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First, from a GP standpoint, good job. ![]() 2/2 That being said, as a common Smogon user, I can't ignore that this analysis is in sore need of an update-- it is painfully out of touch with the BW metagame. It really sounds like a 4th Gen Analysis. Some important points: FERROTHORN, FERROTHORN, FERROTHORN!!!!! Ferrothorn is the ultimate "Fuck-You" GF released against bulky waters, and that includes Swampert-- and badly needs emphasis here. Ferrothorn switches in with impunity (yes, even against Earthquake) into Swampert and sets up Spikes/SR without a care. While Swampert will always be forced out against Ferrothorn, Ferrothorn can use every chance it has to come in to litter the field with painfully game-altering hazards. Thus, simply having Swampert on your team can be a crippling liability. Yes, Grass Attacks are easy to cover and switch into, but that's completely irrelevant when the enemy is setting up hazards instead. Ferrothorn should have its own paragraph under "counters," and another paragraph under "teammates" when discussing how to cover Swampert's weaknesses-- among which Ferrothorn is the most notable. HP Fire Zone to trap and kill, or other Water types like Rotom-W or Starmie + Hidden Power Fire as a lure-and-kill-Ferrothorn need mentions in teammates. Heck, with 80 Sp.A available, HP Fire should probably get a mention in other options for Swampert itself. HP Fire Starmie deserves special mention not only for killing Ferrothorn, but also for spinning away Ferrothorn's hazards. You may notice that this is not discussing Pokemon that take advantage of Swampert's help well, but rather Pokemon that can go some ways to fix Swampert's (big) short-coming. Ferrothorn could probably be cited as the greatest factor in Swampert's becoming a UU Pokemon in BW. Stop mentioning "generic Grass-types" as Swamperts biggest threat. Celebi and Shaymin? It'll be a miracle if either makes the OU list. If it's not named Ferrothorn (and possibly Breloom, which didn't get a single mention) it is not a particularly relevant OU Grass type (outside of weather abusers like Venusaur and Ludicolo). Generic non-weather Grass Type + Hidden Power Fire is NOT a very common sight in BW OU. I could go on, but overall, I think you get the picture-- this analysis is well written and the sets themselves represent Swampert's best options, but the commentary could definitely be better written to be in-tune with the real BW metagame. In any case, Swampert is not a particularly relevant OU threat, and it is clear that a lot of work has already been put into this, so it's probably best to let it go for now-- this did pass QC afterall. I'm just mentioning this to note that this badly needs an update (insofar as it's important for us to have an up to date Swampert Analysis). Last edited by Chou Toshio; Mar 23rd, 2011 at 10:23:31 PM. |
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Honestly, I think Boiling Water is a better move for a Swampert than HP Fire even if there is a Ferrothorn on the other team. What if it's a rain team? HP Fire will do nothing!!! At least you can take advantage of the obvious switch in and burn in/switch instead of doing like 20%. Not to mention Forretress just happens to take advantage of Ferrothorn almost perfectly and is a great partner to Swampert.
CB Hammer Arm lets you easily outrun a 2HKO any Natt. Earthquake actually gets the specially defensive ones in 2 hits. Please don't blow Ferrothorn out of proportion. Sweepers like Excadrill, Landorus, Terrakion, Volcarona, Blaziken etc. etc. etc. are the bigger threats and Swampert can no longer stop them, Quagsire, Slowbro, and Gastrodon together outclass the tank entirely with the exception of learning Stealth Rock. Choice Band is still great, as it actually lets you suprise common switch ins who forget about base 110 attack. |
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This writeup still seems to sell Swampert's flaws in the current metagame short. It doesn't explain why nobody's using Swampert any more, and seems to imply that it's because Ferrothorn does the same job better. If that's the case you're trying to make, it could use a bit more detail than a half-sentence in the introduction.
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I dunno, I just think the write-up could do with expansion in places, and removing the obvious stuff in others, to keep the length good. For example: Quote:
Also, I'd expand on the Ferrothorn point in the Overview, saying that whilst Swampert is a decent utility/support Pokemon in theory, he actually often does the opposite of what is meant, because he will often invite opposing common support Pokemon in to do their thing - Pokemon like Ferrothorn and Skarmory which can support the opponent's team, which actually makes Swampert somewhat do the opposite of attempting to support the team. This means that it is often better to look at other options that have either more to do in their turns, or alternatively invite these Pokemon in less. There just seems to be a few inaccuracies in the way Swampert handles things. But honestly, I think you have a really solid read that can start to move towards being perfected (remember that some of the sections have been changed!), I genuinely think this is looking good. Cool job.
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Yes, I wrote this quite a while ago before I actually got into the B/W competitive scene and there is alot that can be added/removed.It will be rewritten then I will ask a GP member to do one last check. Thanks alot all of you for your input.
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Boiling water is now called scald. Be sure to update names of moves and pokemon.
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With SOMALIA gone, this is up for grabs. If no one's interested... I guess I can write it.
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I'll bite off your kneecaps if I ever see a super long post or wall of text. Seriously.
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Not going to keep SOMALIA's writing? I mean, sure, by all means go ahead, and I guess we should tweak it to the current metagame.
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Wait, I'm confused. Why are we even suggesting Hammer Arm when Superpower exists? Superpower is only slightly weaker over two turns (200 base power vs. 199.2 base power, do the calcs), and boasts 100% accuracy at that and doesn't make Swampert slower than Chansey after its first use.
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Hydro Pump Ice Beam Superpower Stealth Rock EDIT: So for an EV spread for this thing, Brave - 252 HP / 56 Atk / 200 Def 2HKOs Ferrothorn with Superpower with SR and 2 layers of spikes. Though most of the time, you just need to deter it. That spread keeps 404 HP and 266 Def, and will deal 50% minimum to Ferrothorn with the first Superpower, aka the bastard is only coming in on you once. The standard mixpert spread of 252 HP / 216 Def / 40 SpA, Relaxed, will do 44% minimum, but you can keep the same damage output as the first spread if you switch to Expert Belt (53% minimum). Losing Leftovers probably isn't worth that tho. Something along those lines I forget the EV spread. Superpower / Hammer Arm should be standard on ALL Swampert for 2 reasons... 1) Ferrothorn 2) Balloon fuckery is everywhere. With a Water / Fighting replacement moves, you don't lose coverage against Heatran / Dory / or any of the other Earthquake targets. So while standard Mixpert is always the same, I strongly recommend moving Swampert up to speed with the times. Also, Scald is ill-advised on Swampert IMO. Swampert needs the power. Not OHKOing Dory defeats the purpose of even using Pert, and pert doesn't have the time or recovery to be fucking around with Burn chances. It makes MUCH more sense on Slowbro, Milotic, and Vaporeon because they actually recover worth a damn. Not only that, Hydro Pump sends a big fuck you to Skarmory, 2HKOing with no investment. If you wanna be cute, put Swampert on a Rain team and just blast through the steel bird's futile roosting attempts
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I think the biggest problem with Superpower isn't the Attack cut overall, but the Def cut is pretty noticeable and can force Swampert out. Swampert takes >65% from Tyrantar's Choice Band Crunch for example, so if it isn't in full health it's either forced out or likely dead.
@AG: Just minor update tweaking / pushing through GP is what I mean.
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most specs users cant take hits SPECSPERT CAN !!!!!
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slowbro can take even more of a beating than pert with regenerator, higher spa, and has a higher spcial attack. other notable water types that can run specs better are gastrodon, vaporeon (not common but better than specs pert), rotomw. most of these are of equal bulk and hit harder than pert. also, not to be offensive, but running a bad set as a surprise isnt norally considered viable |
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