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Old Nov 14th, 2012, 2:23:58 PM   #76
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Old Nov 15th, 2012, 12:05:09 AM   #77
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<p>Keldeo may arguably be the cutest Pokemon in the OU tier, but that's not all there is to this pretty pony! With a great base 129 Special Attack and a good base 108 Speed, it has all the tools it needs to punch holes in opposing teams with relative ease. With Secret Sword, it becomes one of the only special attackers in the entire metagame that is capable of getting past Chansey and Blissey with ease. With all of these pros, it's hard to imagine that there are reasons to not use Keldeo, but sadly, this is the case. While Keldeo has great STAB coverage, which also includes access to powerful moves such as Hydro Pump and Secret Sword, it has a very shallow movepool. In fact, what walls Keldeo is usually determined solely by its moveset. Keldeo is usually limited to running its STABs and a Hidden Power of choice for coverage, but this pony certainly doesn't lack flexibility. With a great boosting option in Calm Mind, the choice to boost its power with a Life Orb or Choice Specs, and the ability to speed up with Choice Scarf, Keldeo can definitely wreak havoc on opposing teams.</p>
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Perhaps a dragon with such a high attack stat is hax. However, the sad, un-haxy reality for Haxorus is that it is simply outclassed in the BW2 OU metagame. With a awkward base 97 speed, very poor defenses, and a rather subpar movepool, at first, there seems to be no reason to use it over the stronger, bulkier Kyurem-B. However, there are two main reasons to consider this haxy dragon for a teamslot - firstly, Haxorus does not have a ice typing, which means it can switch in a lot more times before being completely worn down, unlike Kyurem-B, in addition to mono-Dragon being a better defensive typing then Dragon/Ice overall. Secondly, it has a better movepool then Kyurem-B, packing Aqua Tail and Superpower, two key moves which let it get past things Kyurem-B could only hope to. While Haxorus might be outclassed by the faster dragons in OU, access to Dragon Dance as well as being one of the few dragons with access to a strong Fighting move means that it is certainly worth considering.
I have to agree with PK Gaming that the "hax" jokes are just stupid. The real problem is that they just don't seem to mix in well or contribute to the analysis at all. They feel forced, and trying to force flavour into an analysis is one of the worst things you can do.
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Perhaps a dragon with such a high attack stat is hax. However, the sad, un-haxy reality for Haxorus is that it is simply outclassed in the BW2 OU metagame. With a awkward base 97 speed, very poor defenses, and a rather subpar movepool, at first, there seems to be no reason to use it over the stronger, bulkier Kyurem-B. However, there are two main reasons to consider this haxy dragon for a teamslot - firstly, Haxorus does not have a ice typing, which means it can switch in a lot more times before being completely worn down, unlike Kyurem-B, in addition to mono-Dragon being a better defensive typing then Dragon/Ice overall. Secondly, it has a better movepool then Kyurem-B, packing Aqua Tail and Superpower, two key moves which lets(mini GP Check) it get past things Kyurem-B could only hope to. While Haxorus might be outclassed by the faster dragons in OU, access to Dragon Dance as well as being one of the few dragons with access to a strong Fighting move means that it is certainly worth considering.
Such as?.....nobody. Aqua Tail, Superpower? Hmm...Skarmory? No. Kyurem-B has Fusion Bolt. Hippowdon and Gliscor? Kyurem-B has ice beam. Ferrothorn? No. Focus Blast. Jirachi? No. Earth Power.

I am just pointing out what is wrong. BTW Kyurem-B can get past everything in OU with the right move. Ice neutrality lets it beat Genesect.
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To be fair, Haxorus can conceivably run Outrage/Aqua Tail/Superpower/Dragon or Swords Dance and gain all that delicious coverage while Kyurem-B is not able to get such easy coverage. Haxorus doesn't NEED Earthquake between the other three, as it really only hits Heatran harder. You listed four moves for Kyurem, but three of them use his much weaker Special Attack and didn't even give him a Dragon STAB, so he's going to be walled by something whereas Haxorus CAN beat all his checks.

Now, to keep this from being ENTIRELY off-topic, judging from the discussion on the Suspect Test threads, it looks like Genesect will be getting the boot. A lot of people, myself included, mention Genesect explicitly in our new overviews. Should we look into fixing this and keep them in reserve, or just wait until the Suspect is actually finished?
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Such as?.....nobody. Aqua Tail, Superpower? Hmm...Skarmory? No. Kyurem-B has Fusion Bolt. Hippowdon and Gliscor? Kyurem-B has ice beam. Ferrothorn? No. Focus Blast. Jirachi? No. Earth Power.
AirLoon/Sub Heatran is the biggest one. Bronzong. Ferrothron without having to rely on focus miss. Scizor (Aqua Tail hits for neutral). And it can do this as well as get past all the threats you mentioned without having to give up anything - Kyurem-B, on the other hand, can only pack some of those moves, has to give up EVs for KOs/not getting KO'd somewhere, and doesn't have access to the glorious setup that is Dragon Dance. Also has to rely on Focus Miss to get past ferrothorn, and we all know how reliable Focus Miss is.

