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Join Date: Apr 2009
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Hello! this is my 1st RMT... so please bear with me...
[images from PE2K and CaP Sprite index] At a glance: This team started out as a gimmick out of Spongebob Squarepants' buddies, but as this team came together, it appealed as a rain team that still has the Spongebob gimmick Sandy (Pachirisu) (F) @ Damp Rock Ability: Run Away EVs: 4 HP/252 Spd/252 SAtk Timid nature (+Spd, -Atk) - Rain Dance - Thunder - Hidden Power [Ice] - Thunder Wave My RD Lead... She may not be as fast as Jolty she'll have to do... with a +Speed nature and maxed Speed EVs Thunder is my main attack, 100% acc in rain, can deal up to 99% damage to lead Aerodactyls once it taunts and this hits HP ice is there for ground types who like to switch in, like Fidgit Patrick (Starmie) @ Expert Belt Ability: Natural Cure EVs: 4 HP/252 Spd/252 SAtk Modest nature (+SAtk, -Atk) - Recover - Surf - Psychic - Ice Beam My All Out attacking behemoth. 2 STABs + BoltBeam for coverage. Might get Life Orb instead for more carnage, or Choice Specs/Scarf for additional power/speed, eh? No Name (Tentacruel) (M) @ Black Sludge Ability: Liquid Ooze EVs: 252 HP/120 Def/16 Spd/120 SAtk Calm nature (+SDef, -Atk) - Rapid Spin - Sludge Bomb - Toxic - Surf This guy is my Special Spinning Toxic-Spikes-Absorbing Wall. I'm still testing how good is Ice Beam vs Sludge Bomb. Mystery (Kingdra) (M) @ Leftovers Ability: Swift Swim EVs: 4 HP/252 Atk/252 Spd Adamant nature (+Atk, -SAtk) - Dragon Dance - Outrage - Waterfall - Rain Dance With the proper Rain set-up, this guy KILLS. Double Dance for tons of outrunning. Maxed Attack AND Speed, and it is subject to change Squidward (Arghonaut) (M) @ Leftovers Ability: Unaware EVs: 252 HP/32 Atk/204 Def/20 Spd Adamant nature (+Atk, -SAtk) - Substitute - Waterfall - Recover - Focus Punch I put some Speed EVs. Weird huh? I just need a little jump for mirror matches. Might replace this with a SubPunch variant Pineapple (Ludicolo) (M) @ Damp Rock Ability: Swift Swim EVs: 4 HP/252 Atk/252 Spd Adamant nature (+Atk, -SAtk) - Seed Bomb - Waterfall - Leech Seed - Rain Dance It's Spongebob's house! Dive-Seed is a real fun strategy, especially when you're faster in the Rain, but is rather easily predicted. I like how this guy is not very much affected by Electric and Grass [compared to the others], 2 of the types my team is generally weak against Overall: I got 3 Raindancers, 2 of which are most likely to sweep under the rain. I got someone to sweep even without rain. 2 Bulky Pokemon. So far, so good. Considering: Wailord [Pearl] for some bulk Kingler [Eugene Krabs] and Qwilfish [Mrs Puff] for additional powerhouses Edits:
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Last edited by ray2020; May 17th, 2009 at 5:55:16 AM. |
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Join Date: Apr 2009
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You might as well have a Kingler named Mr.Krabs.
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Join Date: Oct 2008
Posts: 3,188
kiss my ass, this is a holy site.
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As it is, I hate it.
The main thing is that your Parichisu isn't doing anything that Jolteon couldn't do. Parichisu is just terrible overall. Fidgit leads laugh at you. Replace it with Jolteon. Tentacruel's set is better done by Fidgit. You have plenty of Water attacks on your team already, and you lack Stealth Rock. I'd suggest replacing Starmie's Thunderbolt or Ice Beam with Recover and using a Life Orb. Psychic/Surf will hit most targets almost as hard once Life Orb is factored in. Just a heads-up, Ludicolo doesn't resist Grass or Electric. Oh, and Pyroak walls your whole team.
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9.9 dan likes to ramble <@Fatecrashers> im really gay <@Fatecrashers> and i might fart rainbows Last edited by Umbreon Dan; May 17th, 2009 at 2:49:23 AM. |
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Join Date: Apr 2009
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^ oh that's why i'm considering Sludge bomb... thanks for reminding me of that!
