(5th Gen) Driving under the summer sun, and the GPS is telling me to make a U-turn... - Page 3

Vratix · Aug 10th, 2011, 8:35:16 AM

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There are only eight gyros and twice the number or subs. Also makes sense. When you're hungry, you'll find that a sub is far more filling than a gyro.

Winning.
9/10

windwolf777 · Aug 10th, 2011, 10:16:34 AM

Aaaaaamazing ! All i have to say without being generic
-Amazing Predictions
-Sweet Commentary
-Nice use of a Sun team
-10/10+ Luv

**PK Gaming** · Aug 10th, 2011, 11:51:25 AM

I'm Green, this warstory is Bulbasaur.

Ashenlock · Aug 10th, 2011, 12:14:15 PM

I had the chance to read this again, and I think I'll renege on my earlier score >.> It was very good, and definitely a cut above the normal stuff. 8.5/10 sounds about right. Keep writing! You don't read stories like this every day.

November Blue · Aug 10th, 2011, 2:45:24 PM

This is the best warstory in the history of the universe.

StallMandibuzz · Aug 10th, 2011, 8:46:07 PM

Very nice warstory. 10/10. This is the type of story I love reading, keep making them. ^_^

AuraSphere · Aug 10th, 2011, 9:36:08 PM

10/10 Dayum this was great, the battle was great, and the commentary was great. You deserve the Luvdisc.

WhiteWizard42 · Aug 11th, 2011, 12:13:40 AM

Great story.

Everyone commenting on other random references and nobody caught the Magic: the Gathering one?

(the Borborygmos/Wreak Havoc/Protean Hulk flavor texts always make me snicker.)

Shaggles · Aug 11th, 2011, 5:30:20 AM

One of the best stories I've read in a while. 9/10 and a luvdisc to you.

Lork · Aug 11th, 2011, 11:30:39 AM

ive been trying to get rid of mini pig and mini king adelburn for ages, ill give you both for 100k, special deal for the good warstory.

Redtype · Aug 11th, 2011, 12:50:29 PM

Good battle and awesome story. I especially enjoyed the Guild Wars references :) (for bonus points, Gengar is actually named Ectoplasma in French)

UnCharted · Aug 11th, 2011, 1:18:25 PM

this was a really great war story got me reading from start 2 finish great job. Keep making great war storys ^_^ Luvdisc from me

vraikou · Aug 15th, 2011, 2:52:33 AM

Reading this really makes me realize I've never played a sun team properly.

Your stories are awesome. Keep making 'em. :)

Negi · Aug 15th, 2011, 7:54:58 PM

I'm a little late to the warstory.

No hax, lots of predictions, it was nice, thanks for keeping me entertained. MVP in my opinion would go to the bros, they ran things over.

Kindrindra · Aug 17th, 2011, 5:23:40 PM

The best warstory I've read in a while. Both you and your opponent played quite well, which kept the story interesting.

And your commentary was fantastic. :D

StallMandibuzz · Aug 20th, 2011, 4:15:10 PM

I read your last warstory too, Alpha, and I can understand why it was archived. You write really well, and both warstories were really well thought out and your thought processes were explained step-by-step. Make more warstories, since you clearly know what you're doing. You get another 10/10 from me. :P Keep that fantastic commentary coming!

alexwolf · Aug 20th, 2011, 7:25:14 PM

Very nice warstory man!I mean almost perfect!
9.5/10!
The only little mistake that i found was when you where talking about Inferanpe.Somewhere in your battle you use CC with infernape against heatran and the opponent switches to celebi.
Then you switch out to something while the opponent switches out also.
And then you say that you shouldn't have chickened out because no sane celebi would stay in against an infernape.
The thing is that your infernape didn't had any life orb damage and your opponent has seen that.So it was very safe for you to assume that he would keep celebi in to take the choice locked CC again....

DutchSanta · Aug 22nd, 2011, 2:45:53 AM

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Originally Posted by Fat WhiteWizard42

Great story.

Everyone commenting on other random references and nobody caught the Magic: the Gathering one?

(the Borborygmos/Wreak Havoc/Protean Hulk flavor texts always make me snicker.)

I caught the references to the Gruul flavor text. I also saw him sneak the names of a recently dominant deck and one of a recent cycle of lands into the story.

Twannes · Aug 22nd, 2011, 5:44:52 AM

10/10 obviously. This warstory was fun to read, with some jokes thrown in there. luvdisk all the way.

JGillard · Aug 22nd, 2011, 4:14:59 PM

Nice story! There were some pretty poor predictions on your opponents side, but you did a very good job!
I give this a 10/10

gallade_12 · Aug 22nd, 2011, 5:54:31 PM

Next time I'll be on your team. Dont worry.

