(Archive) Small Objective Changes Thread - Page 61

Queen Kyurem · Sep 23rd, 2011, 9:34:13 AM

@above: Sorry, that was Nasty Plot. Not MixApe.

Queen Kyurem · Sep 23rd, 2011, 9:36:58 AM

http://www.smogon.com/bw/pokemon/vaporeon

Checks and Counters:
as he can use Leech Seed which, in conjunction with Vaporeon's massive HP stat, will heal huge amounts of damage he may have taken.

I think there should be a comma there.

Shining Kestral · Sep 23rd, 2011, 11:22:52 AM

http://www.smogon.com/bw/pokemon/giratina

Boosting Tank section:

"After a Calm Mind, it is practically impossible to OHKO Giratina with any attack; even a Choice Band-boosted Outrage from Adamant Zekrom) fails to do so due to its sheer base defensive stats."

There is a lone parenthesis after Zekrom that should be removed.

barry4ever · Sep 23rd, 2011, 12:50:04 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Fat Queen Kyurem

http://www.smogon.com/bw/pokemon/infernape

Under Swords Dance:
"The recommended EVs are very straightforward: maximum Attack and Speed investments maximize Infernape's offensive potential, and the remaining 4 EVs are thrown into HP."

The spread listed is 4 SpD EVs, not 4 HP.

Under Mixed Attacker:
"four-move -slot"

I'm not sure if it's moveslot (as I've seen it stylized) or move-slot, but the extra space should go.

Fixed both.

Quote:

Originally Posted by Fat Queen Kyurem

Also under MixApe:
"maximizes Infernape's Speed stat , allowing it to"
Extra space before the comma.

Okay Fixed.

Quote:

Originally Posted by Fat Queen Kyurem

@above: Sorry, that was Nasty Plot. Not MixApe.

Quote:

Originally Posted by Fat Queen Kyurem

http://www.smogon.com/bw/pokemon/vaporeon

Checks and Counters:
as he can use Leech Seed which, in conjunction with Vaporeon's massive HP stat, will heal huge amounts of damage he may have taken.

I think there should be a comma there.

I think this is wrong actually but I'm rather unsure so I won't touch it.

Quote:

Originally Posted by Fat Shining Kestral

http://www.smogon.com/bw/pokemon/giratina

Boosting Tank section:

"After a Calm Mind, it is practically impossible to OHKO Giratina with any attack; even a Choice Band-boosted Outrage from Adamant Zekrom) fails to do so due to its sheer base defensive stats."

There is a lone parenthesis after Zekrom that should be removed.

Fixed

barry4ever · Sep 23rd, 2011, 12:54:44 PM

Quote:

I think this is wrong actually but I'm rather unsure so I won't touch it.

I was actually wrong there, I fixed it. Thanks Queen Kyurem !

Professor Lamb · Sep 23rd, 2011, 4:48:01 PM

http://www.smogon.com/bw/articles/bw_gravity

In the "Gravity Users" section, in the analysis for Forretress, the word "get" is repeated, probably as a result of a typo.

Quote:

Originally Posted by Fat Generation V Guide to Gravity

This is really useful, as Forretress can set up Gravity then Volt Switch out, using its defensive stats as a shield to get get your next Pokemon in safely, ready to abuse Gravity.

There should be only one "get."

Also, in the same article, in the section "Team Building" and the subsection "Defensive Teams," there is a comma which is not followed by a space.

Quote:

Originally Posted by Fat Generation V Guide to Gravity

Hippowdon can use its massive bulk to check the many physical sweepers in BW,such as Excadrill.

There should be a space after the comma after "BW."

In addition, in the same article, in the section "Team Building" and the subsection "Offensive / Balanced Teams," there are two words without a space between them.

Quote:

Originally Posted by Fat Generation V Guide to Gravity

Toxic also helps weaken opposing weather inducers such as Ninetales and Politoed, letting youcontrol the weather.

There should be a space between the words "you" and "control."

Professor Lamb · Sep 23rd, 2011, 4:52:27 PM

Oh, and here's another one in the same article:

Quote:

Originally Posted by Fat Generation V Guide to Gravity

As a Fire-type, Heatran also serves as an excellent check to Pokemon such as Scizor and Celebithat can cause problems for this team.

There should be a space between "Celebi" and "that."

Professor Lamb · Sep 23rd, 2011, 4:55:33 PM

Another one in the same article:

Quote:

Originally Posted by Fat Generation V Guide to Gravity

Sandstorm also helps shut down any opposing Pokemon that might try and change the weather—once they have been sufficiently weakened,a Choice Band Pursuit can often cripple them enough to prevent them from switching in again.

There should be a space after the comma after "weakened."

