Cant think of a witty Team Name

ProfessorNapalm · Sep 6th, 2012, 3:50:57 PM

Ok, heres my first team on smogon, so try to be nice. Just trying to figure out what works, what needs work and what doesnt work.

Landorus w/ Expert Belt
Naive Nature
Sheer Force ability
228 atk 28 SpAtk 252 Spe
Earthquake/Stone Edge/ U-Turn/ HP Ice

Reuniclus w/ Life Orb
Bold Nature
Magic Guard ability
252 Hp 252 Def 4 SpD
Calm Mind/Recover/Focus Blast/Psyshock

Hitmontop w/ Life Orb
Adamant Nature
Technician Ability
252 HP 252 Atk 4 Spe
Fake Out/ Mach Punch/ Close Combat/ Sucker Punch

Swampert w/ Leftovers
Adamant Nature
Torrent
240 HP 252 Atk 16 Def
Waterfall/ Earthquake/ Ice Punch/ Stealth Rock

Chandelure w/ Choice Scarf
Modest Nature
Flash Fire
252 SpAtk 252 Spe 4 spD
Fire Blast/ Shadow Ball/ Energy Ball/ HP Fight

Breloom w/ Toxic Orb
Adamant
Poison Heal
12 HP 244 Atk 252 Spe
Spore/ Substitute/ Focus Punch/ Seed Bomb

Ok, Now you guys can tear it apart. I just need to know what to remove and add to make this team work. Thanks in advance

The Great Mighty Doom · Sep 6th, 2012, 7:04:36 PM

Hello ProfesserNapalm, your RMT needs descriptions for each pokemon describing their role in the team, why you chose their specific EVs / moveset etc. Please read the RMT Rules and then edit your RMT accordingly, otherwise a mod will lock this thread. It also may be a good idea to look around the forums at other OU Teams and how they are presented to get a better idea of what's an acceptable level of presentation.

***Delko**** · Sep 6th, 2012, 7:05:41 PM

What Doom said. PM me your descriptions and I'll unlock this thread.

Welcome to Smogon !

Sep 6th, 2012, 3:50:57 PM	#1
ProfessorNapalm Join Date: Sep 2012 Posts: 1 Pacifidlog Town	Cant think of a witty Team Name Ok, heres my first team on smogon, so try to be nice. Just trying to figure out what works, what needs work and what doesnt work. Landorus w/ Expert Belt Naive Nature Sheer Force ability 228 atk 28 SpAtk 252 Spe Earthquake/Stone Edge/ U-Turn/ HP Ice Reuniclus w/ Life Orb Bold Nature Magic Guard ability 252 Hp 252 Def 4 SpD Calm Mind/Recover/Focus Blast/Psyshock Hitmontop w/ Life Orb Adamant Nature Technician Ability 252 HP 252 Atk 4 Spe Fake Out/ Mach Punch/ Close Combat/ Sucker Punch Swampert w/ Leftovers Adamant Nature Torrent 240 HP 252 Atk 16 Def Waterfall/ Earthquake/ Ice Punch/ Stealth Rock Chandelure w/ Choice Scarf Modest Nature Flash Fire 252 SpAtk 252 Spe 4 spD Fire Blast/ Shadow Ball/ Energy Ball/ HP Fight Breloom w/ Toxic Orb Adamant Poison Heal 12 HP 244 Atk 252 Spe Spore/ Substitute/ Focus Punch/ Seed Bomb Ok, Now you guys can tear it apart. I just need to know what to remove and add to make this team work. Thanks in advance

Sep 6th, 2012, 7:04:36 PM	#2
The Great Mighty Doom Tyger Tyger, burning bright, In the forests of the night; What immortal hand or eye, Could frame thy fearful symmetry? Join Date: Nov 2011 Posts: 639 New Zealand	Hello ProfesserNapalm, your RMT needs descriptions for each pokemon describing their role in the team, why you chose their specific EVs / moveset etc. Please read the RMT Rules and then edit your RMT accordingly, otherwise a mod will lock this thread. It also may be a good idea to look around the forums at other OU Teams and how they are presented to get a better idea of what's an acceptable level of presentation. __________________ *VM / PM me for a BW2 OU Rate.* *Sharpedo Shenanigans - A BW2 OU Weatherless RMT* *Pokemon Showdown now has it's own forums! Check it out: http://pokemonshowdown.com/forums/*

Sep 6th, 2012, 7:05:41 PM	#3
*Delko Chemical Ride Super Moderator** Join Date: Sep 2009 Posts: 2,990 Belgium Mentor	What Doom said. PM me your descriptions and I'll unlock this thread. Welcome to Smogon ! __________________