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Join Date: Oct 2012
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"T" Stands For Trouble Hi everybody ! ![]() I'm there once again to present you my brand new RMT, the second one ! (you can find the first one here http://www.smogon.com/forums/showthread.php?p=4441194.. č_é) I realised that I learned a lot by submitting the first team to the community. I improved my vision on the game through the advices of the raters, and I thank them again for their participation to my first team ! But I'm here to talk about the new one ! (them noobies try to copy his swag, they fail) ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() The theme is around "T stands for trouble" song, from my favourite singer Marvin Gaye. I found this theme to fit my team.. because damn it is cool and... well... you know... No, seriously, because my pokemons are badass (BUT KELDEO), and the "pattern" of the song fits perfectly. See as the song starts slowly... imagine a funky guy walking timidly .. then after some time he stops giving a fuck at anything and shines of true coolness (around min 1 I believe) just like this .You don't know where I'm getting at? Well i'm gonna start slowly putting hazards with my timid pokemon, then I'll roll over people with my badass pokemons... (okay I admit, I just wanted to put this song). HERE COME THE TROUBLEMAKERZ! The context/Peak :
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The context *BIS* :
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Team Building :
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The Movesets (What a cewl Black Glasses transition.. Trouble men's privilege) He's Shy, but he's tough aswell !
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SHY GUY 252 HP / 4 Def / 252 Spe (Timid Nature +Spe, -Atk) Stealth Rock Taunt Spikes Magic GuardDescription :
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When it comes to coolness, no one can compete with this guy
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@ BADASS SINCE GEN1 12 HP / 252 SpA / 244 Spe (Timid Nature +Spe, -Atk) Shadow Ball Hidden Power [Fire] Focus Blast Destiny BondDescription :
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Once you go Dark, you never come back (I know it doesn't really rhyme)
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@ TROUBLEMAKER! 252 Atk / 32 SpD / 224 Spe (Jolly Nature + Spe, -SpA) Ice Shard Night Slash Low Kick PursuitDescription :
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I'm not gonna deny it, this one is not cool.. or maybe..
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@ UGLY PONY 4 HP / 252 SpA / 252 Spe Timid Nature (+Spe, -Atk) Hydro Pump Surf Secret Sword Hidden Power [Ice]Description :
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He also got a big nose, but he wears it with class !
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SWAGON SINCE GEN1 4 HP / 252 Atk / 252 Spe Adamant Nature (+Atk, -SpA) Dragon Dance Outrage Earthquake Extreme SpeedDescription :
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Here is the Terrakion I used in the past :
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This one isn't the coolest ever, to be honest, he's a shroom, but he does KUNG-FU !
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@ KUNG-FU SHROOM Technician 252 Atk / 4 SpD / 252 Spe Adamant Nature (+Atk, -SpA) Spore Mach Punch Bullet Seed Rock TombDescription :
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Here is the Scizor I used in the past :
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Here is the Genesect I used in the past :
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Now that you know what's the deal.. As I said, I've been doing fine with this team. I'm pretty confident with the team composition in itself. I'm more worried about some sets like Keldeo's one. I don't really like to rely on a 80% accuracy stab, but I feel bad dropping a coverage move for Surf. Here is for the possible match-up. I stole it ALL from PenguinX post on the CCAT thread.. I hope it's okay and thanks for that ! I honnestly learned alot from you especially ! Match-up list :
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Defensive Threat List :
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I hope this team will be used by some people, and I hope they will enjoy playing it at least as much as I enjoyed playing with the RMT in Smogon. Considered changes : The section to keep tabs on what people suggest to the team. - Changing Keldeo move set : DONE *Thanks to DragonUser and Undisputed - Optimize items/EVs (any pro tips would be good to hear o.o) : MOSTLY DONE - Trying DD Dragonite > Terrakion as suggested by DragonUser ! DONE - Trying CB Tyranitar > Weavile as suggested by Undisputed ! DENIED - Trying to fit Focus Blast on Gengar as suggested by Undisputed ! ACCEPTED - Jellicent > Gengar as suggested by Ganj4lf DENIED (did not fit the team's dynamic as well as Gengar) - Changing Scizor to a more offensive version as suggested by GengarsNemesis, RaikouLover : DENIED - Night Slash > Ice Punch as suggested by Tiffanyy : ACCEPTED - Changing Deoxys-D item as suggested by SilentStorm : DONE - Lucario > Scizor as suggested by Dwayne : DENIED FOR NOW (I think it would need a little shift of the team, but I don't know where) - Sableye > Gengar as suggested by Letiez : DENIED - Scarf Scizor as suggested by Leftiez : DENIED - Lum Berry on Scizor as suggested by White Symphoni : ACCEPTED - Go back to my old Keldeo's set as suggested by Haineskid712 : DENIED Replays :
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But for now, no moar trouble for you mister rater/viewer,
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Team, last glance : ![]() ![]() Oh no dude, I don't forget you, my devoted musician ! You know who you are ;)
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*Importable, keep the nicks if you please ;)*
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Hey there,
This is a pretty cool offensive team, but I do see ways that it can be improved. First of all I would recommend changing Keldeo's moveset to Hydro Pump / Surf / Hidden Power [Ice] / Secret Sword. This may seem like a somewhat minor change, but it can really help Keldeo do its job better. Hydro Pump is used when the extra power is needed, but is a pretty awful move to spam. For this reason, Surf would be your goto STAB, especially early game. Hidden Power Ice is also stronger than Icy Wind vs dragons, and the lack of HP Ghost shouldn't be a huge issue as you have a Pursuiter. An effective optimization for Genesect's moveset would be 24 HP / 248 SAtk / 4 SDef / 232 Spd. This gives Genesect a LO number, while still outspeeding relevant threats. The 4 SP Def EVs prevent other Genesects from getting a Sp Attk boost vs you, which can be helpful in some situations. Ok so now onto your team as a whole. Like you mentioned Sun looks very dangerous to play against, particularly Venusaur. While you do have a few safety nets, a well played Venusaur can be very troublesome to face. To help with this I would recommend Dragon Dance Dragonite > Terrakion. Dragonite is an often forgotten threat in this metagame and can help a lot with your weakness to Rain/Sun. Dragonite still has a lot of the wallbreaking potential that Terrakion has, but has the added bonus of being a very good check to Venusaur. Anyways, hope I helped gl.
