Yeah, The format of the story was pretty good, but the entire game your opponent was playing catch up. Warstories are nice where even if its the last turn you're on the edge of your seat because you don't know who is going to win.
Format is pretty good, could use a little tweaks but overall still a good warstory. If you plan to write another in the future find a battle that is not so much one-sided . But Good job nonetheless.
Causing Chaos Since '02
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