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Old Aug 3rd, 2011, 11:16:06 PM   #376
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23:09 Tortferngatr 1. You need proper ability descriptions on each of your mons Check
23:09 amir (Vader) where do i get those
23:09 Tortferngatr The Data Audit thread
23:09 Tortferngatr 2. You need proper type descriptions You only need the summaries, but good job.
23:10 Tortferngatr Again, Data Audit thread
23:10 Tortferngatr 3. Why does Caterpie have base 91 speed??? Check, fixed.
23:10 amir o
23:10 amir should be 45
23:10 amir lol
23:11 Tortferngatr 4. If you have a Pokemon that can't breed but gets TMs, they get an additional three levelup moves above level 25. Check
23:12 Tortferngatr 5. Use Rotom's normal sprite, you switch formes by going to an arena with the appliance you want. Check
23:13 Tortferngatr 6. Put 0/5 in front of Caterpie's EC and DC.
23:13 Tortferngatr 7. specify what your natures do (Check)
23:13 amir why cant i have that sprite o_O
23:13 Tortferngatr MC should read 0 on all your mons
23:14 Tortferngatr Mostly just preference.
23:14 Tortferngatr and to avoid confusion over which forme it's in.
23:14 Lou it really should feature just the forme you're currently in
23:14 Lou caterpie's sprite is fine; though
23:14 Tortferngatr yeah.

General comprehensive list of what needs fixing. As I'm doing this unofficially (actual reviewers can critique further), I don't claim anything.
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Old Aug 3rd, 2011, 11:29:52 PM   #377
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Also, fwiw, you can't have those items in your Backpack, as they do not exist in ASB. The only items that can be listed there are items acquired in the prize claiming thread or RPs. That means you should delete them from your profile.
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Old Aug 3rd, 2011, 11:30:50 PM   #378
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23:09 Tortferngatr 1. You need proper ability descriptions on each of your mons Check
23:09 amir (Vader) where do i get those
23:09 Tortferngatr The Data Audit thread
23:09 Tortferngatr 2. You need proper type descriptions You only need the summaries, but good job.
23:10 Tortferngatr Again, Data Audit thread
23:10 Tortferngatr 3. Why does Caterpie have base 91 speed??? Check, fixed.
23:10 amir o
23:10 amir should be 45
23:10 amir lol
23:11 Tortferngatr 4. If you have a Pokemon that can't breed but gets TMs, they get an additional three levelup moves above level 25. Check
23:12 Tortferngatr 5. Use Rotom's normal sprite, you switch formes by going to an arena with the appliance you want. Check
23:13 Tortferngatr 6. Put 0/5 in front of Caterpie's EC and DC.
23:13 Tortferngatr 7. specify what your natures do (Check)
23:13 amir why cant i have that sprite o_O
23:13 Tortferngatr MC should read 0 on all your mons
23:14 Tortferngatr Mostly just preference.
23:14 Tortferngatr and to avoid confusion over which forme it's in.
23:14 Lou it really should feature just the forme you're currently in
23:14 Lou caterpie's sprite is fine; though
23:14 Tortferngatr yeah.

General comprehensive list of what needs fixing. As I'm doing this unofficially (actual reviewers can critique further), I don't claim anything.
All this is true, but note that since you don't have an appliance yet, Rotom is going to be in its ordinary Electric/Ghost typing and have those STAB descriptions. You can pick up appliances later, I'm still working on broader availability but for now the easiest way is through an arena that's a junkyard or whatever, something where it might be plausible to find.
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Old Aug 3rd, 2011, 11:33:39 PM   #379
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is it approvable now ?_?

edit: i removed all my sweet items
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Old Aug 4th, 2011, 4:03:20 PM   #380
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Vader: APPROVED - Welcome (finally!) to ASB!

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Old Aug 6th, 2011, 1:59:16 AM   #381
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Old Aug 6th, 2011, 2:04:03 AM   #382
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Not Approved. Because so many people have done started with them, the Teddiursa/Dratini/Pawniard team has been banished to the ASB Uber Tire. Please try again later.