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Don't cry, little one
Join Date: Mar 2008
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1) Pachirisu is just HORRIBLE. Really, why not Azelf/Crobat/Kitsunoh/Zapdos/whatever-but-not-Pachirisu?
2)Rain teams should never waste turns. There's no reason to use Dive on Ludicolo. It only help your opponent stall you out of Rain turns 3)You need a more offensive Arghonaut variant to properly work in the rain. The SubPunch variant may work 4)With Fidgit everywhere, those Toxic Spikes are just a waste. It would be better to put Stealth Rock somewhere. It helps a lot more by virtue of Rain Dance teams offensive nature. 5)You have nothing - really nothing - to switch into a ThunderWave. Heck, you have nothing to switch into Electric attacks in general. with no defensive EV, even Ludicolo will struggle against the likes of Jolteon and Zapdos. 6)Last thing, once your Kingdra is gone, good luck fighting SkarmBliss. P.S.: If it was not clear, REMOVE PACHIRISU. It's just that bad. Sorry. |
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Join Date: Apr 2009
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^ if you read the team details, you will see why pachirisu... no offense ,and none taken for yours
made a few edits... will test this out when the CaP server is filled with people
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Last edited by ray2020; May 17th, 2009 at 6:01:52 AM. Reason: lol i'm actually researching spongebob |
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Don't cry, little one
Join Date: Mar 2008
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You say that Pachirisu is not as fast as Jolteon (which is true), but then? You simply explain how it works. Well, Jolteon, Zapdos and Jirachi (just to name some examples) can all pull off the same set - just... better. Anyway, props for putting Waterfall over Dive. Consider also Swords Dance over Leech Seed. |
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Join Date: Apr 2009
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Join Date: Apr 2009
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Well, I like the Spongebob idea, but things like this don't go well at all competitevly.
An example for this is Pachirisu. It has NO advantage over Jolteon with the set you mentioned, but you're just using it for the "Sandy" idea... You barely explained anything about each pokemon. I know its your first RMT, but thats basic... Another thing: Your team will fall against your common weaknesses. A big thing to remember when building a Rain Team is having at least 1 Grass/Electric resist (Pachi barely acts as an Electric resist with his paper defences...), while your team has none. You might consider swapping a poke for Parasect/Roserade/Magnezone/ect... They all gain something in rain (e.g: Dry Skin, Wheather Ball, less fire damage...) Hope this helps ;)
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Join Date: Jul 2008
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Pachirisu=FAIL, as it's been said, i'll repeat it anyway. Jolteon is SO much better, change it. I like the spongebob theme though, No Name is a purple jellyfish, tentacruel is not, change the name?
EDIT: Where's Gary!!!!!
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Don't cry, little one
Join Date: Mar 2008
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To sum this up: If you(I'm talking to ray2020) want your team to be taken on seriously by any rater, you have to give up on Pachirisu. |
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Join Date: Mar 2009
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I suggest you use Hydro Pump on Starmie since you are having rain set up. Hydro Pump will have 100% accuracy, you can also run Thunder if you want as well. Give it Life Orb to do deal some crazy amounts of damage.
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Join Date: Nov 2008
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good point, omastar should at least be mentioned as a possible replacement to ludicolo.
also, poliwrath=mermaid man, steelix=bull-worm, qwilfish=mrs. puff, dusknoir=the flying dutchman, swalot=bubble bass, man ray=mantine. edit @ fuzznip- since when does hydro pump get an accuracy boost in the rain? |
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Join Date: Oct 2008
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kiss my ass, this is a holy site.
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No, take Sludge Bomb off of Tentacruel. I don't care if it has STAB and helps against Pyroak, there are better ways to deal with it. Sludge Bomb is a terrible move.
Lose the Speed on Arghonaut if you're going to use a SubPuncher. Get rid of Pachirisu already. At least put a Jolteon or a Fidgit there for an electric immunity. no it won't
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Join Date: Mar 2009
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Join Date: Jan 2009
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tentacruel makes a better squidward...
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3. Have some actual words in your post beyond your six Pokemon and their moves. Not following this makes your post quite boring to read and rate. All Pokemon should have a good reason for being in your team anyway, so why not post that reason? If you are having trouble with this one, start by giving an explanation for each team member. Why are they there? What role do they serve? How do you get them in? Then, give an explanation of how you would open with the team and how you would go about using it. All of these things help people rate your team and allow us to offer more helpful advice.
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