Standard Team Eval

[Dolgaris]

So kinda been lurking for a bit on the forums, mainly just looking up info. But I though I should make an appearance and have show what guys I have for team battles. And maybe a few pointers can be tossed in my direction... :)

My starters are Krookodile and Elektross, my wall is Ferrothorn, and my special sweeper is Glaceon.

I don't reall have any of the kool-kid items, but I do have some important ones for most of my team.

Krookodile
Nature: Lonely
Ability: Intimidate
Item: Razor Claw
Move-set:
Dragon Tail
EQ
Toxic
Protect

Eelektross
Ability: Levitate
Nature: Naughty
Item: Razor Fang
Move-set:
Thunderbolt
Thunder Wave
Rockslide
Flamethrower

Ferrothorn
Ability: Iron Barbs
Nature: Sassy
Item: Rocky Helm
Move-set:
Iron Defense
Iron Head
Ingrain
Power Whip

Glaceon
Ability: Snow Cloak
Nature Modest
Item: Bright powder
Move-set:
Ice Beam
Frost Breath
Hail
Protect

[Maloman]

you need 6 pokemon and a full description of the pokemons purpose on the team and the moves purposes

[franky]

Problems: Violating rule 2 and 3

2. Do not post incomplete teams. If you are smart enough to pick five Pokemon, you can easily pick another one. If you are smart enough to pick nine, you can easily cut that down to six. Make sure to include natures, EV spreads and items. If you are unsure of your selections, make a note of this or simply add a question mark after them so team raters can help you focus on perceived problems first.

3. Have some actual words in your post beyond your six Pokemon and their moves. Not following this makes your post quite boring to read and rate. All Pokemon should have a good reason for being in your team anyway, so why not post that reason? If you are having trouble with this one, start by giving an explanation for each team member. Why are they there? What role do they serve? How do you get them in? Then, give an explanation of how you would open with the team and how you would go about using it. All of these things help people rate your team and allow us to offer more helpful advice.

Solution: Fix problems then PM/VM me and ill re-open