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Hey!
Solid hyper offense team. There are a couple changes you can make that I think would make a big difference. First, Weavile isn't very good. Even though it has good coverage moves, it's not powerful enough to KO everything it needs to. To keep that team slot roughly the same, I'd suggest Choice Band Tyranitar. Adamant with 100 Speed EVs would be my recommendation. Fast enough to outspeed relevant threats like Defensive Politoed, Skarmory, and Jellicent. It can pursuit Starmie for you since that is a pain for Deo-d Offense teams. Additionally, it will give you a weapon against weather teams. As long as you don't get greedy and let Dugtrio trap you, Pursuiting Ninetales should win every game against sun teams. You can also kill Xatu which sometimes shows up on Sun teams. Rain teams are obviously a little harder, but limit your switches and look for the opportune moment to get Tyranitar into Politoed. Use the EV spread dragonuser recommended for Genesect. It is the best one out there. Hidden Power Ghost on Keldeo is not worth it in my experience. I'd rather see you use HP Ice and Surf. Hydro Pump is notoriously unreliable, and I'd be doing you a disservice if I allowed you to leave without Surf. Finally, on Gengar, definitely fit Focus Blast on there somewhere. It's so valuable for hitting Tyranitar, Terrakion, and things that resist Shadow Ball. Destiny Bond is a cool move. I've experimented with Sub Leftovers Destiny Bond and had some success. Tentacruel thinks it will get a KO, but you can take it with you. Another alternative that I've had good success with is Taunt. Great at stopping opposing Deoxys-D teams, and you never know when you might need to stop Rock Polish Landorus. Good luck man!
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Join Date: Dec 2011
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Ok, first off on your terrakion set the EV's are off for sub-salac. You should be runnning 4 Hp/252 Atk/252 Spd and 30 defense IV's. This allows you to get the salac boost in 3 subs and at 25% rather than at 1%. That's all I really got lol, I really should have a better rate since HO is my favorite playstyle but oh well, other than that nice team and sweet cores!! luvdisc'd
Edit: Going to give this team a whirl on PS see if I come up with some more suggestions.
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Join Date: Oct 2012
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Thanks everybody for all your lucid feedbacks !
