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Please rectify me if I'm not allowed to do this, but this is a written piece. Just please PM me, or notify me rather than just deleting it so I don't have a sad face when I notice it's gone.
For those of you familiar with me, I like to tinker with the written word. For some of you, you might be interested in what I have to say about the World of Pokemon; others couldn't give less of a damn. This is for the former. Taking a serious spin on the otherwise whimsical World of Pokemon, this is a short introduction to what I intend to become an ongoing narrative to be written in my spare time (most likely updated weekly.) If you guys like this, let me know and I'll keep writing it. If not, let me know and I'll keep writing it, but not tell any of you about it! Seriously though, this is for those who asked for it and for myself. Project New Island
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FC:0046-3754-2658 Check out a dark twist on the World of Pokemon: Project New Island http://www.smogon.com/forums/showthread.php?t=85902 Last edited by Vexatious; Feb 9th, 2011 at 11:27:05 PM. |
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It should go in the 'a forum: the end is the beginning' part of SITE. That said, it's a nice little introduction story. It reminds me of the ongoing fan fiction on dragonflycave.com, but much bleaker. I think it has great potential, but you'd better move it hopscotch before a Mod comes along and deletes it!
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Glad you liked it (at least sounds that way) though! I'm going to have to check out dragonflycave now though; this is the first time I've heard of it.
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I do like it: don't worry, plus I've read your awesome warstories so I already know you have talent. Cave of the Dragonflies is a fan Pokemon site run by one 20-or-so year old. Look around in the side bar and find Fan Fiction in Creative and click on 'Quest for the Legends'. I'm sure you'll enjoy it once you get a little ways into it: it seems like your kind of thing. And not many people have heard of it. It's the site where people get those 'You are a...' personality Pokemon images.
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CAP ASB Shenanigans Pikurei Forums (12:01:01) EmeraldOx: we can be clumsybuddies ;w; |
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Hmm nice!
But the question is... What is going to happen with this??
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Join Date: Jun 2010
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Some good stuff here Vex, looks like you are really into writting :). I guess you have wrote a couple books, right?
Anyway, nice start. Im looking forward for this |
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my god if you don't have an iced tea for me when i come back i'm gonna flip
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While it isn't quite suited to fan-fiction as I believe this is (having simply skimmed it), there is a public writing thread here in Smeargle's Studio. I'm not sure that a forum is in fact suitable for this kind of thread. I think I'll take it up with whoever moved this.
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Vex finally started this? It's finally underway?
YES!
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However, you can probably expect some things from me in that topic. I'll probably drop a small piece off later today actually. Yes, it is underway. Not sure how long this is going to end up being, but I know the general direction it's going to go. As you can see, it's going to be pretty dark. I basically decided on my walk from Creative Writing Club to the Library (on campus of course) that the main character will at some point eat a Pidgey. Why? People get hungry duh. That, and I like the image of slow roasting and eating Pokemon. Mmmm If I get time, there might be another update tonight, but I have more important things to write (working on a story for my Fiction Writing class and I really need to step up my game for the teacher) ----------------------------------------------------- All in all, thanks for the interest and I hope you guys keep checking back for more updates!
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I DON'T NEED A MAN
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alch is about right
i don't know who moved this but i'm sending it back to smeargle's
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brilliant as always vex
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Readers are willing to read? You get my vote!
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UNH UNH UNH UNH
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lol this thing got kicked around the forums like a hacky sack
also keep writing goddamit im intrigued now |
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^^ word to this
MOAR
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You know, I always think it's cool when artists get interested in another's work. I find it interesting to see what the people who make it think is good.
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Updated the first post with another small carrot on a string. Hope you guys enjoy it; we still got a ways to go before this prologue is finished.
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EDIT: ECRUTEAK CITY REFERENCE MAKES FOR DAMN GOOD STORY jus' sayin' double edit: I just finished reading it. Cool story. I wanna know what happens to Nidoking though. like, now
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I'm going to make a prediction... Nidoking and Tyranitar go head on, Vex wakes up to realize that one of them are dead and then there's some funky plot twist at one point. Bad predictions are bad.
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The reason that Mewtwo could not control Tyranitar is cuz Tar is a Dark type. And you know how the type chart works.
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Wasting my money on iTunes. Every last dime...
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WRITE MOR.
Gosh Dang, I haven't read a good fan-fic in who knows how long. I love it!
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i honestly expected you to get trolled when you announced you planned something like this, and i certainly did not have high expectations about this...
..but it is surprisingly good. nice work man. |
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