~~Fried Rhys~~ · Sep 23rd, 2011, 5:26:10 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Fat Professor Lamb

http://www.smogon.com/bw/articles/bw_gravity

In the "Gravity Users" section, in the analysis for Forretress, the word "get" is repeated, probably as a result of a typo.

fixed

Quote:

Also, in the same article, in the section "Team Building" and the subsection "Defensive Teams," there is a comma which is not followed by a space.

fixed

Quote:

In addition, in the same article, in the section "Team Building" and the subsection "Offensive / Balanced Teams," there are two words without a space between them.

fixed

Quote:

There should be a space between "Celebi" and "that."

fixed

Quote:

There should be a space after the comma after "weakened."

fixed

Professor Lamb · Sep 23rd, 2011, 5:48:27 PM

Alright, well here are a few more in the same article.

Quote:

Originally Posted by Fat Generation V Guide to Gravity

Durant has great Attack,Defense, and Speed stats, but the remainder of its stats are well below average, which means that it may require some careful prediction to get in safely.

There should be a space after the comma.

Quote:

Originally Posted by Fat Generation V Guide to Gravity

Eviolite boosts theDefense and Special Defense of NFE Pokemon by 50% each, and withDusclops's already impressive defenses, makes it exceptionally hard to take down. Those impressivedefenses let it switch in on Excadrill, one of the best Rapid Spinners in the game, survive two Earthquakes, and then use Pain Split to heal its health.

There should be a space between the words "the" and "Defense," "with" and "Dusclop's," and "impressive" and "defenses."

Quote:

Originally Posted by Fat Generation V Guide to Gravity

Hidden Power Ice nails Gliscor, which,again, can fire off Swords Dance-boosted Earthquakes that can be tough to switch into.

There should be a space after the comma.

~~Fried Rhys~~ · Sep 23rd, 2011, 5:52:59 PM

Quote:

There should be a space after the comma.

fixed

Quote:

There should be a space between the words "the" and "Defense," "with" and "Dusclop's," and "impressive" and "defenses."

fixed

Quote:

There should be a space after the comma.

fixed

Doom Chaos · Sep 23rd, 2011, 9:41:45 PM

http://www.smogon.com/bw/pokemon/dusknoir

Gravity set has Will-o-Wisp instead of Will-O-Wisp.

Doom Chaos · Sep 24th, 2011, 10:06:54 AM

http://www.smogon.com/bw/pokemon/blissey

It only lists "Counters". Change it to "Checks and Counters"

zdrup15 · Sep 24th, 2011, 10:52:51 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Fat Doom Chaos

http://www.smogon.com/bw/pokemon/infernape

Infernape's DW ability has already been released. I recommend moving the DW Section to Other Options.

Since I think Iron Fist should be the main ability at least on the SD and CB sets, I'm awaiting a QC member reply to change the writeup a bit.

Quote:

Originally Posted by Fat Doom Chaos

http://www.smogon.com/bw/pokemon/blissey

It only lists "Counters". Change it to "Checks and Counters"

fixed, thanks

zdrup15 · Sep 24th, 2011, 11:02:32 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Fat Doom Chaos

http://www.smogon.com/bw/pokemon/infernape

Infernape's DW ability has already been released. I recommend moving the DW Section to Other Options.

I was gonna edit the other post but Fate is a ninja so yeah, fixed xD

Doom Chaos · Sep 24th, 2011, 8:16:34 PM

http://www.smogon.com/bw/pokemon/tyranitar

Standard set AD: it allows it to withstand some weaker ones, such as non-STABFocus Blasts from Reuniclus,

There is a missing space between STAB and Focus Blasts.

YAYtears · Sep 24th, 2011, 8:17:28 PM

http://www.smogon.com/bw/pokemon/tyranitar

The choice band set for ttar is missing 4 evs.

zdrup15 · Sep 24th, 2011, 8:21:13 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Fat Doom Chaos

http://www.smogon.com/bw/pokemon/tyranitar

Standard set AD: it allows it to withstand some weaker ones, such as non-STABFocus Blasts from Reuniclus,

There is a missing space between STAB and Focus Blasts.

Quote:

Originally Posted by Fat YAYtears

http://www.smogon.com/bw/pokemon/tyranitar

The choice band set for ttar is missing 4 evs.

EDIT: Fixed these and some other errors

V0x · Jan 1st, 2012, 4:33:21 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Fat MoltenKyurem

http://www.smogon.com/bw/pokemon/zweilous/ru

Choice Scarf is an option with a Jolly nature as it allows Zweilous to outspeed Pokemon with 110 base Speed and max Speed EVs, but is generally better left to a Pokemon with better movepool options such as Honchkrow.

^ now that choice scarf is a set, the OO mention should be removed

ok

Layell · Jan 2nd, 2012, 1:45:24 PM

http://www.smogon.com/ingame/misc/bw_ingametiers

For Petilil: the ingame trade for it early on is exclusive to Black version.