I'm gonna reply to each other one by one to make it at least as clear as your comments were :p @DragonUser :
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Of course you helped ! - For the Keldeo's moveset, I guess it was just a matter of time before someone convince me to change it. I was willing to have an external opinion. I'm just gonna listen to your opinion and change it. Thanks for sharing your thoughts on this point. - The Genesect spreads seems optimal, same as above. I follow your advice without any doubt, thanks again. - For the Dragonite. This point gives me some worries. I can't deny how much this Dragonite will be valuable against Sun Teams. But Terrakion was a real beast overall. Since the Dragonite I tried (Team Building) was a CB, I'm gonna try yours (nice sprite by the way). It probably will be a good asset against Rain teams aswell, and I believe Dragonite has a good chance of surviving a boosted IceBeam from RP Gensect... this can come handy quite often... I'm afraid this might urge me to get a spinner... I need to try this pokemon make up my mind, thank you for this idea ! @Undisputed :
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Thanks ;) - About Tyranitar > Weavile. I was pretty sure this would have been proposed to me sooner or later and I didn't want to face this dilemma. Tyranitar is indeed a little more powerful (+14 base Atk), and is FAR more bulky so it should be less delicate to play around the trapping. However his speed is was bothered me when I chosed the pursuiter. I know how strong is the Keldeo/Tyranitar duo. I'll give it a try, along with the Dragonite replacement (since Dragonite can't really kill a bulky Volcarona like Terrakion could, but Tyranitar could do the same job while Weavile couldn't so...). I'm not gonna talk about the ability to switch the weather, since it's obviously strong in the current metagam. But I do lose my priority to deal with the Genies/Dragons. I have no idea what I should choose. I'll try it, same as for Dragonite. Thanks. - I'm more than persuaded that I'll use this spread now ^.^ - Same goes for Keldeo, I'm happy to hear accurate and detailed opinions on this point, thank you. - If I leave Weavile, I'll definitely consider this point. I'm thinking about Focus Blast > Substitute. About Taunt, I must admit I never had the idea to use it (in this Gen at least). I'm not sure this could fit here (or maybe if I drop Magic Coat on Deoxys-D), Gengar slots seem overloaded and I don't see myself giving up one of the moves I'm using. I'm gonna try Focus Blast > Substitute. It seems good to me, thank for your ideas ! @GengarsNemisis
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Oh I'm totally sorry for this point I look ridiculous :p In fact I'm using the spread that I saw in "The Art Of Peer Pressure" team on Terrakion. I'm gonna fix this point fast because this is indeed an important point, thank you for noticing that and for your feedback. I hope you will enjoy playing this team and I'm impatient about your future opinion after trying it ;) ! * I included most of the changes mentionned above in the "considered changes", some of them went straight in the team ! * I added some replays that I forgot to include yesterday, there are some with Starmie>Keldeo. * I'll edit the Importable later when I'll have access to Showdown (wy no showdown at work :'< ) : FIXED
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Join Date: Oct 2012
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Consider it as a bump.
I did the tests for all the great suggestions you gave me and here are my conclusions : - Keldeo moveset is fixed, and it's now more stable. - Genesect's spread is perfect. - I fixed Terrakion's spread. - I'm now using Focus Blast>Substitute on Gengar are it was definitely a wise idea. For the other changes : - I will not change Weavile for Tyranitar. I gain just a little of power, and lose alot of speed and of adaptability. Weavile does already all that Tyranitar can offer me in trapping. Moreover, Tyranitar just doesn't work along with Focus Sash Gengar. Often I trap someone, then put Gengar and die miserably after the Sash activates because of the Sand Storm. It also broke Dragonite's Multiscale several times during my tests. The lack of priority hurts, Weavile is far from being as bad as you seemed to assume, he does a better job here in my opinion than Tyranitar. He can come in Gengar, and kill it by outspeeding the Gengar, same goes for Starmie. Tyranitar won't do it so easily. If my Gengar set was different, maybe Tyranitar could be great, but here he was just a burden most of the time. Sorry Tyranitar :\ - About Dragonite > Terrakion. I seriously have no idea if this is better or not, I'll keep testing it. Dragonite is slow though, Terrakion can grab more speed with the Salac, and with two moves he's more threatening than Dragonite with three. Sure Outrage is strong, but Steels are evrywhere and most of the type I boosted my Dragonite and let him die breaking one wall. I feel like Terrakion was less easily handable for my opponent. But I liked Dragonite also because he snowballs really hard after some boosts. I need more tests, I'm balancing. If possible, I'd like to hear some other opinions. Thank you again those who posted, and those who are gonna post :D EDIT : Added some replays with Dragonite : There is one I want future viewers/raters to see ! EDIT* : I'm finding Dragonite more and more attractive... EDIT** : @Youngjake93 : No way I give up Hidden Power [Fire], I see what you're trying to say, but if I lose my Sash on Gengar in such a situation I'm just stupid and I played bad. I got Magic Coat and Taunt, my Sash wont be broken so easily, at least not if I take care of it. A Flash Fire boost? to Heatran? like who cares, I dent him with Focus Blast, and then revenge kill him easily. On Chandelure? same deal I kill him with Gengar, if he's scarfed then I bet he's stuck on Shadow Ball and this is free set-up (anyway if my sash is up I just kill him, scarfed or not). Here Gengar is not meant to sweep, but to save my entry hazards and lure usual counters. I'm really not attracted by all the options you listed, Hidden Power [Fire] is the move that made me play Gengar. I don't see after all the games I played, how I could have done without it. But thank you for the feedback, you should try it, I'm sure you'll be impressed youself ^^ EDIT*** : Sitting at 1900 ACRE 2k glicko and 80 deviation, imma try to get these reqs #77 ladder MistyMint (I'm still playing with Dragonite, I'm getting more and more confidence with it). I only played 25 games since I dont have much time but I think I got a decent shot there.
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VM me for a rate in BW2 OU, my advices are free for now *Check my last RMT -Friend's Prophecy- ! And give me your opinion ! http://www.smogon.com/forums/showthread.php?t=3482863 Last edited by Remedy; Nov 21st, 2012 at 4:36:18 PM. |
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I LOVE Focus Sash Gengar, but putting HP Fire on it is a horrible idea. You lose in speed to Lati@s, Espeon and Froslass. You still lose to Scizor if your Sash isn't intact. It doesn't help against anything other than Scizor except possibly Venusaur. You have to give up a whole moveslot. Plus there is the off-chance that you could accidentally give a Flash Fire boost away.
