Generally, Sub pinch berry sets don't work, unless your name is Empoleon because you have resistance to most priority attacks. Sceptile is frail, its coverage isn't very good. I'm no exactly convinced, but I'll give it a test when I get the time.
On the other hand, we have a Sceptile revamp a couple of threads down. You could have just posted this in that thread, you know.
Whatevs sig. QC member for OU and Ubers, VM me for a look at your analysis. Just make sure it's good.
Also, if you want me to rate your team (OU/DW OU/Ubers), give me a VM. If I don't rate it, it's either 1) it's so shit it's too much trouble, 2) I'm busy, or 3) the team is fantastic and I have nothing I can suggest to you. You should be able to recognise which one.