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alexwolf · Jan 24th, 2013, 8:08:54 PM

First of all there are some formatting issues so check this thread: http://www.smogon.com/forums/announc...hp?f=148&a=181. There are many lack of spaces between words, as well as unecessary gaps between lines, and finally set comments and additional comments must be capitalized.

Now on to the content:

Overview

I would suggest scrapping the whole overview and adding this instead:

Good Dragon revenge killer, as well as Pursuit trapper
Pursuit and way better speed differentiate it from Mamoswine
Usually found in Deo-D teams with Gengar
Very frail and SR weak, thus very hard to bring in
OHKOed from almost all priority
Relatively easy to wall

Physical Attacker

Set Comments: (here you are supposed to describe the sets purpose and what each move does)

This is how the set should look like:

[SET]
name: Physical Attacker
move 1: Ice Shard
move 2: Night Slash / Ice Punch
move 3: Pursuit
move 4: Low Kick
item: Life Orb
ability: Pressure
nature: Jolly
evs: 32 HP / 252 Atk / 224 Spe

Ice Punch, Night Slash, and Low Kick explanations

Additional Comments:

EVs to outspeed 212 Spe Dragonite at +1 (Bulky DDnite, which is mentioned in the AC of offensive Dnite) and rest to HP for a little bulk
Mention Choice Band here, and emphazise how easily Weavile can be set-up on with it
Mention Swords Dance instead of Pursuit. When using SD the other moves should be Ice Shard / Night Slash / Low Kick. Stick here the part where you say that Weavile find almost zero set-up oportunities
Here is also the part where you mention teammates so move here the Deo-D and Gengar stuff
A spinner in general is an ok partner but not essential at all. Forretress and Starmie are good options, and Forretress set up SR as well, which helps Weavile
Scizor and Volcarona checks are needed as well. Terrakion and Dragonite handle Volcarona, Keldeo and Landorus-T check Scizor, and Gyarados deals with both

Other options

Punishement for Calm Mind users such as Latias, CM Jirachi, and Reuniclus
Taunt to prevent Volcrona and Gyarados from setting up on you, as well as hazard setters from abusing you
Brick Break
Fake Out and Counter on a lead set

Checks and Counters

Add Volcarona and Gyarados, as well as Tentacruel and Politoed

Jan 24th, 2013, 8:08:54 PM	#28
alexwolf King of Conquerors Join Date: Jul 2009 Posts: 3,613 Greece	First of all there are some formatting issues so check this thread: http://www.smogon.com/forums/announc...hp?f=148&a=181. There are many lack of spaces between words, as well as unecessary gaps between lines, and finally set comments and additional comments must be capitalized. Now on to the content: Overview I would suggest scrapping the whole overview and adding this instead: Good Dragon revenge killer, as well as Pursuit trapper Pursuit and way better speed differentiate it from Mamoswine Usually found in Deo-D teams with Gengar Very frail and SR weak, thus very hard to bring in OHKOed from almost all priority Relatively easy to wall Physical Attacker Set Comments: (here you are supposed to describe the sets purpose and what each move does) This is how the set should look like: [SET] name: Physical Attacker move 1: Ice Shard move 2: Night Slash / Ice Punch move 3: Pursuit move 4: Low Kick item: Life Orb ability: Pressure nature: Jolly evs: 32 HP / 252 Atk / 224 Spe Ice Punch, Night Slash, and Low Kick explanations Additional Comments: EVs to outspeed 212 Spe Dragonite at +1 (Bulky DDnite, which is mentioned in the AC of offensive Dnite) and rest to HP for a little bulk Mention Choice Band here, and emphazise how easily Weavile can be set-up on with it Mention Swords Dance instead of Pursuit. When using SD the other moves should be Ice Shard / Night Slash / Low Kick. Stick here the part where you say that Weavile find almost zero set-up oportunities Here is also the part where you mention teammates so move here the Deo-D and Gengar stuff A spinner in general is an ok partner but not essential at all. Forretress and Starmie are good options, and Forretress set up SR as well, which helps Weavile Scizor and Volcarona checks are needed as well. Terrakion and Dragonite handle Volcarona, Keldeo and Landorus-T check Scizor, and Gyarados deals with both Other options Punishement for Calm Mind users such as Latias, CM Jirachi, and Reuniclus Taunt to prevent Volcrona and Gyarados from setting up on you, as well as hazard setters from abusing you Brick Break Fake Out and Counter on a lead set Checks and Counters Add Volcarona and Gyarados, as well as Tentacruel and Politoed __________________ Part of the OU QC team, message me for a check!