Sorry man, but this was a lame battle and a boring warstory. Winning 4-0 over a bad player doesn't make a good story and then you didn't really add much as far as commentary to educate the players reading. You basically just said "I'm going to beat him with my pokemon" over and over again, with a few notes like sacrificing your Hippo to get sandstorm going.
As a Hail team user, I'm saddened by the way your opponent used his team. Why is he trying to set up a sub-seed with Abomasnow when hail isn't active? If he could clearly see he's facing another weather user, he should be protecting his Abomasnow as much as possible to set up hail whenever you get SS going again. Also, Mamoswine is a late game pokemon, not a first switch. Switching into an earthquake and then sticking around for a second one just to Roar is a waste of a great hail-team tool.
Try to post some closer battles against better opponents if you are going to post a warstory again. And if you do, make sure to give everyone your reasoning in the commentary instead of just giving pokemon cute little nicknames like "Christmas tree" and then saying your will "brake" them.
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