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Old May 3rd, 2013, 7:28:50 PM   #1476
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Yupyup, I'll get working on Slowbro, then. Anyways, Kabutops (OU Revamp) is now fully written.
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Old May 3rd, 2013, 10:02:29 PM   #1477
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Katikiri said that he's giving up Smeargle. I'd be glad to finish it for him.
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Old May 5th, 2013, 1:35:41 AM   #1478
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Accelgor (BW2 Revamp) is completed.
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Old May 5th, 2013, 8:17:26 AM   #1479
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Swamp-Rocket is not working on Tangrowth anymore, so whoever wants it can have it.
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Old May 5th, 2013, 7:28:09 PM   #1480
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Swamp-Rocket is not working on Tangrowth anymore, so whoever wants it can have it.
I'm new to this, but I wouldn't mind doing this for my first one!

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Old May 11th, 2013, 9:29:15 PM   #1481
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Unfortunately I lost access to internet on the previous month, I am probably getting internet back again but I cannot guarantee this. This is the reason why I was not able to do any changes on the previous analysis that I was writing, such as Keldeo (the EB set), Gliscor, Heatran, Tentacruel and Starmie.

I would like to know if I could get back the analysis that were taken over if their current writers are not paying attention to them (except, of course, the analysis that were already written and uploaded on site).

Besides that, I would like to know what you guys think of the current Landorus analysis. I would like to know if I could made some little changes or even an entirely new analysis (or at least a revamp to the Sheer Force set with changes on the Checks and Counters section), this is because the analysis is lacking some things, such as mentions to counters to the Sheer Force Landorus set: such as Chansey, Latias, Celebi, Gyarados, and specially defensive Bronzong.
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Old May 12th, 2013, 6:05:27 PM   #1482
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Going to clear up the unreserved list by reserving Crawdaunt.

EDIT: Oh ye, and I am also reserving Sheer Force Conkeldurr.

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Old May 13th, 2013, 3:22:52 PM   #1483
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Mienshao is ready for GP checks.
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Old May 14th, 2013, 10:32:35 PM   #1484
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Tangrowth is fully written and ready for the last QC check.
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Old May 15th, 2013, 7:00:22 PM   #1485
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So this is probably a little late, but I've got a Sableye BW2 revamp up and in WIP
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Old May 16th, 2013, 8:29:12 PM   #1486
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Mienshao is ready to go onsite.
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Old May 21st, 2013, 1:01:25 AM   #1487
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If someone would so kindly rewrite the Smeargle Overview and the first set of it in the OU Analysis to make it seem like its only sets aren't the Baton Passing one, I would appreciate it! Thanks.
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Old May 21st, 2013, 4:19:40 AM   #1488
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I can do that, but is the Lead set being stricken from the site? That just seems like a weird move if we're completely ignoring it in the Overview and suddenly whoop there it is.
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Old May 21st, 2013, 8:38:41 AM   #1489
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Wait, are you sure you don't mean to rewrite the overview so it looks like Smeargle can do other things then just the Baton Pass? The Lead Smeargle set was just uploaded yesterday...are they already thinking about evicting it?
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Old May 21st, 2013, 6:34:01 PM   #1490
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Sorry, I typo'd. I meant to reflect the fact that it now has a lead set and its only niche isn't BP (which is how it is right now).
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Old May 22nd, 2013, 2:32:05 AM   #1491
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Okay, I can do that.
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Old May 24th, 2013, 12:07:36 AM   #1492
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Has custap berry Wobbufet been covered yet???
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Old May 24th, 2013, 12:36:07 AM   #1493
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I don't think so. There isn't an analysis for it onsite.
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Old May 24th, 2013, 7:34:39 AM   #1494
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I know it was written only a few months ago by one of our most trusted QC members, but I'm wondering if Baton Pass Celebi needs updating. I don't think the moveset is right (should have recover unless being used on full bp. Definitely no excuse for HP Fire), and the analysis fails to mention the main selling points of the set - for instance, it suggests that pursuit is a problem, rather than telling you that Baton Pass completely solves that problem. It doesn't tell you that Baton pass celebi is basically just a specially defensive celebi, using baton pass to escape pursuit and to do something meaningful when it's so totally walled by so many things.

I'm happy to do it myself, although I definitely won't write it for a couple of weeks due to exams.
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Old May 24th, 2013, 7:57:54 PM   #1495
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hi I can handle custap wobbuffet; I'll talk with QC to get a plan of what exactly needs to be done and do it.
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Old May 25th, 2013, 12:23:12 AM   #1496
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Bump. Anyone willing to rewrite the Intro and first set to Smeargle to get rid of the idea that its only niche is Baton Pass?
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Old May 25th, 2013, 3:15:02 PM   #1497
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Ye, I'll do it like a boss.
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