Edit: @Rediamond, what do you mean, "please stop pretending you can approve"? This is the only time that I have done so, and I thought it would be obvious since one would normally have to read the OP to start, and the OP has a list of approvers. All that quite apart from the fact that I'm mentioning the Uber Tire as an approver, which doesn't make any sense. Long story short, it should've been very obvious that I couldn't approve; besides, this was done for lolz since three people have joined with the exact same team, down to the natures and moves. I'm sorry if you took it seriously.

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Old Aug 6th, 2011, 2:06:35 AM   #383
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shouldn't we suspect test them before banishing them to the uber tire?
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Old Aug 6th, 2011, 2:14:29 AM   #384
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Old Aug 6th, 2011, 2:15:43 AM   #385
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Are you sure that tire is big enough to fit all three of those Pokemon in it?
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Old Aug 6th, 2011, 4:28:16 AM   #386
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Terrador, please stop pretending you can approve. And ASB has yet to ban anything, as doing so violates several game principles. Reserving the above two posts for approval.

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BlueCookies: Go to the data audit thread, scroll down to speed, check +speed natures
Teddiursa gets +8 accuracy.
Fix that, and approved
Huy: Go to the Data Audit thread and see how natures work. As for the natures you have, they should change stats to:
Cubone: 3 attack, 1 special attack
Rufflet: 1 special attack, 69 speed, +18 accuracy on all attacks

Also, all abilities, even Dream World ones, should be listed, and Klang should have an EC of 0/9

Not Approved
Fix those things and I'll look back over it in the morning.
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Old Aug 6th, 2011, 5:13:16 AM   #387
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Old Aug 6th, 2011, 5:23:01 AM   #388
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Old Aug 6th, 2011, 6:43:41 AM   #389
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Old Aug 7th, 2011, 2:50:17 AM   #390
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Old Aug 7th, 2011, 6:02:52 AM   #391
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DukeTheDevil: approved
Sprite goes above name though for the Natu
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Old Aug 7th, 2011, 12:37:58 PM   #392
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Old Aug 11th, 2011, 2:23:56 AM   #393
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Old Aug 11th, 2011, 1:59:13 PM   #394
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Penguin: Round up when using +Speed natures (Diglett gets 110 Speed). Gible has 2 SpAtt. Fix these and you'll be Approved.

Agent: You can add Giga Drain to Embirch's movepool. You have a blank "Fire:" underneath Embirch's types. Mark Sheer Force as Cranidos' DW Ability. You have the description for Sheer Force as the description for Mold Breaker. Not Approved until these are fixed. Looks good now, Approved.

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Old Aug 11th, 2011, 9:59:20 PM   #395
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Old Aug 16th, 2011, 12:53:18 PM   #397
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blastoiseboy19, a few minor things:
-Squirtle's MC should just be 0, not 0/0
-Ralts's speed should be 34, not 33 (40/1.15 = 34.7, which then rounds down due to the -speed nature)
-Ralts can add Calm Mind to its level-up movepool; he gets it at level 23 in Gen 4 and 21 in Gen 3
APPROVED provided these things are changed.

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Old Aug 19th, 2011, 2:34:45 AM   #398
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Old Aug 19th, 2011, 12:00:05 PM   #399
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Chris, a few things:
-Nidoran M's speed should be 50, not 41
-You have Horn Attack listed twice in your level-up moves (not a huge deal but I thought I'd point it out anyway)
-Blitzle already knows Thunder Wave by level-up but you're using one of your TM slots to relearn it, you should change that to another TM
-Your Pokemon need to add the weight and size classes to their stats, you can find them in the Data Audit thread in the Stat and Rarity List along with the other stats
Also Piplup's accuracy boost is 7, you round to the nearest whole number.
Alright, all fixed now, APPROVED. Welcome to ASB!

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