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Old Aug 8th, 2012, 7:19:50 AM   #1
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As usual, I gave up on OU as everybody started running my number 1 counter: Celebi. SpecsJolteon couldn't OHKO with Shadow Ball, and running Signal Beam gives me terrible coverage (I was running HP Grass). Enough about OU. Let's talk about Ubers.
I decided on Sun (well no, rain first, but then I changed my mind) because rain was getting a bit boring. Also, can you please rate this team and give me constructive critism (comments)? It'll really help. Also, I apologise in advance if my pictures are boring, I'm not experienced at posting, so I don't know where you guys get those pictures.

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Terrakion @ Choice Scarf
Ability: Justified
EVs: 4 HP / 252 Atk / 252 Spe
Jolly Nature (+Spe, -SpA)
- Close Combat
- Stone Edge
- X-Scissor
- Earthquake

Well, Kyogre wasn't a reliable check to Ho-oh, since it can be OHKOed by Brave Bird after Stealth Rock, and Palkia couldn't OHKO Ho-oh even in the rain. Even when it was within KO range, Ho-oh can just switch and heal. Since I wasn't having such a big problem with Excadrill anyway, I decided to use Terrakion to kill Ho-oh instead. Ho-oh is OHKOed by Terrakion's Rock Slide, so Stone Edge's only problem is accuracy, but it doesn't matter much, as my luck with Stone Edge is pretty good.


Groudon @ Leftovers
Ability: Drought
EVs: 252 HP / 4 Atk / 252 Def
Impish Nature (+Def, -SpA)
- Stealth Rock
- Dragon Tail
- Earthquake
- Stone Edge

I need Groudon to set up the sun, as a grand total of three pokemon on my team require sun support. Stealth Rock is for ... setting up Stealth Rock? o.O Dragon Tail allows me to phaze through Taunt, as I face more Taunts than Subs, mostly from Deoxys-S. Max HP and Def allows me to tank physical hits well. Earthquake for STAB, and Stone Edge completes the EdgeQuake Combo.



Palkia @ Choice Scarf
Ability: Pressure
EVs: 4 HP / 252 SpA / 252 Spe
Timid Nature (+Spe, -Atk)
- Spacial Rend
- Surf
- Thunder
- Fire Blast

My main revenge killer. He is probably the best revenge killer in the game, bar something like Ekiller Arceus. It may seem strange to use Surf on a sun team, but Palkia already has great coverage with Spacial Rend and Fire Blast, so it doesn't really need Aura Sphere. I might lose the weather war occasionally anyway. I maxed out speed since my main objective is to kill Kyogre, so I need all the speed I can get.


Arceus @ Lum Berry
Ability: Multitype
EVs: 4 HP / 252 Atk / 252 Spe
Adamant Nature (+Atk, -SpA)
- Swords Dance
- Extremespeed
- Shadow Claw
- Earthquake

Standard EKiller set, except that I maxed out speed since that extra bulk wasn't doing anything. I need all the power I can get though, so I gave it an Adamant nature. Lum Berry allows me to take a WoW and hit back as hard as before.


Blaziken @ Leftovers
Ability: Speed Boost
EVs: 4 HP / 252 Atk / 252 Spe
Adamant Nature (+Atk, -SpA)
- Swords Dance
- Protect
- Flare Blitz
- Hi Jump Kick

Once again, I run an Adamant nature, since at +1 the only things it outspeeds with a Jolly nature is Shaymin-S and Mewtwo. Besides, I normally come in on something I can force out, such as Ferrothorn and SD on the switch, so I can just Protect the next turn and get to +2. Protect is for stalling Leftovers recovery, and an extra Speed Boost. Flare Blitz and HJK for dual STAB moves.


Jumpluff @ Leftovers
Ability: Chlorophyll
EVs: 188 Def / 68 SpD / 252 Spe
Timid Nature (+Spe, -Atk)
- Encore
- Leech Seed
- Substitute
- Sleep Powder

The main objective: to stop SmashPass. I come in as Smeargle smashes its non-existant shell, then click Encore. The end. SubSeed strategy works well as Jumpluff forces a lot of switches with Sleep Powder and Encore. I Sub on the switch, then Leech Seed. Annoys the hell out of most opponents, but I'm getting haxed lately.

