Thanks for the feedback!
Changed the errors for item / nature / attack explanations. Sorry since it's my first time >_>. Onto my comments:
Hidden Power [Bug]: I'm really thinking this could use an AC comment, but not a primary slash. Icy Wind deals around 42% to the Celebi switch in and after rocks + spikes its down to half. Of course, Celebi is forced to recover, but partners like Scizor, Jirachi, Gengar, ThundyT are a great means of managing Celebi as well as Banded Tyranitar. I feel that although HP Bug hits Celebi for more damage, that Icy Wind is a good universal since it also hits Among and you'll hardly need it as much as, say, CM or RD for the final slot.
Calm Mind: This is an ingenious idea! It certainly deserves a primary slash on the fourth slot, as it can easily set up a CM boost since it's an amazing bluff.
Life Orb: I'm thinking an AC mention, since this set wants to bluff not go all out attacking. I feel LO hampers its natural bulk (something I like to abuse: living VSwitch from Rotom-W is amazing while SS 2HKOs after rocks). LO is certainly a good item though and could certainly be a threat under rain so I'll mention that in the AC.
Hidden Power [Electric]: Even with EB its not going to muscle through Jellicent unless you put Calm Mind on it. I'll AC but its certainly not worthy of a slash. It can hit Gyara but even Tenta isn't minding HP Electric much either.
Thanks for the feedback!
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