Darthenos · Aug 29th, 2011, 10:24:30 PM

I loved your random comments. the Earthbound series is overated imo haha. but seriously, good job.

Wafflez · Aug 30th, 2011, 12:23:05 PM

Stfu earthbound is DA shit :#

But anyway yeah that was a really good warstory.
9/10.

I would luvdisc it but its at 69 luvdiscs it cant really get any more epicer then that m8 =p

alphatron · Aug 30th, 2011, 1:45:00 PM

Thanks!

And Earthbound does get more praise than it deserves, but I love the mother series all the same.

Not So Gallant Gallade · Aug 31st, 2011, 8:43:39 AM

I hath given thou a 70th Luvdisc to add to thou's collection.

In understandable terms, I got none of the references to things like Magic or Death Note, and yet still found this funny and great to read. It makes me want to try a sun team, even though the hipster inside me means that the only successful weather team I've made so far is Hail.

Aug 10th, 2011, 10:16:34 AM	#52
windwolf777 Join Date: Jun 2010 Posts: 164 Inside the Fire, in the Asylum, chilling with The Animal, gettin Down With the Sicknesses	Aaaaaamazing ! All i have to say without being generic -Amazing Predictions -Sweet Commentary -Nice use of a Sun team -10/10+ Luv __________________ http://www.smogon.com/forums/showthread.php?t=3463764 Why not try hackmon ? Where nothing is impossible and only the strong survive FREE ORIGINAL THUNDER BRO........ AND DRILL

Aug 10th, 2011, 11:51:25 AM	#53
PK Gaming Quiet Thunder God Moderator Join Date: Aug 2009 Posts: 4,524 Izanagi	I'm Green, this warstory is Bulbasaur. __________________

Aug 10th, 2011, 12:14:15 PM	#54
Ashenlock Join Date: Aug 2007 Posts: 954 Drinking more Coca-Cola than all the polar bears combined.	I had the chance to read this again, and I think I'll renege on my earlier score >.> It was very good, and definitely a cut above the normal stuff. 8.5/10 sounds about right. Keep writing! You don't read stories like this every day. __________________ 441 D/Cs and counting, baby! The Jerk Store* <- For reference only Contrary to popular belief, this is not a compendium of people who disconnect on Wi-Fi. See: Seinfeld*, "The Comeback."

Aug 10th, 2011, 9:36:08 PM	#57
AuraSphere Join Date: Mar 2009 Posts: 550 i'm batcrap insane	10/10 Dayum this was great, the battle was great, and the commentary was great. You deserve the Luvdisc. __________________ I'm hooked on My Little Pony: Friendship is Magic. It's like crack, it's ADDICTING.

Aug 11th, 2011, 12:50:29 PM	#61
Redtype Join Date: Aug 2009 Posts: 742 Caution - Sawsbucks on road	Good battle and awesome story. I especially enjoyed the Guild Wars references :) (for bonus points, Gengar is actually named Ectoplasma in French) __________________ Trading is a serious business. White FC: 1678 3054 7710 SoulSilver FC: 2622 5126 4730

Aug 10th, 2011, 2:45:24 PM	#55
November Blue Join Date: Oct 2010 Posts: 1,465	This is the best warstory in the history of the universe.

Aug 10th, 2011, 8:46:07 PM	#56
StallMandibuzz Join Date: May 2011 Posts: 779 Do what you want 'cause a pirate is free, you are a pirate!~~~	Very nice warstory. 10/10. This is the type of story I love reading, keep making them. ^_^

Aug 11th, 2011, 12:13:40 AM	#58
WhiteWizard42 Join Date: Jul 2007 Posts: 5	Great story. Everyone commenting on other random references and nobody caught the Magic: the Gathering one? (the Borborygmos/Wreak Havoc/Protean Hulk flavor texts always make me snicker.)

Aug 11th, 2011, 5:30:20 AM	#59
Shaggles Join Date: Mar 2011 Posts: 42	One of the best stories I've read in a while. 9/10 and a luvdisc to you.

Aug 11th, 2011, 11:30:39 AM	#60
Lork Join Date: Dec 2010 Posts: 232	ive been trying to get rid of mini pig and mini king adelburn for ages, ill give you both for 100k, special deal for the good warstory.