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EDIT: Jumpluff is ranked #191 in usage, how? Behind Ambipom lol.

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Old Aug 8th, 2012, 12:16:37 PM   #2
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I havent tested your team but I can tell you that Blaziken needs a jolly nature to outspeed Mewtwo. This is important to revenge Mewtwo. Also, use life orb instead of leftovers. There will be situations where you will miss the power provided by life orb.
+2 Flare Blitz always OHKOs support Groudon and always OHKO mewtwo. You may also want to try low kick over hi jump kick as it will hit for 120 base power on most opponents.
Your importable doesnt match your team.
I am testing this currently.
EDIT: After testing, I noticed that your team needs to sack a mon everytime something faster comes in. For this reason I suggest you use multiscale Lugia over Arceus.
Lugia @ Leftovers
Trait: Multiscale
EVs: 252 HP / 36 Def / 84 SDef / 136 Spd
Calm Nature (+SDef, -Atk)
- Thunder Wave
- Toxic
- Whirlwind
- Roost
The special defense evs are to enable you to roost against Kyogre's Choice specs Water Spout. The speed evs are to outspeed neutral nature base 95s and the HP evs are for maximum leftovers recovery. The rest in poured into defense.
Anyway, I would just like to say that this team is quite good.

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Old Aug 9th, 2012, 8:56:23 PM   #3
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I like your team, but how do you deal with an arceus that has an sd under its belt? Your team can deal out all the damage needed, but you cant take any hits. If a specs rayquaza is their lead and you lead with groudon, then you lost a poke. Try looking to add some bulk. I like that you have jumpluff to block nuubpass. Also, replace flamethrower with something on reshiram, dragonpulse I can understand, but you dont need two fire and two dragon moves, as heatran murders you.


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Old Aug 10th, 2012, 3:19:26 AM   #4
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Anikrahman

I don't actually quite understand what you mean. The only thing Mewtwo can set up on in my team is Groudon (threaten with Ice Beam, but can phaze, although I won't take the chance) and Ferrothorn (which can paralyse). So far the only thing Life Orb on Blaziken will actually help me out on is EKiller Arceus and Giratina. Life Orb allows me to OHKO Arceus and 2HKO Giratina. On the other hand, Groudon can take physical hits really well, and Giratina can only phaze me. Giratina-O can attack, but I'll just switch to Ferrothorn.
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The answer to the Arceus is Groudon. He can switch in and phaze. Heck, he can (just barely) take a +6 Extremespeed from Arceus and phaze. None of the Rayquazas I faced gave me problems, and Reshiram no longer exists. Besides, I have TurboBlaze, meaning my Fire-type moves hit for neutral damage against Heatran.

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Old Aug 10th, 2012, 6:55:05 AM   #5
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Hi there this is a serious HO team that you have there, I can see the OU influence in it ;). Now your team has a HUGE amount of offensive pressure, which can be very daunting, however, the only pivot switch you have really is Groudon who won't enjoy switching in on anything special. It is a fairly good team that utilizes a few underrated threats like Blaziken. However, I believe that it has some room for improvement.

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Old Aug 11th, 2012, 1:59:50 AM   #6
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I'm still trying out both of your suggestions.
CrackinSkulls

I'll add on to this:

You are right; Ho-oh can be invincible as of now, though I haven't faced any.
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I'm not changing Ferrothorn's EV spread. (Except shifting the 4 Speed EVs to HP.) But I'll use Power Whip since T-Wave caused my loss once and generally isn't too helpful. Also, Palkia's HP with 4 EVs is 322, which is not divisible by 4 or 8 or anything except 1, 2, 7, 23, 14, 46, 91, 161, 322. So I don't actually understand why I should move it to SDef.
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Old Aug 11th, 2012, 2:14:57 AM   #7
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Hello lousy, great team. As you requested, here's my rate.

