Team Rocket Steals a Legendary Pokemon! [Themed Warstory] - Page 3

Sy123 · Mar 1st, 2011, 3:59:23 AM

9.5/10
Props:
-Being Team Rocket
-Being true to them
-Funny, original, and didnt lose its charm halfway through
-Props for using Meowth, Victreebel, Arbok and Licitung

Things to improve:
-This guy was high on scented Golbat dung, get a better opponent, and I guarentee, I will give it a 12/10

Good job

SJCrew · Mar 1st, 2011, 4:54:39 AM

rofl

I feel like I'm 8 years old again.

***Jibaku**** · Mar 1st, 2011, 10:27:16 AM

Man the battle was bad but the commentary and theme is so top notch I can't really stop laughing at this.

9/10

yoshinator879 · Mar 2nd, 2011, 9:10:12 PM

lol, do a real warstory next time.
Format: 7/10
Battle: 1/10
Comments/Idea: 7/10 Great! Almost no comments though

average: 5.5/10-ish FUN

GMLW · Mar 2nd, 2011, 9:22:14 PM

Hahaha, the battle was terrible but the commentary totally made up for it. Nice warstory!

8/10

Juice! · Mar 6th, 2011, 7:24:11 PM

Basically everything that everyone else said. Your opponent was awful, and the battle wasn't very good, but Team Rocket theme was awesome, and the dialogue was funny, I could actually hear all their voices. xD I enjoyed it, especially since I'm a huge fan of theme teams. I'll give you 8/10, it was definitely worth the read. =)

-Terywj- · Mar 6th, 2011, 8:35:26 PM

I liked the commentary / flavor a lot! Nice job. =)

SuperChillarmy · Mar 15th, 2011, 12:18:17 AM

You should do a gym leader vs. gym leader battle...... that would be really cool.

Megamence123 · Jun 25th, 2011, 10:27:38 PM

ROTFLSHMSFOAIDMT! All jokes aside, very funny. Bad plays and no rules, but who cares? It's Team Rocket! Write another one soon!
8.5/10 (only because of Wobbuffet AND Lickitung)
Keep up the good work!

waterwarrior · Jun 26th, 2011, 4:55:13 PM

I loved this so much. However, I think it would be better if TR got its ass kicked yet again, just extra-horribly because the opponent wasn't a noob like Ash. Still great, 8/10

wacky tabaky · Jun 27th, 2011, 4:27:16 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Fat Karpi

Any suggestions for what theme I should do next? :)

Ash's gen 1 team or an eeveelution team without glaceon because stat wise it is bad.

Great warstory first time team rocket did something good. Loved the commentary 8.5/10

Darthenos · Jun 28th, 2011, 9:33:51 AM

Let me say some things. First off, your opponent was pretty bad, but I loved, and I mean loved, your commentary. You sstuck to the characters to a T and I just loved it. This was very creative.

Oblivion IX · Jun 28th, 2011, 5:39:13 PM

The amusing commentary certainly made up for the fact that both your opponent and the match were awful. Got to love those UBERs and that Hyper Beam Lucario! Quite an interesting read.

7/10

corncake22 · Nov 14th, 2011, 12:48:48 AM

Lmao I expected you to lose and say something like we're blasting off again! Or whatever the exact words when they get blasted away, but good Warstory I give it a 7/10. Your opponent was awful.

Woodchuck · Nov 14th, 2011, 12:59:13 AM

lmao i expected you to actually do a fun bump! or whatever the exact things people say when they revive old threads
overall i give it a 3/10 this bump was awful
...
I do like the warstory though :X

ReshiramBlackZekromWhite · Nov 16th, 2011, 12:18:13 AM

trololololol the ubers player was dumb as ... ... something really dumb.

