(OU) Rate my team for platinum.

kingrafikii · Jul 24th, 2012, 2:40:44 AM

THis team is strictly paper, havent tested yet. Also this is my first team to compose. I'm just trying to get some advice on any changes that i should probably make, yada, yada, yada.

Pokemon: Scizor
Item: Life Orb / Leftovers
Trait: Technician
EVs: 4 HP / 252 Atk / 252 Spe
Nature: Adamant
Moves:
-Sword Dance
-Bullet Punch
-Brick Break
-Bug Bite

Pokemon: Kingdra
Item: Life Orb
Trait: Swift Swim
EVs: 4 HP / 252 SpA / 252 Spe
Nature: Modest
Moves:
-Rain Dance
-Surf
-Dragon Pulse
-Signal Beam

Pokemon: Skarmory
Item: Leftovers / Shed Shell
Trait: Sturdy
EVs: 252 HP / 252 Def / 4 Spd
Nature: Impish
Moves:
-Spikes
-Whirlwind
-Roost
-Steel Wing

Pokemon: Blissey
Item: Leftovers
Trait: Natural Cure
EVs: 252 HP / 252 Def / 4 Spe
Nature: Bold
Moves:
-Wish
-Softboiled
-Siesmic Toss
-Toxic

Pokemon: Tentacruel
Item: Leftovers
Trait: Liquid Ooze
EVs: 252 HP / 120 Def / 136 SpD
Nature: Calm
Moves:
-Toxic Spikes
-Rapid Spin
-Surf
-Sludge Bomb

Pokemon: Gliscor
Item: Leftovers
Trait: Sand Veil
EVs: 252 HP / 4 Def / 252 Spe
Nature: Jolly
Moves:
-Stealth Rock
-Earthquake
-Roost
-Taunt

Smiles · Jul 24th, 2012, 5:22:42 AM

i'd love to rate it but i didn't even bother reading it.
it has no descriptions or anything, plus you didn't even test it.

edit: i'll say something. is scizor your lead? you should get a dedicated lead. idk if you've played gen 5, but there's no team preview here so you might as well lead with gliscor since he's already there.

FinalLegendZero · Jul 24th, 2012, 8:00:28 AM

Read the rules. You need to test the team and give detailed descriptions of what each pokemon does for you. Fix it, or this will be locked.

mostwanted · Jul 24th, 2012, 2:10:01 PM

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Jul 24th, 2012, 2:40:44 AM	#1
kingrafikii Join Date: Nov 2011 Posts: 1	Rate my team for platinum. THis team is strictly paper, havent tested yet. Also this is my first team to compose. I'm just trying to get some advice on any changes that i should probably make, yada, yada, yada. Pokemon: Scizor Item: Life Orb / Leftovers Trait: Technician EVs: 4 HP / 252 Atk / 252 Spe Nature: Adamant Moves: -Sword Dance -Bullet Punch -Brick Break -Bug Bite Pokemon: Kingdra Item: Life Orb Trait: Swift Swim EVs: 4 HP / 252 SpA / 252 Spe Nature: Modest Moves: -Rain Dance -Surf -Dragon Pulse -Signal Beam Pokemon: Skarmory Item: Leftovers / Shed Shell Trait: Sturdy EVs: 252 HP / 252 Def / 4 Spd Nature: Impish Moves: -Spikes -Whirlwind -Roost -Steel Wing Pokemon: Blissey Item: Leftovers Trait: Natural Cure EVs: 252 HP / 252 Def / 4 Spe Nature: Bold Moves: -Wish -Softboiled -Siesmic Toss -Toxic Pokemon: Tentacruel Item: Leftovers Trait: Liquid Ooze EVs: 252 HP / 120 Def / 136 SpD Nature: Calm Moves: -Toxic Spikes -Rapid Spin -Surf -Sludge Bomb Pokemon: Gliscor Item: Leftovers Trait: Sand Veil EVs: 252 HP / 4 Def / 252 Spe Nature: Jolly Moves: -Stealth Rock -Earthquake -Roost -Taunt

Jul 24th, 2012, 5:22:42 AM	#2
Smiles Join Date: Oct 2010 Posts: 49	i'd love to rate it but i didn't even bother reading it. it has no descriptions or anything, plus you didn't even test it. edit: i'll say something. is scizor your lead? you should get a dedicated lead. idk if you've played gen 5, but there's no team preview here so you might as well lead with gliscor since he's already there. Last edited by Smiles; Jul 24th, 2012 at 7:22:29 AM.

Jul 24th, 2012, 8:00:28 AM	#3
FinalLegendZero Join Date: Oct 2010 Posts: 41 In the void between the past and future	Read the rules. You need to test the team and give detailed descriptions of what each pokemon does for you. Fix it, or this will be locked.

Jul 24th, 2012, 2:10:01 PM	#4
mostwanted Join Date: Jul 2011 Posts: 941	Locking this thread under Rule 3 of the Forum Guidelines. Please lurk more and check out the RMT Archive to see the kind of detail is required. Feel free to PM me with changes and I will gladly unlock your thread.