Thunder or Sludge Bomb would be a better spot in that slot. Thunder obliterates things like Politoed, Gyarados, Vaporeon, Skarmory, and all sorts of other things that would normally give you an unfavorable match-up. Thunderbolt can be used for more consistency of course, but you mainly want the move to counter rain. Sludge Bomb does 12.5% more damage to neutral opponents and has an amazing 30% chance to poison that makes a huge difference. 12.5% chopped off of their HP can make a huge difference between 2hkos and 3hkos. If for some reason, you don't like those options, then Taunt/Icy Wind have good synergy with Destiny Bond. Protect, Clear Smog/Haze, heck even Trick/Thief would all work with a Focus Sash set. Or you could even put Substitute back on if you really want to. |
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So here I am. The first thing that attracted my attention upon seeing your team is the weakness to Scizor. Terrakion and Weavile just lose to it, and Gengar will, too, if Sash is broken. Deoxys-D has Tanga Berry, sure, bit it can't do jack anyway, and if Scizor U-Turns to a Spinner that can hurt Gengar somehow (Tentacruel, for example) you're in a very bad position. Keldeo and Genesect are both without recovery, and will be worn down even to resisted U-Turns, or Superpowers if the opponent is good enough to predict correctly. Also, 4 out of 6 of your pokemons don't enjoy Mach Punches, too, so I'd say you have quite a problem with priority attacks.
Water attacks seem problematic, too. Scarf Keldeo can spam Hydro Pumps in rain and the only thing you can do is use your own Keldeo to stop that rampaging pony (Dragonite is 2HKO'd after Rocks), and even with that you need to rely on a speed tie since even the pony is 2HKO'd. So, I know that this may sound weird, but Jellicent solves all of these problems suddently. I know, that Gengar set is sexy and I even like it a lot, but it relies entirely on surprise factor to do its job, and if the opponent manages to lay some SR or set up Sandstorm before you can surprise kill its Starmie or whatever, you're in a quite big problem. Jellicent, on the other hand, is incredibly bulky on the special side, and can work as a defensive pivot, spinblocker that is hardly beaten by any spinners (Starmie needs LO and Thunder hitting twice to 2HKO). Pursuiters can't switch in to remove it since they will take WoW on the switch, and since CB Scizor's Pursuit isn't even a 2HKO, they will be worn down and eventually beaten with Scald. Other than that, Jellicent can take Bullet Punches for ages, is immune to Mach Punch (although it loses to Breloom and Conkeldurr with Payback, but Lum DDNite can conveniently handle both), is almost completely immune to Bullet Punch Lucario, that is gaining popularity to beat Kerrakion, and is the ultimate stop to Keldeo, since it's immune to its STABs, and takes 48% max from a SE Specs Hidden Power (meaning you can just switch out after the first one and take advantage of it). While it may seem weird to use such a defensive pokemon in an offensive team, it covers so many weaknesses that surely deserves a mention. It could work or not, but I'd give it a try regardless.
Jellicent
For the rest of your team, previous raters had covered pretty much it has to be said I guess, so...props for using Weavile and good luck! Hope my rate helped somewhat.
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Join Date: Oct 2012
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@Ganj4lf :
- About Jellicent > Gengar. This is what I didnt really want to hear to be honest. It's hard for me to answer to that. All your points make sense, don't get me wrong, this is a well though change. Moreover you pointed the Bullet Punch Weakness that oddly, nobody else talked about. However I'm well aware of that, and it seems weird, but Gengar is my weapon against these Bullet Punch. With Dragonite now in the team (yes it's unfair in fact for you to rate, I'm sorry for this point), and Terrakion out, I have another answer to Scizor. So basically if there is Tentacruel and Scizor, I let my Gengar be killed by Tentacruel as I Destiny Bond, OR I killed both of them if Scizor came first to Bullet. If he didn't come I just kill Tentacruel and I handle later Scizor. If he kills Keldeo with Superpower it's fine for me, as I can set-up with Dragonite or Genesect after. Most of the time, they never Superpower because they are afraid of that. By the way I did put a replay in which I fight a Tentacruel and a Lucario under rain, and I even failed to kill Tentacruel with Gengar (but was able to put enough pressure so he doesn't spin). BUT, Jellicent patchs a alot of weakness and is a great partner of Weavile. I'll try it, but I'm afraid it doesn't fit the idea I had of how I wanted to play this team. This is the sole reason why I think I probably won't make this change. I prefer play high risk high reward with Gengar, than break the dynamic of the team with Jellicent. Even if this forces me to play carefully. I was aware of this point when I built the team. So thank you for the rate, to tell you the truth, for the Defense of the Titan, I posted a team with both Jellicent and Weavile already. So I'm really not lying when I say that I agree it's good. But Gengar, while sometime less reliable, is the key of many games. Yes if I lose the surprise factor, it's another story, but I like it this way. I even met people who knew