Yamata no Orochi · Nov 17th, 2011, 6:18:55 PM

This is just hilarious, how could you lose while having ubers and fighting that kind of team? 9/10

jessifer · Nov 17th, 2011, 7:04:46 PM

This has to be the funniest warstory ever. 9/10

Lady Salamence · Nov 17th, 2011, 7:17:14 PM

Goddamit amazing
9/10
-1 point for hyper beam and hax

The Goddamn Batman · Nov 17th, 2011, 7:29:47 PM

Hilarious, i love themed warstories :) Also, i think it would be really interesting to see a gym leader themed team, maybe Brock?

mostwanted · Nov 17th, 2011, 7:35:51 PM

lmfaoo this warstory is too funny. 9/10

Lesser Smaug · Nov 17th, 2011, 8:16:06 PM

I remember battling Team Rocket Trio before. This has some awesome commentary (Victreebel is killed by Pikachu in one hit), but the battle itself was meh. I mean, who the hell slaps Focus Blast and Hyper Beam on a Lucario?

StruggleSweep · Nov 18th, 2011, 12:04:31 PM

Though your opponet was horrible and you had some really lucky hax against Rayquaza, I fiund myself actually laughing out loud over this. I give your warstory a 6.5/10

Mar 1st, 2011, 4:54:39 AM	#52
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Mar 1st, 2011, 10:27:16 AM	#53
*Jibaku [02:06] <DixieNormous> Rodan x pookar: Just Do It Super Moderator** Join Date: Dec 2005 Posts: 5,909 Foursquare, a sprained ankle, bottlecap ninjas, and wallball	Man the battle was bad but the commentary and theme is so top notch I can't really stop laughing at this. 9/10 __________________

Mar 6th, 2011, 7:24:11 PM	#56
Juice! Join Date: Sep 2010 Posts: 237 Central HQ	Basically everything that everyone else said. Your opponent was awful, and the battle wasn't very good, but Team Rocket theme was awesome, and the dialogue was funny, I could actually hear all their voices. xD I enjoyed it, especially since I'm a huge fan of theme teams. I'll give you 8/10, it was definitely worth the read. =) __________________ I'VE GOT A POCKETFUL OF SUNSHINE. A Day at the Beach (My UU Warstory) *The Juice!* is loose!**

Mar 6th, 2011, 8:35:26 PM	#57
-Terywj- Join Date: Sep 2008 Posts: 564 Hong Kong	I liked the commentary / flavor a lot! Nice job. =) __________________ "Terywj's Youtube--Tetris, Team Fortress 2, and more!

Jun 25th, 2011, 10:27:38 PM	#59
Megamence123 Join Date: Oct 2010 Posts: 29 Near Disneyland	ROTFLSHMSFOAIDMT! All jokes aside, very funny. Bad plays and no rules, but who cares? It's Team Rocket! Write another one soon! 8.5/10 (only because of Wobbuffet AND Lickitung) Keep up the good work! __________________ EV Trainer? IV Checker? Cloner? Send me a message.

Mar 1st, 2011, 3:59:23 AM	#51
Sy123 Join Date: Dec 2009 Posts: 1,034 Orbiting the Sun	9.5/10 Props: -Being Team Rocket -Being true to them -Funny, original, and didnt lose its charm halfway through -Props for using Meowth, Victreebel, Arbok and Licitung Things to improve: -This guy was high on scented Golbat dung, get a better opponent, and I guarentee, I will give it a 12/10 Good job

Mar 2nd, 2011, 9:10:12 PM	#54
yoshinator879 Join Date: Oct 2010 Posts: 55	lol, do a real warstory next time. Format: 7/10 Battle: 1/10 Comments/Idea: 7/10 Great! Almost no comments though average: 5.5/10-ish FUN

Mar 2nd, 2011, 9:22:14 PM	#55
GMLW Join Date: Dec 2009 Posts: 874 ALL GLORY TO THE HYPNOTOAD	Hahaha, the battle was terrible but the commentary totally made up for it. Nice warstory! 8/10

Mar 15th, 2011, 12:18:17 AM	#58
SuperChillarmy Join Date: Nov 2010 Posts: 99	You should do a gym leader vs. gym leader battle...... that would be really cool.

