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***Vader**** · Apr 1st, 2012, 10:01:53 PM

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Originally Posted by Fat Straw Hat Luffy

but who exactly is he?

Poppy · Apr 1st, 2012, 10:50:09 PM

az the ring finger looks a little awkward on the kamina glasses, and the index looks a little long (or maybe that's just me??) but otherwise it's gr8!!!

keep up the good work buddy :))))))))

Furosuto · Apr 1st, 2012, 10:53:50 PM

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Originally Posted by Fat Swaggersaurus

welcome to MY art thread

WOW guys making me double post again........................ v_........................v

In MY art thread I've sometimes quadruple posted before people actually respond. But nontheless, I love your work!

**PK Gaming** · Apr 2nd, 2012, 12:06:16 AM

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Originally Posted by Fat Vader

No fucking way.

I've seen you dude, your hair is nowhere NEAR that awesome.

Swaggersaurus · Apr 2nd, 2012, 8:51:14 AM

yeah i think you're right the index is too longggg

and yeah the ring finger is totally awkward but i just wanted to draw a hand in an awkward position so............

also wow guys ty and welcome to my art thread!!!!!!!

your comments make me feel fuzztansticc inside :fuzz: :fuzz:

Swaggersaurus · Apr 14th, 2012, 10:01:41 PM

bumpzors double post lol!!!!!

i wanna leave this like this but nj won't let me on account of how she is a racist i guess??

Nastyjungle · Apr 14th, 2012, 10:03:30 PM

lol ur fucking laze

Nastyjungle · Apr 14th, 2012, 10:03:41 PM

but its good so ill let ur laze slide

Swaggersaurus · Apr 14th, 2012, 10:06:31 PM

lazy xD

Swaggersaurus · Apr 16th, 2012, 10:10:13 PM

fixed the sketch and cleaned it up a bit and i guess i'm lining it now???

v_v

Doomsday · Apr 16th, 2012, 11:33:29 PM

enjoying this very much!!

**Furai** · Apr 17th, 2012, 6:40:54 AM

fuck that mesprit is amazing

**PK Gaming** · Apr 17th, 2012, 10:10:10 AM

Oh wow, that's the girl from the BW2 game right? Really good, but I can't say I expected any less from you. I've gotta say, If I were an artist I could never keep the quality consistent, especially since i'm impatient.

PS: Making Mesprit look cool is no easy feat, but you did it ♪

Swaggersaurus · Apr 19th, 2012, 4:43:04 PM

:)

thanks guys, it really means a lot!!

and yeah it is the bw2 girl. grrr i wish she had a name already----!!

consistency is something i really struggle with haha, for sure. just looking back at stuff like azlocke im like "wow did i ever decide what style to do this in v_v". haha, oh well, you just have to keep on keeping on

i finished lining it:

**PK Gaming** · Apr 19th, 2012, 5:32:30 PM

Niiiice. I think the BW2 might end up being one of my favorites, design-wise.

Anyone else hate the BW2 boy's look though? I think it's the first time too (since every other PC has ranged from looking awesome to okayish). And that rival too... yeurgh.

Swaggersaurus · Apr 19th, 2012, 6:18:55 PM

i don't like the look of the male player character, but i really really like the rival design!!

i actually want them to switch the designs around... :x

Swaggersaurus · Apr 19th, 2012, 6:43:45 PM

flatssssss

it's weird haha my favourite part about this is the shoes v_v

this is at 25% though so i guess it doesn't rly do them justice!!

Fishy · Apr 19th, 2012, 7:00:08 PM

the little music notes near the ear buds might be the cutest fucking details in the world

this drawing makes me :that: much more excited to play bw2

mesprit's tails are perfect

and SWEET KICKS

Swaggersaurus · Apr 20th, 2012, 2:56:34 PM

just lights and finishing touches to go imo????

lol irdk why i'm posting this step-by-step OH WELL IT'S NICE TO HAVE THE THREAD ACTIVE HUH

Swaggersaurus · Apr 23rd, 2012, 7:24:15 PM

"die with a hole in your breast"

this is at 12.5%

no i don't know what is wrong with me

Mafeking · Apr 23rd, 2012, 7:54:48 PM

[late] holy balls Az that Mesprit is so excellent. [/late]

The way its pink hair-tendrils look kind of like Cradily are definitely a funny touch, but the best part about it is definitely the loops in its tails. They look so smooth and refined, yet pretty natural at the same time. I also love the way they make Mesprit look like it's having fun (mirroring the female trainer) despite the fact that its right eye seems to be curved in a bit of an angry expression.

The female trainer is absolutely awesome as well, and while I definitely like her shoes the best part of that for me is easily the detail you put in concerning the music player (iPod, w/e). The earbuds and musical notes coming from them are excellent (I especially like the way she's holding them!) but the fact that the cord appears to loops around her entire body and then end at a mostly hidden (behind her hair) iPod in her pocket is just showcasing the incredible things that come with detail! I'm a huge fan of that picture.

