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Old Feb 8th, 2011, 12:02:10 AM   #1
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Please rectify me if I'm not allowed to do this, but this is a written piece. Just please PM me, or notify me rather than just deleting it so I don't have a sad face when I notice it's gone.

For those of you familiar with me, I like to tinker with the written word. For some of you, you might be interested in what I have to say about the World of Pokemon; others couldn't give less of a damn. This is for the former.

Taking a serious spin on the otherwise whimsical World of Pokemon, this is a short introduction to what I intend to become an ongoing narrative to be written in my spare time (most likely updated weekly.) If you guys like this, let me know and I'll keep writing it. If not, let me know and I'll keep writing it, but not tell any of you about it! Seriously though, this is for those who asked for it and for myself.

Project New Island
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Old Feb 8th, 2011, 12:05:47 AM   #2
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It should go in the 'a forum: the end is the beginning' part of SITE. That said, it's a nice little introduction story. It reminds me of the ongoing fan fiction on dragonflycave.com, but much bleaker. I think it has great potential, but you'd better move it hopscotch before a Mod comes along and deletes it!
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Old Feb 8th, 2011, 12:08:22 AM   #3
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It should go in the 'a forum: the end is the beginning' part of SITE. That said, it's a nice little introduction story. It reminds me of the ongoing fan fiction on dragonflycave.com, but much bleaker. I think it has great potential, but you'd better move it hopscotch before a Mod comes along and deletes it!
EDIT: NINJA'D by a move. Disregard Smeargle's Studio

Glad you liked it (at least sounds that way) though! I'm going to have to check out dragonflycave now though; this is the first time I've heard of it.
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Old Feb 8th, 2011, 12:14:00 AM   #4
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I do like it: don't worry, plus I've read your awesome warstories so I already know you have talent. Cave of the Dragonflies is a fan Pokemon site run by one 20-or-so year old. Look around in the side bar and find Fan Fiction in Creative and click on 'Quest for the Legends'. I'm sure you'll enjoy it once you get a little ways into it: it seems like your kind of thing. And not many people have heard of it. It's the site where people get those 'You are a...' personality Pokemon images.
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Old Feb 8th, 2011, 8:17:04 AM   #5
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Hmm nice!
But the question is... What is going to happen with this??
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Old Feb 8th, 2011, 10:06:46 AM   #6
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Some good stuff here Vex, looks like you are really into writting :). I guess you have wrote a couple books, right?

Anyway, nice start. Im looking forward for this
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Old Feb 8th, 2011, 1:27:15 PM   #7
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While it isn't quite suited to fan-fiction as I believe this is (having simply skimmed it), there is a public writing thread here in Smeargle's Studio. I'm not sure that a forum is in fact suitable for this kind of thread. I think I'll take it up with whoever moved this.
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Vex finally started this? It's finally underway?

YES!
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Old Feb 8th, 2011, 3:16:38 PM   #9
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Hmm nice!
But the question is... What is going to happen with this??
It will be updated as I see fit and will become an ongoing story following the narrators struggle to survive in a post-apocalyptic Pokemon world as well as the inevitable confrontation of Mewtwo. Got plenty panned out if there are readers willing to read.

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Some good stuff here Vex, looks like you are really into writting :). I guess you have wrote a couple books, right?

Anyway, nice start. Im looking forward for this
I do enjoy it, very much so haha. I have never written anything longer than 10,000 words nor have I been published outside of my college literary magazine, but I'm hoping to change that as soon as possible (working on various short stories that I'm intending to start sending out when they're done)

Thanks! I'm looking forward to writing it.

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While it isn't quite suited to fan-fiction as I believe this is (having simply skimmed it), there is a public writing thread here in Smeargle's Studio. I'm not sure that a forum is in fact for this kind of thread. I think I'll take it up with whoever moved this.
I've been told by some Smeargles Studio, and others here (it got moved here inevitably) so I think it's safe here. The only problem is that I want to update this regularly and I'd rather not flood your topic with multiple parts of this story (I intend to merely update the original post on a set date so people can check in for it).

However, you can probably expect some things from me in that topic. I'll probably drop a small piece off later today actually.

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Vex finally started this? It's finally underway?

YES!
Yes, it is underway. Not sure how long this is going to end up being, but I know the general direction it's going to go. As you can see, it's going to be pretty dark. I basically decided on my walk from Creative Writing Club to the Library (on campus of course) that the main character will at some point eat a Pidgey. Why? People get hungry duh. That, and I like the image of slow roasting and eating Pokemon. Mmmm

If I get time, there might be another update tonight, but I have more important things to write (working on a story for my Fiction Writing class and I really need to step up my game for the teacher)

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All in all, thanks for the interest and I hope you guys keep checking back for more updates!
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Old Feb 8th, 2011, 3:36:23 PM   #10
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alch is about right

i don't know who moved this but i'm sending it back to smeargle's
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Old Feb 8th, 2011, 5:03:17 PM   #11
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brilliant as always vex
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Old Feb 9th, 2011, 1:41:06 AM   #12
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Readers are willing to read? You get my vote!
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Old Feb 9th, 2011, 2:06:15 AM   #13
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lol this thing got kicked around the forums like a hacky sack

also keep writing goddamit im intrigued now
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Old Feb 9th, 2011, 7:16:59 PM   #14
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^^ word to this

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lol this thing got kicked around the forums like a hacky sack

also keep writing goddamit im intrigued now
It's been kicked almost as much as a really good troll.

You know, I always think it's cool when artists get interested in another's work. I find it interesting to see what the people who make it think is good.
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Updated the first post with another small carrot on a string. Hope you guys enjoy it; we still got a ways to go before this prologue is finished.
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Updated the first post with another small carrot on a string. Hope you guys enjoy it; we still got a ways to go before this prologue is finished.
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EDIT: ECRUTEAK CITY REFERENCE MAKES FOR DAMN GOOD STORY jus' sayin'

double edit: I just finished reading it. Cool story. I wanna know what happens to Nidoking though. like, now
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The floor began to shake apart; large fissures ran from Nidoking, surrounding him and myself, before it all gave way. My body was a rag doll with no ground upon which to stand. Every floor collapsed under his weight as he tumbled down, bringing the building with him. Five floors we fell, each one worse than the last. My mind was racing, my vision blurry. I saw men running into the destruction; I felt them pulling at me, dragging me away. I saw a Tyranitar locked claw in claw with a Nidoking.

I saw blackness.
Intense stuff right here.

I'm going to make a prediction...

Nidoking and Tyranitar go head on, Vex wakes up to realize that one of them are dead and then there's some funky plot twist at one point.


Bad predictions are bad.
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The reason that Mewtwo could not control Tyranitar is cuz Tar is a Dark type. And you know how the type chart works.
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WRITE MOR.

Gosh Dang, I haven't read a good fan-fic in who knows how long. I love it!
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i honestly expected you to get trolled when you announced you planned something like this, and i certainly did not have high expectations about this...

..but it is surprisingly good. nice work man.
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