Aug 11th, 2011, 1:18:25 PM	#62
UnCharted Join Date: Jul 2011 Posts: 4 Swag City	this was a really great war story got me reading from start 2 finish great job. Keep making great war storys ^_^ Luvdisc from me __________________ PUT ME UNDER PRESSURE I'MMA PULL A ROBERT HORRY Last edited by UnCharted; Aug 11th, 2011 at 1:18:57 PM. Reason: forgot to add im lovediscing

Aug 15th, 2011, 2:52:33 AM	#63
vraikou Join Date: Mar 2010 Posts: 58	Reading this really makes me realize I've never played a sun team properly. Your stories are awesome. Keep making 'em. :)

Aug 15th, 2011, 7:54:58 PM	#64
Negi Join Date: May 2011 Posts: 24 I refute your logic, yet you still persist.	I'm a little late to the warstory. No hax, lots of predictions, it was nice, thanks for keeping me entertained. MVP in my opinion would go to the bros, they ran things over.

Aug 17th, 2011, 5:23:40 PM	#65
Kindrindra Join Date: Feb 2010 Posts: 228	The best warstory I've read in a while. Both you and your opponent played quite well, which kept the story interesting. And your commentary was fantastic. :D __________________ Mission Monotype: (1/17) OU Peak: UU Peak: NU Peak LC Peak: 131/2868

Aug 20th, 2011, 4:15:10 PM	#66
StallMandibuzz Join Date: May 2011 Posts: 779 Do what you want 'cause a pirate is free, you are a pirate!~~~	I read your last warstory too, Alpha, and I can understand why it was archived. You write really well, and both warstories were really well thought out and your thought processes were explained step-by-step. Make more warstories, since you clearly know what you're doing. You get another 10/10 from me. :P Keep that fantastic commentary coming!

Aug 20th, 2011, 7:25:14 PM	#67
alexwolf King of Conquerors Join Date: Jul 2009 Posts: 3,622 Greece	Very nice warstory man!I mean almost perfect! 9.5/10! The only little mistake that i found was when you where talking about Inferanpe.Somewhere in your battle you use CC with infernape against heatran and the opponent switches to celebi. Then you switch out to something while the opponent switches out also. And then you say that you shouldn't have chickened out because no sane celebi would stay in against an infernape. The thing is that your infernape didn't had any life orb damage and your opponent has seen that.So it was very safe for you to assume that he would keep celebi in to take the choice locked CC again.... __________________ Part of the OU QC team, message me for a check!

Aug 22nd, 2011, 5:44:52 AM	#69
Twannes Join Date: Oct 2009 Posts: 422 Netherlands	10/10 obviously. This warstory was fun to read, with some jokes thrown in there. luvdisk all the way. __________________ www.youtube.com/user/Blueye95 Every day i'm battlin' OU Peak: #39 RU Peak: #19

Aug 22nd, 2011, 4:14:59 PM	#70
JGillard Join Date: Aug 2011 Posts: 2 Gibsons, BC	Nice story! There were some pretty poor predictions on your opponents side, but you did a very good job! I give this a 10/10 Last edited by JGillard; Aug 22nd, 2011 at 4:15:37 PM. Reason: It deservs a 10/10

Aug 22nd, 2011, 5:54:31 PM	#71
gallade_12 Join Date: Jul 2010 Posts: 329	Next time I'll be on your team. Dont worry. __________________ ...

Aug 29th, 2011, 10:24:30 PM	#72
Darthenos Join Date: Apr 2011 Posts: 91 Ya tebya lyublyu Nichola	I loved your random comments. the Earthbound series is overated imo haha. but seriously, good job. __________________ [20:35:44] Mekkah: childeren in the backseats cause accidents [20:35:51] Mekkah: accidents on the backseat cause childeren

Aug 30th, 2011, 12:23:05 PM	#73
Wafflez Join Date: Apr 2010 Posts: 414	Stfu earthbound is DA shit :# But anyway yeah that was a really good warstory. 9/10. I would luvdisc it but its at 69 luvdiscs it cant really get any more epicer then that m8 =p __________________ <Geomac> Man, my penis is so big if I laid it out on a keyboard it'd go all the way from A to Z Error: Ladder server overloaded - ladder could not be updated. Fuck Ps >_>

Aug 30th, 2011, 1:45:00 PM	#74
alphatron Volt turn in every tier! I'm in despair! Join Date: Oct 2010 Posts: 1,357	Thanks! And Earthbound does get more praise than it deserves, but I love the mother series all the same. __________________ Fifth Gen OU RMT: http://www.smogon.com/forums/showthr...67#post3383567

Aug 31st, 2011, 8:43:39 AM	#75
Not So Gallant Gallade Join Date: May 2011 Posts: 11 U.S.A.	I hath given thou a 70th Luvdisc to add to thou's collection. In understandable terms, I got none of the references to things like Magic or Death Note, and yet still found this funny and great to read. It makes me want to try a sun team, even though the hipster inside me means that the only successful weather team I've made so far is Hail. __________________ Black FC: 3782 9925 8268 "If a tree falls in the forest and no one is there to hear it, my illegal logging business succeeds."