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Old Jan 20th, 2013, 2:12:20 AM   #20
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Since you've rightfully removed SD and the lead set, you'd best remove mentions to those sets in the rest of the analysis to reflect that. Stuff like

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Efficient Taunt lead potential
Great boosting move in Swords Dance
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Fake Out can be added to break any sashed opponents, also can break Multiscale on an unboosted Dragonite
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Like the former Swords Dance set, it can use Brick Break & Aerial Ace, but Low Kick still holds much priority over the two
need to be removed.

Just saying though, at least at my brief look through this, the skeleton looks very messy and some stuff in there doesn't sound like you've used Weavile very much at all. The EVs line should read evs: 32 HP / 252 Atk / 224 Spe and Hitmontop being a good partner to Weavile (I mean, he's not BAD, but seriously, if Hitmontop is the first Rapid Spinner you can think of for OU, you should stop writing now) doesn't help.

EDIT: Oh yeah, since Tornadus-T is banned now, change the EVs to 40 HP / 252 Atk / 216 Spe.
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