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To Forgive (a suspenseful short story)
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Jan 12th, 2008, 8:42:21 PM
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DiamondDust
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BROOKLYN, HANDIN' OUT MAH RAGE
that was a great read. it didn't feel really suspenseful and it somewhat felt like the ending was forced, but it was still entertaining.
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