Couple of things that need fixing before I approve:
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With Superpower, Mamoswine is able to hit Air Ballon Heatran who would not take any damage from its STAB Earthquake. It should also be noted that Superpower can also get a 2HKO to Ferrothorn who walls Mamoswine's other STAB moves.
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You should also mention that Superpower is effective against Rotom-W's (arguably Mamoswine's most common switch in). The 2nd sentence is false btw. Ferrothorn hardly walls Mamoswine, it just barely avoids the 2HKO from Earthquake (the 2HKO is basically guaranteed with hazards or prior damage). Superpower just makes Ferrothorn easier to kill.
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Breloom is a good teammate for Mamoswine, as Mamsowine can get rid of Breloom's main threats, latios and Latias with its STAB Ice Shard.
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This sentence isn't really accurate. How does Mamoswine plan on defeating Latios or Latias? It can't switch into any of their attacks, and it can't OHKO with Ice Shard either until they're weakened. Nonetheless, it's a decent Breloom partner, since its a decent check to defensive Celebi/Amoongus and you can use Mamoswine to check the 4X Ice-weak Dragon-types that can check Breloom. Breloom returns the favor by bodying Bronzong & Slowbro, and putting to sleep Skarmory (who also happens to check Mamoswine). I'd also mention other Pokemon as partners like Heatran (who happens to counter Bronzong and Skarmory) or Dragons on a Dragspam team. (Since these teams tend to be weak to Dragons).
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Mamoswine checks some of the most fearsome non-dragon threats in the game like Tornadus-T, Thundurus-T, Landorus and Breloom with its STAB Ice Shard.
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None of this is necessary in checks & counters. You should only talk about countering Mamoswine in this section.