the RMT, I still managed to win. Well you can know it has Destiny Bond, sometimes people spot it, but I can play with the fear of the Destiny Bond aswell. I can guess you took time to think about an improvement given the change you propose me. And the answer I can give you isn't perfect. For now I'll stick to Gengar, mainly because I think I can get the reqs with this team, and because I'm really used to Gengar. I will put it in the considered changes, mainly to offer your change to the people who don't like this Gengar. I'll still try it, it may not change the dynamic of the team as much as I thought. /// I want to say that I'll change Terrakion for Dragonite. It is definitely a GREAT change. I must thank DragonUser for that, really :) I did some ladder tonight (around 7 games), and I did nothing but win, I'm now at more than 2k glicko, so I just need to lower my deviation for now. I keep learning about this team. I keep learning about how Weavile is in fact an insane pokemon. Killing stuff like Breloom with only Ice shard is just incredibly useful. So here is the proof for my ladder, I'll keep trying to increase it to show how strong this team can be, given what I do with it as a beginner in the game. ![]() EDIT : It goes pretty fast, it's been like 20games that I only win. I'm #29 right now. EDIT : I got the reqs for OU current now... job has been done, and this team deserves a lil more love imo :<
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VM me for a rate in BW2 OU, my advices are free for now *Check my last RMT -Friend's Prophecy- ! And give me your opinion ! http://www.smogon.com/forums/showthread.php?t=3482863 Last edited by Remedy; Nov 23rd, 2012 at 4:09:12 PM. |
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Join Date: Oct 2012
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/!\ Awkward double post !
Since it's soon the end of the Suspect for Genesect, I'm pretty sad to see that this team was so unpopular. It has been proved that this team could shine, and I don't even consider myself close from being a good battler yet. So yes, bumping with the "peak", just to attract people. And if the "peak" can also prove that I'm not using these pokemons just because I like them, but because they fulfil some specific roles, it would be cool. By the way I tried Jellicent, it is good with Weavile for sure. But it slows down the tempo too much. In another team it would have been ok, but here, I want to keep my enemy under pressure. However since Jellicent is a great partner of Weavile, I encourage people to play this core in another team, probably in a more Stallish one (here I lose my main security net for Genesect, and this is rough :\) This is the last "attempt to bump". I'll probably update it after the Genesect ban (if it does occur) obviously, but it would need some more knowledge on the future possible metagame.
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VM me for a rate in BW2 OU, my advices are free for now *Check my last RMT -Friend's Prophecy- ! And give me your opinion ! http://www.smogon.com/forums/showthread.php?t=3482863 Last edited by Remedy; Nov 26th, 2012 at 6:16:23 AM. |
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Join Date: Oct 2012
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/!\ Genesect Ban !
As predicted, as desired, Genesect is gone. So I had to find a replacement and here it is. That's the occasion to BUMP. Replaced Genesect for Scizor, it was a pretty straight forward change, I builded the team on each other weakness, I needed a Steel pokemon. Anyway, everything is in the need description. Let's hope this time, the team will get more love, before dying once and for all. That's what I did in like ~20 games, I'll try to do another peek later :
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VM me for a rate in BW2 OU, my advices are free for now *Check my last RMT -Friend's Prophecy- ! And give me your opinion ! http://www.smogon.com/forums/showthread.php?t=3482863 Last edited by Remedy; Nov 30th, 2012 at 3:52:21 PM. |
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Hmm I'm not sure I like the bulky rain scizor on this team, and i feel roost is kind of not neeeded on HO. How about something more like this?
(badass sprite) ![]() 252 Atk / 4 SpD / 252 Spe Jolly Nature -Bug Bite -Bullet Punch -Brick Break -Swords Dance I think you should give this scizor set a go, its a much more offensive variant of what you have. I noticed you complained about his coverage, that's where brick break comes in, hitting steels and heatrans hard. And why don't we give scizors metal coat back to him? The 20% bullet punch boost while retaining some bulk is pretty welcome. Of course you can sub in life orb if your not getting some important kills. The jolly nature is neccessary for beating specially defensive heatran(Unfortunately doesn't outspeed offensive hetran). Overall give this guy a try! Ill test him out too!
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Hey just a small rate since i suck at these things but, you have a pretty big problem with jellicent if Dnite dies (even then if it switches in it risks a burn). Gengar won't be doing much to spdef versions, especially without Life Orb.
I suggest using Night Slash > Ice Punch on weavile, since pursuit won't be doing much to it, and both moves generally do the same things.
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Hey there.
