:07:17 PM   #43
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Husky i think that you should expand the AC paragraphs a bit as they are somewhat lacking in content. For example i saw nowhere any mention of Ferrothorn as a partner, which not only takes on easily most Pokemon that try to revenge kill Garchomp, such as Starmie with Ice Beam, Mamoswine, Lati@s, Choice Scarf Jirachi, etc, but can setup both Spikes and SR to aid Garchomp in either sweeping or wallbreaking. Bronzong is another very good defensive partner to consider as it can check most faster Pokemon that threaten Garchomp and sets up SR.

Another example of a paragrpah lacking in content is the second part of the AC of the SubSD set which is only three lines long and says nothing about defensive teammates, or even offensive teammates that have same counters and can take some of the attacks that Garchomps detests.

In general i would advice you to try and be a little more specific, as you should be in the AC parts.
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