...Team help/Rate:

[So Zetta Slow]

Okay here is the team:

Daisukenojo (Rampardos) (M) @ Focus Sash
Ability: Mold Breaker
EVs: 252 Atk/252 Spd/6 SDef
Lonely nature (+Atk, -Def)
- Stone Edge
- Earthquake
- Rock Polish
- Head Smash

I thought i would start out with a Rampardos because it looked kinda good and other people have used him...I think.

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Hindenburg (Drifblim) (M) @ Leftovers
Ability: Aftermath
EVs: 12 HP/80 Def/202 Spd/216 SAtk
Calm nature (+SDef, -Atk)
- Baton Pass
- Substitute
- Calm Mind
- Shadow Ball

I feal that he could be a good Baton passer.
I've used one before and it worked out...kinda.

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Megumi (Mismagius) (M) @ Leftovers
Ability: Levitate
EVs: 108 HP/2 Atk/236 Spd/164 SAtk
Timid nature (+Spd, -Atk)
- Calm Mind
- Shadow Ball
- Hidden Power [Fighting]
- Substitute

Thought he might work i wanted something "New" to me.

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Marriland (Azumarill) (F) @ Salac Berry
Ability: Huge Power
EVs: 252 Atk/4 Def/252 Spd
Jolly nature (+Spd, -SAtk)
- Belly Drum
- Substitute
- Return
- Waterfall

Um i really don't know why i wanted one on my team to be honest.

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Cheese (Rattata) (F) @ Focus Sash
Ability: Guts
EVs:
Jolly nature (+Spd, -SAtk)
- Endeavor
- Quick Attack

Yeah probaly not the best idea but it's just a F.E.A.R. Rattata.

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Shamo (Blaziken) (M) @ Choice Scarf
Ability: Blaze
EVs: 6 HP/72 Atk/216 Spd/216 SAtk
Rash nature (+SAtk, -SDef)
- Overheat
- Sky Uppercut
- Thunderpunch
- Hidden Power [Ice]

Um i prefer Blaziken over Infernape i like the extra power.

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Yeah my first team i would like rated so yeah that's all folks.

Happy posting!

SR94

[Lee]

3. Have some actual words in your post beyond your six Pokemon and their moves. Not following this makes your post quite boring to read and rate. All Pokemon should have a good reason for being in your team anyway, so why not post that reason? If you're having trouble with this one, start by giving an explanation for each team member. Why are they there? What role do they serve? How do you get them in? Then, give an explanation of how you would open with the team and how you would go about using it. All of these things help people rate your team and allow us to offer more helpful advice.

This does not mean add one sentence saying "Standard x" or "all-around awesome" after each Pokemon. If you put thought into making the team, you can put thought into posting it.

Your descriptions aren't quite up to scratch. Take a look through some other RMTs to get an idea of what is expected.