It's very nice to see Weavile used, ludvisc'd. So, Jellicent is perhaps a bit problematic for your team, you require prediction with Weavile in order to kill him, some type of stall team may also give you problems. The first thing I want to suggest you is to remove Tanga Berry on Deo, now that genesect is banned the item is pretty much useless, you may want to try Rocky Helmet or Red Card in order to mess up with ''u-turn sheaningans'' with Xatu. Then I would go with Adamant on Dragonite, this way you can 2hko opposing Skarmory 100% of time with Fire Punch after a Dragon Dance. Alas, something that can help you against Jellicent and Stall teams is Rotom-w over Keldeo Rotom-w can help you keeping momentum with Volt Switch, and Trick is a great move in order to make useless an important member of a defensive core, as a bonus Rotom-w is capable of spamming strong Hydro Pumps in the rain and tanking Bullet punch with ease just as keldeo does. hope it helped, good luck!
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Hi Remedy,
This team took a hit with the ban of Genesect causing you to loose one of your main set up sweepers. While Scizor does a darn good job at filling genesect's place what you really need is a set up sweeper who alone can wreck weakened teams and is fast enough to do so. Keeping that in mind I couldn't help but notice that Agility Lucario would be a option to replace Genesect and could possibly do a better job that Scizor. With Lucario you get your steel type with an ice and dragon resist and a much better set up sweeper than Scizor in my opinion. On the downside though you loose priority in BP so the choice is yours. I'm not a so called rater so thats all i have for you.Here's the set that i suggest Agility Lucario: Lucario @ Life Orb Ability: Justified EVs: 252 Atk / 4 Def / 252 Spe Adamant Nature - Close Combat - Ice Punch - Crunch - Agility Hope i helped. Last edited by Dwayne; Dec 1st, 2012 at 1:13:06 AM. |
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Join Date: Oct 2012
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Hi, I'm so happy to see all these new opinions, it's really cool !
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Hi pal, I tried a little this set, but it didn't work that well. I'll explain why simply. You focused your set on Heatran, but you know before, I had Genesect ;) So Heatran isn't really something coming out of the blue for this team, I always had to deal with it. You set is cool because he beats some SDef version, however I lose so much bulk (being able to tank Specs Tornadus-T Hurricane is... huge). So I'll keep testing it, but I doubt this will be as good as the bulky version. I feel like this Scizor is outclassed by Lucario ! Don't you think so? Thank you for all your support by the way. Pretty nasty sprite :o ! @Tiffanyy :
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I'll try it, it's a tough choice, I'll make another account and test it to see if sometimes I'm missing the loss of Ice Punch or not. Thank you. @The Silent Storm :
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Hi, for Tanga Berry I'll try everything you suggested. However I want to say that Tanga is still REALLY useful because many people traded Gene RP/Scarf for a Scizor, and these Scizor come on me T1, so it's really not only for Genesect. The Adamant Nature, at first I was like "what but, I got it already" and I realised that in fact in the importable the Dragonite's Nature was Jolly (whereas in the description it is Adamant). It was a mistake that I'll fix ! For Rotom-W, the issue is that if I got bulky I lose too much power, and if I go offensive, I'll lose crucial 1V1 since Rotom-W is too slow. But I'll try it since I'm interested in a Stab Electric attack. But I lose the mixed power of Secret Sword and HPump. Thanks, and for sure it helped ! @Shurtugal :
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I peaked when I was getting the reqs, so it was before Genesect's ban in the OUcurrent ladder. I didn't play with this version of the team on the suspect to get the reqs because I had no time given what happened with the Smogon Tournament. I'll put the picture, I always forget to do so since I'm using different computers etc. @Dwayne :
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Hi, yup Lucario is pretty damn tempting ! To be honest I ran many tests (even before the ban). I tried stuff like Victini Lucario Jirachi etc. Lucario loses something crucial, the ability to take Outrages decently like Genesect and Scizor. However I tried the SD set, and not the Agility set (which is pretty interesting). I'll try it, thank, and of course it helped ;)
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Nice team! I may want to try this myself!
Your team's biggest issue I think looks to be Bulky Waters. I watched a few of your matches... Tentacruel seems really annoying! I don't really know what can remedy that other than switching your Keldeo for a Rotom-W, but then you do lose a Rock resist! Try these Scizor spreads and see which one you like best. Leftovers Scizor is just too weak. Scizor @ Life Orb Trait: Technician EVs: 96 Atk / 232 HP / 164 SDef / 16 Spd Adamant Nature - Bullet Punch - Bug Bite / Superpower - Swords Dance - Roost Superpower is coverage. Scizor always wants Life Orb. He isn't affected by Sandstorm and you want a free 30% boost to Bullet Punch for revenge killing purposes. Scizor @ Life Orb Trait: Technician EVs: 252 Atk / 152 HP / 104 Spd Adamant Nature - Bullet Punch - Superpower - Bug Bite / Pursuit - Swords Dance Offensive Scizor. HP is a Life Orb Number. The speed outspeeds 0 Speed Heatran if you get backed into a corner late in the match and have no choice. Pursuit should be considered because you can potentially drop Weavile (though not as effective against Xatu). If you were to drop Weavile, you could replace him with Rotom-W, who will help you against Bulky Waters. This is the Rotom-W set I use: Rotom-Wash @ Expert Belt Trait: Levitate EVs: 252 HP / 132 Spd / 124 SAtk Modest Nature - Volt Switch - Thunderbolt - Hydro Pump - Hidden Power [Fire] / Thunder Wave T-Wave is good for Lati@, who are a common switch. Hidden Power Fire hurts Abomasnow, Ferrothorn, Forretress, Scizor, Breloom, etc.