Zystral · Jan 2nd, 2012, 1:49:40 PM

Fixed this.

ssbbm · Jan 2nd, 2012, 2:37:16 PM

"Despite the sheer threat presence this set has, it can useless against most other things still be stopped by most dedicated physical walls - other Arceus, Lugia, Skarmory, and Giratina."

some grammar errors in exteme killer set, last paragraph.

http://www.smogon.com/bw/pokemon/arceus-normal

also the virizon analysis states "If one wants Virizion to act as a mixed sweeper, a Work Up set is a viable option" even though it's alrady listed as one of the options

http://www.smogon.com/bw/pokemon/virizion/ou

V0x · Jan 2nd, 2012, 3:38:28 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Fat ssbbm

"Despite the sheer threat presence this set has, it can useless against most other things still be stopped by most dedicated physical walls - other Arceus, Lugia, Skarmory, and Giratina."

some grammar errors in exteme killer set, last paragraph.

http://www.smogon.com/bw/pokemon/arceus-normal

also the virizon analysis states "If one wants Virizion to act as a mixed sweeper, a Work Up set is a viable option" even though it's alrady listed as one of the options

http://www.smogon.com/bw/pokemon/virizion/ou

fixed, thanks

steviestar · Jan 2nd, 2012, 3:43:03 PM

http://www.smogon.com/dp/pokemon/ninjask

and this is mostly because he doesn't fit onto any off the traditional teams that are used.

Should be "of", not "off"

http://www.smogon.com/bw/pokemon/donphan

Don't be fooled by Donphan's current placement in UU

Should be former placement now, since Donphan rose to OU.

SuperJOCKE · Jan 2nd, 2012, 3:48:00 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Fat steviestar

http://www.smogon.com/dp/pokemon/ninjask

and this is mostly because he doesn't fit onto any off the traditional teams that are used.

Should be "of", not "off"

http://www.smogon.com/bw/pokemon/donphan

Don't be fooled by Donphan's current placement in UU

Should be former placement now, since Donphan rose to OU.

I fixed the Ninjask error, but I let the Donphan one be, as it probably needs to be updated anyways, idk.

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Jan 2nd, 2012, 2:37:16 PM	#1522
ssbbm Join Date: May 2010 Posts: 999 Where you can play Pokemon with Singing Narwhals and Dancing Clouds	"Despite the sheer threat presence this set has, it can useless against most other things still be stopped by most dedicated physical walls - other Arceus, Lugia, Skarmory, and Giratina." some grammar errors in exteme killer set, last paragraph. http://www.smogon.com/bw/pokemon/arceus-normal also the virizon analysis states "If one wants Virizion to act as a mixed sweeper, a Work Up set is a viable option" even though it's alrady listed as one of the options http://www.smogon.com/bw/pokemon/virizion/ou Last edited by ssbbm; Jan 2nd, 2012 at 2:58:19 PM.

Sep 23rd, 2011, 9:34:13 AM	#1501
Queen Kyurem Join Date: May 2011 Posts: 32	@above: Sorry, that was Nasty Plot. Not MixApe.

Sep 23rd, 2011, 9:36:58 AM	#1502
Queen Kyurem Join Date: May 2011 Posts: 32	http://www.smogon.com/bw/pokemon/vaporeon Checks and Counters: as he can use Leech Seed which, in conjunction with Vaporeon's massive HP stat, will heal huge amounts of damage he may have taken. I think there should be a comma there.

Sep 23rd, 2011, 9:41:45 PM	#1512
Doom Chaos Join Date: Sep 2010 Posts: 186 Fennekin for Fire/Fighting	http://www.smogon.com/bw/pokemon/dusknoir Gravity set has Will-o-Wisp instead of Will-O-Wisp.

Sep 24th, 2011, 10:06:54 AM	#1513
Doom Chaos Join Date: Sep 2010 Posts: 186 Fennekin for Fire/Fighting	http://www.smogon.com/bw/pokemon/blissey It only lists "Counters". Change it to "Checks and Counters"

Sep 24th, 2011, 8:16:34 PM	#1516
Doom Chaos Join Date: Sep 2010 Posts: 186 Fennekin for Fire/Fighting	http://www.smogon.com/bw/pokemon/tyranitar Standard set AD: it allows it to withstand some weaker ones, such as non-STABFocus Blasts from Reuniclus, There is a missing space between STAB and Focus Blasts.

Sep 24th, 2011, 8:17:28 PM	#1517
YAYtears Join Date: Nov 2010 Posts: 322	http://www.smogon.com/bw/pokemon/tyranitar The choice band set for ttar is missing 4 evs.

Jan 2nd, 2012, 3:43:03 PM	#1524
steviestar Join Date: Mar 2011 Posts: 148	http://www.smogon.com/dp/pokemon/ninjask and this is mostly because he doesn't fit onto any off the traditional teams that are used. Should be "of", not "off" http://www.smogon.com/bw/pokemon/donphan Don't be fooled by Donphan's current placement in UU Should be former placement now, since Donphan rose to OU.