As for the most recent one, I don't have too much to say, but I really enjoy the blending that the black appears to create between the heads! It's a cool thing to look at. The tiny person above the woman's head (who I didn't see for a few minutes!) is also pretty cool! Getting that amount of detail into something so small (though I'm assuming you did this on a larger canvas, haha) is pretty nice. :)

ssbbm · Apr 23rd, 2012, 9:08:59 PM

how long did that take you .___. the bleach one is so detailed ashodfi

also your mesprit one has gorgeous colors but her shoulder is pointy .___.

Yilx · Apr 23rd, 2012, 11:41:16 PM

How have I NOT given this thread a luvdisk yet

Swaggersaurus · May 8th, 2012, 3:51:21 PM

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Originally Posted by Fat Mafeking

[late] holy balls Az that Mesprit is so excellent. [/late]

The way its pink hair-tendrils look kind of like Cradily are definitely a funny touch, but the best part about it is definitely the loops in its tails. They look so smooth and refined, yet pretty natural at the same time. I also love the way they make Mesprit look like it's having fun (mirroring the female trainer) despite the fact that its right eye seems to be curved in a bit of an angry expression.

The female trainer is absolutely awesome as well, and while I definitely like her shoes the best part of that for me is easily the detail you put in concerning the music player (iPod, w/e). The earbuds and musical notes coming from them are excellent (I especially like the way she's holding them!) but the fact that the cord appears to loops around her entire body and then end at a mostly hidden (behind her hair) iPod in her pocket is just showcasing the incredible things that come with detail! I'm a huge fan of that picture.

As for the most recent one, I don't have too much to say, but I really enjoy the blending that the black appears to create between the heads! It's a cool thing to look at. The tiny person above the woman's head (who I didn't see for a few minutes!) is also pretty cool! Getting that amount of detail into something so small (though I'm assuming you did this on a larger canvas, haha) is pretty nice. :)

wow, thankyou for such a detailed critique!!

the mesprit tails are definitely my favourite part, yeah

i actually thought the ipod or whatever (hahaha i dont know either!) would be too obscured by her hair which was a bit of a shame, but i'm glad someone noticed it after all!!

i'm rly digging this trainer (i hear rumours she might be called reina??) so it was rly fun drawing her

more pokegirl imgs to come, perhaps??

but yeah the big sketch mesh was on a huge canvas. that img is at 12.5% of the original size so that helps haha :) it's not rly half as nice at 100%... it's about 12.5% as nice...

wow i really appreciated this post hahaha it was nice to get some in-depth and well-considered feedback, ty agaion!!

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Originally Posted by Fat ssbbm

how long did that take you .___. the bleach one is so detailed ashodfi

also your mesprit one has gorgeous colors but her shoulder is pointy .___.

tyvm!! it took about an hour i guess but it is really sketchy and not finished, so...!!

also i guess it is kinda pointy...

maybe when i finish it up i'll go back to that

Quote:

Originally Posted by Fat Yilx

How have I NOT given this thread a luvdisk yet

idk but i am v grateful that you have now!!

anyway i have something to post so i'm just gonna post it OK here goes

Chapter 6 - The Fallen

***Vader**** · May 8th, 2012, 3:53:38 PM

ill give it an ok/11

Apr 1st, 2012, 10:50:09 PM	#252
Poppy SYMPTOMATIC OF A GREATER ILL Join Date: Jul 2010 Posts: 2,421 brisbane	az the ring finger looks a little awkward on the kamina glasses, and the index looks a little long (or maybe that's just me??) but otherwise it's gr8!!! keep up the good work buddy :)))))))) __________________ erotically erudite

Apr 2nd, 2012, 8:51:14 AM	#255
Swaggersaurus I DON'T NEED A MAN Join Date: Jan 2008 Posts: 4,793 I DON'T NEED A MAN	yeah i think you're right the index is too longggg and yeah the ring finger is totally awkward but i just wanted to draw a hand in an awkward position so............ also wow guys ty and welcome to my art thread!!!!!!! your comments make me feel fuzztansticc inside :fuzz: :fuzz: __________________ everybody needs a hobby

Apr 14th, 2012, 10:01:41 PM	#256
Swaggersaurus I DON'T NEED A MAN Join Date: Jan 2008 Posts: 4,793 I DON'T NEED A MAN	bumpzors double post lol!!!!! i wanna leave this like this but nj won't let me on account of how she is a racist i guess?? __________________ everybody needs a hobby

Apr 14th, 2012, 10:06:31 PM	#259
Swaggersaurus I DON'T NEED A MAN Join Date: Jan 2008 Posts: 4,793 I DON'T NEED A MAN	lazy xD __________________ everybody needs a hobby

