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Dec 26th, 2012, 11:11:11 PM
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Subject 18
Emma <3
Join Date: Oct 2012
Posts: 232
Ok this is a battle I just had a few minutes. Any critiques on what I could improve?
http://pokemonshowdown.com/replay/oucurrent6750161
This is the team I used. It's new so I'm still trying to work out the kinks?
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Debbie (Deoxys-Defense) @ Rocky Helmet
Trait: Pressure
EVs: 252 HP / 252 Spd / 4 Def
Timid Nature
- Stealth Rock
- Spikes
- Taunt
- Night Shade
Batista (Heatran) @ Leftovers
Trait: Flash Fire
EVs: 252 SDef / 252 HP / 4 SAtk
Calm Nature
- Lava Plume
- Roar
- Toxic
- Protect
Dexter (Heracross) @ Choice Scarf
Trait: Moxie
EVs: 252 Atk / 252 Spd / 4 HP
Jolly Nature
- Close Combat
- Megahorn
- Stone Edge
- Sleep Talk
Masuka (Swampert) @ Choice Band
Trait: Torrent
EVs: 172 HP / 252 Atk / 84 Spd
Adamant Nature
- Earthquake
- Ice Punch
- Waterfall
- Superpower
Lt. LaGuerta (Jirachi) @ Leftovers
Trait: Serene Grace
EVs: 224 Def / 252 HP / 32 Spd
Bold Nature
- Thunderbolt
- Flash Cannon
- Calm Mind
- Wish
Sgt. Doakes (Landorus) (M) @ Life Orb
Trait: Sheer Force
EVs: 252 Spd / 252 SAtk / 4 HP
Modest Nature
- Earth Power
- Focus Blast
- Rock Polish
- Hidden Power [Ice]
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