The first thing I notice is that Ferrothorn has no attacks at all. Now, while using all four attacks is great and all, I would suggest using Power Whip > Thunder Wave. With Power Whip, you can hit Kyogre and Groundon hard, as well as Pokemon such as Tyranitar, which makes it easier for the team to deal with Excadrill and others. Also, with no HP investment, your Ferrothorn won't last long. A simple change to 252 HP / 48 Atk / 208 SDef helps with that, as you tank Kyorge better, as well as being able to deal massive damage to Kyogre and others. Also, shifting that 4 HP EVs into SDef on Palkia also helps, as you avoid taking extra damage from entry hazards, just a pro tip.

Well ok then, some things bother me about this team. You say you use Groundon to check SD Arceus, but since SD Arceus is a late game cleaner, you'll need something more reliable to keep it in tow. Plus, a Fighting + Ground immunity will go a long way in making sure Terrakion and Offensive Groundon aren't troublesome. As such, going to reflect CrackingSkulls suggestion of Giratina, though I'm suggesting Giratina-O > Jumpluff. I know Jumpluff is great at what it does, but what Giratina-O does, keep hazards in play to ease sweeps for Arceus and Blaziken, check offensive physical threats, phazing to rack up damage, is just too good to pass up. Also, your team still has trouble with Pokemon such as Mewtwo, switching into Kyurem-White will be hard, and the Latis are also hard to check with this team. As such, using a sun teams super glue, Heatran > Blaziken works, as Heatran not only deals with sets without Aura Sphere, it helps to deal with Darkrai, screws over Steels so Arceus sweeps better, as well as racking up damage with Roar to scout switch ins, and Toxic to cripple Pokemon such as Lugia, preventing them from being troublesome. If you use this, using Giratina-O is needed, as both work hand in hand with one another.

Great team, heres the tl;dr version.

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Old Aug 13th, 2012, 9:58:12 AM   #8
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@CrackinSkulls & TrollFreak: Ok after testing out your suggestions, I apologise, that most of them didn't really work well. They were dead weight most of the time, so I abandoned them. On the other hand, your rates told me my greatest threats, so I decided to use the King of Ubers: Kyogre. He can cancel out the sand and slow down Excadrill, while OHKOing Ho-oh with Water Spout even after Stealth Rock. Also, the only notable thing LO on Blaziken does for me as to my knowledge is OHKOing Arceus at +0, while being left with 6%.
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Old Aug 13th, 2012, 1:35:47 PM   #9
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You're only running 4 SpA EVs on Kyogre. Please tell me this is a typo.

I may post more later when I have more time to look at the team but I can't right now.
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Old Aug 14th, 2012, 8:21:45 AM   #10
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It is a typo, I think I forgot to save. I'll change it now.
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Old Aug 18th, 2012, 11:37:03 PM   #11
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Haha let's bump this really old thread and watch the replies (if any)
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Old Aug 20th, 2012, 6:11:45 PM   #12
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Choice Scarf Terrakion, Choice Scaf Palkia, Support Groudon, Jumpluff, Lum ExtremeKiller, Leftovers Blaziken

Straight off your team lacks flexibility, Two Choice Scarf users is almost always inadvisable. Your team also has Protect Blaziken and priority from Arceus so this is largely unecessary.

Jumpluff is also turdy wurdy electric boogaloo useless Pokemon. Whimsicott is better because it is effective in all weathers and has more bulk thanks to its ability to invest. I don't recommend either one, however.

Your team is weak to, in order of importance -

CM Arceus, particularly Ghost - sweeps through everything, only Blaziken can hope to hurt it in sun. ExtremeKiller has to rely on Focus Blast not hitting, and Jumpluff is screwed if it has regular poison or something else has taken the sleep. Switching into a predicted Judgments (also Stealth Rock, which will probably be down considering you don't have a Rapid Spin user) will damn near kill the thing.

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Lati@s - no steel, no fun

Bulky Kyogre, your lack of hazards means that Palkia will easily get worn down, and a Scald burn can only hasten this; Thunder Wave Kyogre is arguably a bigger threat, seeing as a paralyzed Palkia is worthless.

Reshiram / Offensive Dialga / Mix Rayquaza (read: special dragons) - No solid resists means literally something will die every time these can fire an attack off (arceus survives once and will then on be in too poor health to sweep), and due to the inflexibility of two Choice Scarf users, this will be a common scenario.