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It is an original team and effective on the whole, correct Build team but there is some flaw in the teambuilder, I understand not why you put Gengar Focus sash, you have laid the Destiny Bond move but the spinners in OU are Starmie, Tentacruel, Forre3 this set will be used has nothing against them, especially as it is an offense its' necessary finish the opponent at least quickly by playing this set you do that contradict the strategy of the team, I would advise you to sableye as gengar is not very bulky overall and will be clear of the field very quickly, sableye it can fit easily and has the Recover move + special attack Prankster to attack first when it is attacked by status then with Night shade it can tapper and WoW for the Sweepers that need to stand and then following the well it will be very boring and it will a very competitive pressure for you! Sableye does have any weakness so will usually get on any it sweep, the only Pokémon that can be annoying to him is Starmie LO Hydropump or Starmie Hydropump/Surf under Rain, where it can be full def spec as you possess not Rotom for the kill.
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Then I noticed that you put Scizor SD however normally the aim is to put pressure with the Sr + Spikes while preventing the spinn, here you leave the 3 spinners place without worries pushing in the switch and making it become useless! Especially it will leave other Pokémon stand as Skarmory/Nite/Tran. It will hurt at the end but will not come before, it's a bit as if you began to 5 Pokemon because it will inevitably disadvantage the team! I you Council therefore to Scizor scarf, he can come on Starmie, and returning to then prevent the spinns pass, accompanied by of EH's a great pressure will mount on the opposing team while keeping the EH's field by pivoting with Sableye!
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I put Bullet Punch instead of Night Slash because there are Weavile that trapp with Pursuit and that without this move Terrakion will stand and will become so quite annoying, there at least you earn a good coverage. Good Luck. ~ Leftiez
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Hi RaikouLover and Leftiez (pretty tricky comment bro :D ).
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These Scizor sets are really interesting, I'll try them both even if Life Orb (yes I know it helps to take some kills) is a little annoying. Basically I tried to fit Superpower somewhere for Heatran... and then I thought "Why do I even bother?". I mean, before I had Genesect ! it's like, even worse, so I was able to beat Heatran before and I'll still be able to. Simply because Scizor (like Genesect) is here supposed to come in the end, and Heatran comes earlier and I usually set Dragonite on it, kill it with Low Kick from Weavile, Focus Blast on Gengar or Destiny Bond, or by Keldeo. I tried Rotom-W, to be honest it didn't like it on Keldeo at all. While it can seem cool to have a Electric move, I lose so much power (with Secret Sword and the SpA), so much Speed, and I even lose bulkyness (neutral to SR, low HP). I didn't like it at all, Weavile with Night Slash (I decided to take this change) can deal with Jellicent, Scizor 2HKO the SpD version (I think) at +2 with Bug Bite, Gengar kills it and Dragonite set up freely on it. It is a defensive threat obviously, but no need to be overprepared for it and sacrifice so much power. However thank you for the rate, I'll give a try to these Scizor set as I'm deeply pondering on how I'll play him, these suggestions fuel my tests. I'm currently trying an offensive version with Bug Gem (lol I never saw that anywhere xD), and it is pretty cool in fact ;D. I'll try a Steel Gem, but as I spam Bullet Punch a little more I don't know if it works. For now I'm not convinced that any of these Scizor does better that the set I have... I need tests :\ @Leftiez :
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Thank you Leftiez ;) It was a little hard to read sometimes (hehehe), but at least I was able to understand all the suggestions. Sableye on Gengar is... well to be honest I don't like it at all, so instead of trying this, I'll rather try to convince you. You talk about Forretress, I 0HKO it with Gengar, that's not an issue. You talk about Tentacruel, it's an issue, but Gengar can lower it pretty hard with Shadow Ball (if DBond fails, I can trap/Set-up and force him to leave) and kill it with Destiny Bond. For Starmie, it's a little more delicate, but it's maybe the easiest. I go to Gengar : - If he Psychic, I survive with Sash and I'm at 1 HP, then I switch to Weavile (they never HPump a 1Hp Gengar and the offensive version is rare) and kill it with Pursuit as Weavile is faster. Sometimes, if I feel like I can, I just sac a pokemon (like Deoxys-D if possible), to bring Weavile and kill it. - If he doesn't attack and Spin, I survive the next attack and kill him thanks to Sash. Moreover most of the time, Starmie comes on Deoxys-D so I can play with it (there is a replay where I do), untill I'm sure he will not attack. Basically I let him spin as I keep setting Hazards until the moment when I switch by surprise to Gengar/Weavile. Moreover, Gengar put a big pressure on the enemy and Sableye change makes me weaker to a lot of defensive threats that have been mentionned before. About Scizor, I know that you did it to patch Starmie weakness but really, it's no big deal. Starmie is really easily controlled by my team at the moment. The Scarf lower too much my tempo, and U-Turn is too tricky for this team (I break Sash, Multiscale etc by switching) and my Pokemons are frail and don't like take hazard damages freely. I really prefer a version able to set-up on someone else's weakness than a Scarf one. But thanks anyway, I see that you put a lot of efforts here. I'd say, try this Gengar, for real, he can seem totally gimmick, but he works so great. While he's not always easy to master (sometimes you have to sacrifice him for some crucial turns/damages) he can win games on its own and definitely, he always has a way to block spin. This team is all about cost/advantage and I like it this way.
