I've got some feedback for your first analysis, hopefully this will help! You should work on your elaboration, especially in your overview. The overview is a brief look at how the Pokemon generally plays, not a list of its attributes. You mention the attributes in context and in a manner that shows how one would play the Pokemon. For example, instead of listing how Bronzong has 7 resistances and base 116 defenses, say something along the lines of, "Due to its amazing 7 resistances and great base 116 defenses, Bronzong makes a great tank and support Pokemon." Then later you can mention, "However, lack of a recovery move makes it easy for opponents to gradually wear it down and prevents Bronzong from being a long term wall." Obviously don't copy and paste that, but do something similar. Looking at the analysis in general, its always good to explain the Nature and ivs, mention how they help Gyro Ball and don't hurt Bronzong because its slow. You don't want to go full tl;dr, but make sure your explanations are full and comprehensive. Good luck, I hope this helps you!
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