Jun 26th, 2011, 4:55:13 PM	#60
waterwarrior Join Date: Oct 2010 Posts: 4,635 FREAKING UNICORNS ON FREAKING RAINBOWS	I loved this so much. However, I think it would be better if TR got its ass kicked yet again, just extra-horribly because the opponent wasn't a noob like Ash. Still great, 8/10 __________________ CAP ASB <Engineer> dw you should come to america <Engineer> where you can eat burgers and get fat <Destiny_Warrior> 9.9 engi * kingofburgerz [~cgiirc@synIRC-43958468.hsd1.co.comcast.net] has joined #capasb**

Jun 28th, 2011, 9:33:51 AM	#62
Darthenos Join Date: Apr 2011 Posts: 91 Ya tebya lyublyu Nichola	Let me say some things. First off, your opponent was pretty bad, but I loved, and I mean loved, your commentary. You sstuck to the characters to a T and I just loved it. This was very creative. __________________ [20:35:44] Mekkah: childeren in the backseats cause accidents [20:35:51] Mekkah: accidents on the backseat cause childeren

Jun 28th, 2011, 5:39:13 PM	#63
Oblivion IX Join Date: May 2011 Posts: 140	The amusing commentary certainly made up for the fact that both your opponent and the match were awful. Got to love those UBERs and that Hyper Beam Lucario! Quite an interesting read. 7/10

Nov 14th, 2011, 12:48:48 AM	#64
corncake22 Join Date: Jul 2009 Posts: 73 Behind your house.	Lmao I expected you to lose and say something like we're blasting off again! Or whatever the exact words when they get blasted away, but good Warstory I give it a 7/10. Your opponent was awful. __________________ Add me on MSN? Kevinpoopeats@live.com http://i838.photobucket.com/albums/z...u2ndTKDsig.jpg

Nov 14th, 2011, 12:59:13 AM	#65
Woodchuck <Feranfell> punbot irl aka virginity protector Join Date: May 2010 Posts: 1,648 us best	lmao i expected you to actually do a fun bump! or whatever the exact things people say when they revive old threads overall i give it a 3/10 this bump was awful ... I do like the warstory though :X __________________

Nov 16th, 2011, 12:18:13 AM	#66
ReshiramBlackZekromWhite Join Date: Aug 2011 Posts: 92 Remembering the OLDEN DAYS where you could use Amnesia to make Mewtwo's Special stat 999.	trololololol the ubers player was dumb as ... ... something really dumb. __________________ SCRAMBLE CHALLANGES: WHITE SOLO \| PLATINUM \| SOULSILVER CHIA!! The Answer to an Unspoken Question ^ You need Facebook to view. Like my page!^

Nov 17th, 2011, 6:18:55 PM	#67
Yamata no Orochi http://pastebin.com/s3p3efrV Join Date: May 2011 Posts: 258	This is just hilarious, how could you lose while having ubers and fighting that kind of team? 9/10 __________________ Loli Hadron Collider

Nov 17th, 2011, 7:04:46 PM	#68
jessifer Join Date: Sep 2011 Posts: 271 A magical place~	This has to be the funniest warstory ever. 9/10 __________________ RMTs: Sun-OU RMT * Rain-Ubers RMT * Hazards-OU RMT Art Thread

Nov 17th, 2011, 7:17:14 PM	#69
Lady Salamence radda radda Join Date: Aug 2010 Posts: 2,279 ROFL ROFL ROFL	Goddamit amazing 9/10 -1 point for hyper beam and hax __________________ oh dear [sigpic] broke

Nov 17th, 2011, 7:29:47 PM	#70
The Goddamn Batman Join Date: Nov 2011 Posts: 99 Connecticut	Hilarious, i love themed warstories :) Also, i think it would be really interesting to see a gym leader themed team, maybe Brock?

Nov 17th, 2011, 7:35:51 PM	#71
mostwanted Join Date: Jul 2011 Posts: 938	lmfaoo this warstory is too funny. 9/10

Nov 17th, 2011, 8:16:06 PM	#72
Lesser Smaug Join Date: Nov 2011 Posts: 148 Why Everyone Ignores:	I remember battling Team Rocket Trio before. This has some awesome commentary (Victreebel is killed by Pikachu in one hit), but the battle itself was meh. I mean, who the hell slaps Focus Blast and Hyper Beam on a Lucario? __________________ Absolutely stupid and pointless Pastebin account

Nov 18th, 2011, 12:04:31 PM	#73
StruggleSweep Join Date: Oct 2011 Posts: 47 West Virginia	Though your opponet was horrible and you had some really lucky hax against Rayquaza, I fiund myself actually laughing out loud over this. I give your warstory a 6.5/10 __________________