Feb 5th, 2013, 3:39:18 AM
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Join Date: Aug 2009
Posts: 1,168
What am I licking?
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Offering some feedback: - Quanyalis: Your sprites are one of my favourite submissions (the other being noobiess). I like the colour in both your sprites, it seems very true to the artwork–however Cupra's 'beard' and wings could be a shade darker. The only major complain that I have is that your Cupra looks very flat and lifeless. You could remedy this with a more dynamic pose (within reason) or even changing the shading of the sprite to give it more dimension. Argalis' eyes just look sad to me, maybe its the shape of the eye or the placement of the pupil but it doesn't give off that aggressive look of the Argalis art but this is a minor nitpick of mine.
- elcheeso: Your sprite just seems off to me. Quanyalis probably addressed this issue better in his/her feedback but to reiterate the point the proportions of Cupra's face seem strange and unnecessarily skewed. I have a similar complaint in your Argalis sprite, except it seems more the body is shifting to the right instead of being centred.
- I like your Cupra sprite. Just two complaints, the colour scheme (of the regular Cupra) seems significantly darker than the actual art–it could probably be lighter to more closely match the art. My second complaint is that Cupra's body seems almost squashed in or dominated by the 'beard' as it covers a majority of Cupra's belly. By uncovering that you could most certainly add length to the sprite.
- noobiess: Probably my favourite submission thus far. The pose of Argalis really matches the art, capturing the agression of the stance. In both sprites the colour and proportions are done very well. Only two complaints; one being that Cupra's pose could be more upright or dynamic, keeping true to the art and exposing Cupra's belly. The second complaint is that you don't have the back sprites which would prevent other people for voting for your sprite which would be a shame because I could definitely see that work being popular.
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