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[SET] name: Choice move 1: Blizzard move 2: Volt Switch move 3: Thunderbolt move 4: Trick item: Choice Specs / Choice Scarf nature: Modest / Timid EVS: 4Def/252 SpAtt/252 Spe [SET Comments]
[SET] name: SubSplit move 1: Blizzard move 2: Thunderbolt move 3: Substitute move 4: Pain Split item: Life Orb/Leftovers nature: Timid evs: 4 Def / 252 SpA / 252 Spe
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This is my first attempt at an analysis so any constructive criticism is appreciated, I'm not exactly sure on the format so any help with that would be nice too
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Add a SubSplit set. It is easily Rotom-F's most dangerous set.
Something like this: [SET] name: SubSplit move 1: Blizzard move 2: Thunderbolt move 3: Substitute move 4: Pain Split item: Life Orb nature: Timid evs: 4 Def / 252 SpA / 252 Spe But like the other set, it definitely needs hail support from Snover to function effectively.
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Maybe mention Hp Ground/Fire in the OO. Hp Fire can threaten Magneton and opposing Rotom-F's, while Hp Ground hits Magneton/Lanturn. Also, Sub-Charge is fairly viable imo.
Edit: Magenton's Flash Cannon isn't getting an SE hit due to the Electric subtype, so I would say that just mentioning Magneton resisting BoltBeam and being bulky enough to beat him w/Eviolite is sufficient. Minor nitpicking, but that's what I do :P
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I'd expand on the overview and change your format a bit (you don't really need all of those spaces, look at other analysis for the right format)
I'd also add a Subslit set. STAB Boltbeam can cause a ton of switches and its difficult (if note impossible at times) to straight up counter. name: SubSplit move 1: Blizzard move 2: Thunderbolt move 3: Substitute move 4: Pain Split item: Life orb / leftovers nature: Timid EVS: 4 Def / 252 SpA / 252 spe
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Slash Lefties on the Subsplit set, and mention that spinners are really cool partners for the choice set. Hell, I'd in general expand a tiny bit on the AC beyond "use Snover".
With that being said, it looks like you've got most stuff covered. QC Approved 1/3 |
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I would slash an attack of a different type over Thunderbolt on the Choice Set (though I don't know what). Also, I would put Timid nature before Modest since the item goes Choice Specs than Choice Scarf.
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Isn't a mention of Hidden Power Ice worth something? Sure, it's a pretty weak STAB compared to Blizzard (and Ice Beam that Rotom-F doesn't get), but it has better accuracy than Blizzard. Maybe if you use Rotom-F outside of hail, I don't know.
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Very minor thing, but you should put the 4 extra EVs in SpD instead of Def so Download Porygon-Z doesn't get a SpA boost.
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Make SubSplit the first set, it can destroy some of the greatest threats to hail teams such as Slowking and slow Cryos (aka each and everyone of them except mine that outspeeds rotom-f by a point xD) and is just overall beastly.
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You mentioned Magneton with Flash Cannon in Check and Counters. I think you meant HP fire? Flash Cannon hits for neutral damage only iirc.
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this is a minor thing, but maybe change the defense evs the special defense so download raises attack.
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yea like zdrup said, subsplit should be the first set. it wrecks, and choice has to deal with stealth rock and doesn't make the most of the great coverage, since it's locked in a lot of the time.
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And that's so situational it doesn't really warrant a mention
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Gah, I keep getting Freezer and Fan mixed up! Also, yes it is quite situational. I really have nothing else to say but I agree that SubSpilt should come before Choice. I also find that the SubSpilt is reliant on forcing out a switch due to it having no defensive investments.
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this was taken over i guess so locking and moving
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