Ho-Oh - a simple Sacred Fire burn and Groudon loses to Substitute + Roost.

Forretress - takes a giant turd on Groudon and set up hazards that can destroy your entirely grounded team.

Gliscor - stallbreaker sets up on choice-locked Thunder, Terrakion, and Groudon. Everything is vulnerable to Toxic.

I would recommend a Forretress of your own, and a Ho-Oh; alternatively Tentacruel and Steel Arceus can be run, but ExtremeKiller is a powerful offensive force I'm sure you want to keep.

Sadly, not much of the original team can be preserved if you want to have a strong core. Less Pokemon can be changed at the cost of going on the offensive and having a more suicidal style of play, however, the changes are still pretty drastic.

Forretress should replace Jumpluff, providing valuable spin support and auxiliary hazards of your own. It can also run Hidden Power Ice for Gliscor. Spikes are chosen over Toxic Spikes to complement the offensive nature of your team, and ramp up Ho-Oh's threat to devastating levels, as all its checks, save for Lugia, are grounded. It can also sponge Outrages and retaliate with Hidden Power Ice or Toxic. The EV spread lets it survive two +1 Outrages from Rayquaza after Stealth Rock.

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Ho-Oh provides a devastating offensive force, a spreader of burns, and most importantly, a powerful tank to take Draco Meteors, Darkrai, and the like. I realize the removal of Jumpluff leads to notable weaks to offensive styles, don't worry, I'll come to that later. Ho-Oh should be run over Choice Scarf Terrakion, as whilst Terrakion's utility in checking ExtremeKiller effectively is appreciated, it is easier to compensate for than Palkia checking Kyogre. Whirlwind is chosen before Substitute since with it you can effectively wall and force out opposing Ho-Oh (you'll struggle with LO Brave Bird, but even Adamant Leftovers Brave Bird is manageable), forcing it to take Stealth Rock damage on its next switch in. It also checks Mewtwo quite well, never being OHKOed by +1 Psystrike. This Ho-Oh can also check ExtremeKiller, even if Sacred Fire doesn't burn you will have done over 50% and Forretress switch into ExtremeSpeed and Toxic Arceus.

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Yeah, I am also seconding a Jolly nature + Life Orb on Blaziken; Ho-Oh can't check Mewtwo when Stealth Rock is down and this is literally your only other line of defense. Life Orb is needed for Flare Blitz to OHKO Mewtwo in the sun, and the +2 OHKO on opposing Groudon (slight residual needed to compensate for Jolly IIRC).

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Cool team, good luck.

edit: my point is they're both shit so you shouldn't be using either. there's only one priority move that's +2. switching into set up sweepers with jumpluff is always a 50/50 since she will literally die to almost anything. whimsicott is not infamous what lol, and people's ignorance or expected behaviour isn't an argument towards objective efficacy.

sleep powder is admittedly cool, but stun spore has about just as much utility considering the prevalence of viable resttalkers in ubers.
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Old Aug 22nd, 2012, 6:04:49 AM   #13
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Here's why Jumpluff > Whimsicott:
- Flying type grants an immunity, so I can encore EQs
- Sleep Powder
- Prankster is almost negligible as most priority moves are +2, and 0 priority means Jumpluff outspeeds (I'm assuming sun)
- Shadow Sneak is the only +1 priority, since Scizor hasn't caught up
- Whimsicott is more infamous, so people will be able to predict far more often

Jumpluff is also my more reliable form of defence against SmashPass, as Groudon does not always check it. Also, it forces out Darkrai by locking it into Nasty Plot.

I am unable to use Ho-oh as I just suck at it. Ho-oh just dies too easily when I use it, bulky or sweeper, it matters not.

Forretress is helpful, but now I have problems with Ho-oh. Regardless, I'm still using it. (I need a rapid spinner.)

When Forry comes in on Groudon, I switch to Blaziken, Flare Blitz to activate Red Card, if there's none I SD.
Lala this team is kept in another file I'm testing another team atm.

EDIT: Then how shall I stop SmashPass? Also I've been OHKOing Mewtwo and Groudon at +2 without LO, and with LO I die all too quickly.
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