Apr 16th, 2012, 10:10:13 PM	#260
Swaggersaurus I DON'T NEED A MAN Join Date: Jan 2008 Posts: 4,793 I DON'T NEED A MAN	fixed the sketch and cleaned it up a bit and i guess i'm lining it now??? v_v __________________ everybody needs a hobby

Apr 14th, 2012, 10:03:30 PM	#257
Nastyjungle Join Date: Sep 2010 Posts: 1,833	lol ur fucking laze

Apr 14th, 2012, 10:03:41 PM	#258
Nastyjungle Join Date: Sep 2010 Posts: 1,833	but its good so ill let ur laze slide

Apr 16th, 2012, 11:33:29 PM	#261
Doomsday Join Date: Jan 2005 Posts: 6,167	enjoying this very much!! __________________ a wicked engine

Apr 17th, 2012, 6:40:54 AM	#262
Furai standing in the eye of the hurricane Moderator Join Date: May 2010 Posts: 2,088	fuck that mesprit is amazing __________________ *#gohard* \| Wolfpack (Ubers RMT)

Apr 17th, 2012, 10:10:10 AM	#263
PK Gaming Quiet Thunder God Moderator Join Date: Aug 2009 Posts: 4,530 Izanagi	Oh wow, that's the girl from the BW2 game right? Really good, but I can't say I expected any less from you. I've gotta say, If I were an artist I could never keep the quality consistent, especially since i'm impatient. PS: Making Mesprit look cool is no easy feat, but you did it ♪ __________________

Apr 19th, 2012, 4:43:04 PM	#264
Swaggersaurus I DON'T NEED A MAN Join Date: Jan 2008 Posts: 4,793 I DON'T NEED A MAN	:) thanks guys, it really means a lot!! and yeah it is the bw2 girl. grrr i wish she had a name already----!! consistency is something i really struggle with haha, for sure. just looking back at stuff like azlocke im like "wow did i ever decide what style to do this in v_v". haha, oh well, you just have to keep on keeping on i finished lining it: __________________ everybody needs a hobby

Apr 19th, 2012, 5:32:30 PM	#265
PK Gaming Quiet Thunder God Moderator Join Date: Aug 2009 Posts: 4,530 Izanagi	Niiiice. I think the BW2 might end up being one of my favorites, design-wise. Anyone else hate the BW2 boy's look though? I think it's the first time too (since every other PC has ranged from looking awesome to okayish). And that rival too... yeurgh. __________________

Apr 19th, 2012, 6:18:55 PM	#266
Swaggersaurus I DON'T NEED A MAN Join Date: Jan 2008 Posts: 4,793 I DON'T NEED A MAN	i don't like the look of the male player character, but i really really like the rival design!! i actually want them to switch the designs around... :x __________________ everybody needs a hobby

Apr 19th, 2012, 6:43:45 PM	#267
Swaggersaurus I DON'T NEED A MAN Join Date: Jan 2008 Posts: 4,793 I DON'T NEED A MAN	flatssssss it's weird haha my favourite part about this is the shoes v_v this is at 25% though so i guess it doesn't rly do them justice!! __________________ everybody needs a hobby

Apr 19th, 2012, 7:00:08 PM	#268
Fishy Join Date: Jul 2008 Posts: 3,184 i want you all and everything just to be mine	the little music notes near the ear buds might be the cutest fucking details in the world this drawing makes me :that: much more excited to play bw2 mesprit's tails are perfect and SWEET KICKS __________________ i didn't want to be your ghost

Apr 20th, 2012, 2:56:34 PM	#269
Swaggersaurus I DON'T NEED A MAN Join Date: Jan 2008 Posts: 4,793 I DON'T NEED A MAN	just lights and finishing touches to go imo???? lol irdk why i'm posting this step-by-step OH WELL IT'S NICE TO HAVE THE THREAD ACTIVE HUH __________________ everybody needs a hobby

Apr 23rd, 2012, 7:24:15 PM	#270
Swaggersaurus I DON'T NEED A MAN Join Date: Jan 2008 Posts: 4,793 I DON'T NEED A MAN	"die with a hole in your breast" this is at 12.5% no i don't know what is wrong with me __________________ everybody needs a hobby

Apr 23rd, 2012, 9:08:59 PM	#272
ssbbm Join Date: May 2010 Posts: 999 Where you can play Pokemon with Singing Narwhals and Dancing Clouds	how long did that take you .___. the bleach one is so detailed ashodfi also your mesprit one has gorgeous colors but her shoulder is pointy .___.

Apr 23rd, 2012, 11:41:16 PM	#273
Yilx Join Date: Jun 2006 Posts: 993 Singapore	How have I NOT given this thread a luvdisk yet __________________ \| Art Thread \| Crux \| With Inpunity \| Fishing for Fun \| Saying 'hi' \| Fire Off \|

May 8th, 2012, 3:53:38 PM	#275
*Vader caustic Super Moderator** Join Date: Nov 2008 Posts: 2,175 avatar by magistrum	ill give it an ok/11 __________________