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Originally Posted by Fat Golden Piloswine
Well here's what I have to say:
Hitmontop: Why??? Technician with Close Combat, I don't understand. Also your descriptions are lacking. Why did you choose the moves that you, did, and why do you have CC, and Mach Punch on the same set.
Abomasnow: Ice Shard kills Dragons. That's not specific. Try a damage calculator, because you have no Attack Ev's invested. What kind of Dragon? Dragonite. Which often has Multiscale, which makes it's bulk even more impressive.
Rotom: Try a damage calculator, your not being specific. All you say is it just goes in there and destroys everything. There's no examples or anything.
Salamence & Chandelure, is the same thing I have above. I just need more specifics.
I like Bisharp's Defiant idea very much. I just need more info on how it does in battle, besides absorbs Intimidate.
Sorry if this message sounds rough, but you need data to back up your team, and an explanation of how it does in battle.
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Top: I would also suggest Intimdate. Mach Punch provides some nice priority.
Abomasnow: Ice Shard also gives Aboma a nice priority. While it won't always be killing things, it can pick off Focus Sash users.
Rotom-W: I disagree. He doesn't exactly need a damage calc to provide examples. Since he has full investment, he will be killing things.
Salamence and Chandy: Like I said, he doesn't really need any damage calcs because he went for full investment.
He did explain his reasoning behind Bisharp, which was to kill of Psychic types that threaten Hitmontop and to kill Latios, which outspeeds most of his team and KOs.
Now onto my advice:
Mence:
I would go for a mixed set with Draco Meteor / Heat Wave / Rock Slide or HP Flying and Protect with 252 evs in Special Attack
Overall looks like a very solid team, with its only glaring weakness is fighting, but you have resistances to that. Nice Job!