[Sciztar]

Originally Posted by Fat PK Gaming

Couple of things that need fixing before I approve:

This sentence isn't really accurate. How does Mamoswine plan on defeating Latios or Latias? It can't switch into any of their attacks, and it can't OHKO with Ice Shard either until they're weakened.

Seeing as to how I mention Breloom as a partner to Mamsowine I know the main switch in to Breloom is the EON twins, so Breloom is a good lure out to these two. But I see what you mean, because Mamoswine can not switch into any of the twins moves. So should I mention that Mamoswine can not switch into any of Latios or Latias's moves?

I'd also mention other Pokemon as partners like Heatran (who happens to counter Bronzong and Skarmory) or Dragons on a Dragspam team. (Since these teams tend to be weak to Dragons).

I actually don't understand what you mean by or dragons on a Dragonspam team. Are trying to say that Heatran can counter the Dragons found on DragonSpam or DragMagnezone teams with Hidden Power Ice or just being a Steel type? I assume you mean by countering the dragons.

Mamoswine checks some of the most fearsome non-dragon threats in the game like Tornadus-T, Thundurus-T, Landorus and Breloom with its STAB Ice Shard.

None of this is necessary in checks & counters. You should only talk about countering Mamoswine in this section.

So I should I move that to that the Life Orb set or just scratch that sentence all together? But other than that, I fixed the changes you wanted for Mamoswine.