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This is an excellent HO team and I really like the use of Weavile and Focus Sash Genger.So props for that.I feel this team doesn't really need much change.So I suggest a minor change on Scizor of switching Lefties for Lum Berry.
From my experience with Bulky SD Scizor,I found Lum Berry way more useful than lefties.Lum Berry lets you escape the Scald burn from Bulky waters and lets you deal with them quite comfortably.There were plenty of times things like Bulky Toed,Tentacruel and Jellicent switched in on my Scizor to stop it's sweep and almost all the time Scizor managed to beat them thanks to Lum berry,often deciding the result of the match.It also lets you catch a Breloom by surprise once it knows you're defensive and decides to spore and beat Defensive Rotom-W variants with WoW .You can also fake CB sometimes and net a surprise kill.
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Indeed but you say that you can switch on weavile, you seem to forget than weavil don't OHKO Starmie steps and therefore it will be kill in the next round putting you a bit shit because you have no pokemon to outspeed then in addition you don't OHKO pas Forretress and so it can place a gyroball and end or place the Sr's / Spikes but if you want to play it I can not prevent you and then to Scizor you're certainly right, you want to take free damage but will need to make a choice between letting the spinn spinners as they want or make the scoots by putting pressure on the opponent stating that you have a very good synergy allowing you to come on any attack without having a big impact so I think that on this point there you have false after if the team works well why change? You do not change a winning team. GG and Good luck! ~Leftiez
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Really nice team! Only suggestion is changing Hidden Power Ice, to ghost and switching Surf or Pump to icy wind. So you get the same coverage, but aren't completely walled by Jellicent (:
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Join Date: Oct 2012
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I tried this change, and it worked pretty well ! I take it, thank you ! @Leftiez :
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When I don't kill Starmie (the bulky versions) I leave them with something like 5-10%. This said, I can switch to Dragonite and Extreme Speed, the Hazards are still up. If he spins on the first turn when I Pursuit, I can still put Hazards later again, since they usually go Starmie early on Deoxys-D as I switch to one of my answers. For Forretress, Gengar is my go to go counter, he won't do enough damages, and I kill him. Fine, if he GyroBall on the switch then switch out I put myself in a tought situation but that's not so big an issue since they usually don't do that (afraid on the sub/painsplit etc), and since I still have Dragonite/Keldeo to annoy him (plus Scizor set up on him quite easily). Thank you anyway ;p @Haineskid712 :
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I'm wondering on this point, as you may have see, this was the moveset I used in the past. I'll keep tabs on this possibility in the future, thank you ! ///////////////////////////////////////////////////// I'm also pondering on another change. This would be a Dark Gem for Weavile and Earthquake for Dragonite over Fire Punch. With the Dark Gem I don't need anymore Night Slash. With Ice Punch back (and since Weavile is so fast) I wouldn't need Ice Shard so much anymore aswell, so the loss of Life Orb wouldn't hurt since I'd use Ice Punch along. The only drawback is the loss of power of Low Sweep, BUT I still KO easily any Tyranitar, KO Terrakio after SR and Spikes damages (this can be annoying but I have Scizor so..), KO Lucario after Spikes and LO damage... I deal something like 65% to Bulky Heatran... but now Dragonite Set-up on him easily with EQ. I also lose some power against Mach Punch users that I used to KO straigh. Like Breloom, I only do a little more than 60% now. This being said, with Lum Berry on Scizor now too, Breloom is a pretty good set-up fodder for me (Dragonite, and Gengar revenges him easily). On the other hand, the loss of Fire Punch is annoying to hit stuff like Skarmory, Bronzong, that I never really see anyway. Also, it's not a deadweight move in the Rain (and I got no way to change the weather so..) and the Power is higher. I want some opinions on this point ;)
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Just want to post saying that I would strongly advise against dropping Ice Shard on Weavile. It gives you a solid way to revenge Dragon-Types that managed to setup and helps a lot vs stuff like +2 Landorus or Thundurus-T. Its general utility is part of what makes Weavile so valuable.
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