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Why it needs changing: It's a little too short, and really needs to talk about the flaws with Scrafty, since the common consensus is that it's a rather poor choice in the OU metagame.


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Yes, I know this one is wordy, but I'm pretty sure this does a much better job at covering why Scrafty doesn't really work in the OU metagame, while still covering all the things he actually can do. Any input would definitely help.

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Old Nov 28th, 2012, 7:03:13 AM   #83
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Old Nov 30th, 2012, 12:51:18 AM   #84
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Infernape's mixed attacking talents will no longer help it out the way they have befor the rest of his career. The name of the game in BW2 is all-out offense, which for an attacker generally means do one thing and do it well. On the physical side, offensive teams with only one dedicated physical wall are consistently broken by Rock Gem Terrakion, who boasts far stronger physical attacks and much higher usable bulk when used in sand. On the special side, Infernape isn't very good to start with. Rain teams in particular have pPokemon like, such as Tentacruel and Tornadus-T, which assure he can notwill pull a sweep or even leave lasting damage. If you attempt to counteract the weather with your own, you run into the problem of Venusaur, Victini, and Darmanitan collectively outclassing it under sun while returning to the original Terrakion + any top-tier special attacker problem in sand and hail. Infernape's past gave him reasons to be used against stall, which has an easier time stacking physical walls to beat Terrakion's sets than his, in particular sun stall teams with Sableye despised him because he can 2HKO anything under the sun without being halted by a burn. However, stall is not a significant part of BW2 and the chances of finding a proper place for Infernape in your team are slim.

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Infernape's mixed attacking talents willare no longer thelp it out the way pinnacle of wallbreaking as they have befowere in DPP. The name of the game in BW2 is all-out offense, which for an attacker generally means do one thing and do it well. On the physical side, offensive teams with only one dedicated physical wall are consistently broken by Rock Gem Terrakion, whoich boasts far stronger physical attacks and much higher usable bulk when used in sand. On the special side, Infernape consisn't vertently good to startruggles with. R rain teams in p, which are both effecticularve and prevalent in the metagame; they have Pokemon, such as Tentacruel and Tornadus-T, which asensure that Infernape will never pull off a sweep, or even leave lasting damage. If you attempt to counteract the weather with your own, you run into the problem of Venusaur, Victini, and Darmanitan collectively outclassbeing it undbetter sun while returning toabusers. In the original Terrakion + any top-tier special attacker problem in sand and hail.early days of BW1, Infernape's past gave him reasons to be used was effective against stall, which has an easier time stacking physical walls to bdeal with Terrakion's sets often lead than his, in particular sem to being weak to Infernape's mixed prowess. Sun stall suffered teams wihe most, particularly those that used Sableye despised , as Infernape, whim because he can 2HKO anything undll members of mosthe sun withteams, could not being halt stopped by a burnwith Will-O-Wisp. However, stall is not a significant part of BW2, and the chances of finding a proper place for Infernape in your team are now slim.


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The OP has not been updated, as aldaron is kind of lazy. Here's a updated OP for you all in the meantime until aldraon gets around to adding it.

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So I figured it couldn't hurt to dole out some problems I have with other overviews. With that in mind, I have to single out nyttyn.

The proposed Blissey overview is not only longer than and just as verbose as the overview it intends to replace, but also much less well-written and riddled with mistakes and annoying memes. (Can we seriously stop using the term "fat/pink blob"? They arguably don't even fit the definition of "blob".) It talks as if Chansey is its only competition as a special wall, when it really isn't.

I feel that the proposed Jirachi overview actually isn't saying enough. Maybe the old overview was too wordy, but at the very least, it gave the impression that it is a very versatile Pokemon, which is a very big point for Jirachi. The mentions of Jirachi's weaknesses seem lazy.

Ditto still promotes an abject lie and probably should be completely retooled.

P.S. 1: Lord of Bays's Hydreigon: Although I agree that the current overview gets a bit too into describing its offensive power, I feel that the proposed overview handles it rather awkwardly, mentioning two Uber Pokemon and being ironically verbose with its typing weaknesses.

P.S. 2: What's happening with DarkBlazeR's Scizor? Genesect kind of got banned...
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Figured I'd get input on Donphan's overview now.

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There are many effective bulky Ground-types thriving in OU, such as Gliscor and Hippowdon, which results in Donphan being somewhat overlooked. Don't be fooled by Donphan's former placement in UU, however, as it has quite a few perks to support its team and differentiate itself from the competition. Before you consider Donphan among others, keep in mind that your team will have to play to its main attributes, and be wary of its weaknesses to strong special attacks and several Ghost-type Pokemon (especially Jellicent).

Donphan's main function is to eliminate entry hazards with Rapid Spin, and thanks to its fantastic physical bulk and Ground typing, it will most likely achieve this goal with little cost. Donphan also sports a base 120 Attack stat, which, paired with STAB Earthquake, makes it a durable, hard-to-ignore offensive tank. As a nice side bonus, its ability, Sturdy, has been improved so it survives attacks at full health, aiding in its survival against powerful OU attackers. Donphan, ideally, should be played with diversity in mind, since it can function well as a utility Pokemon while standing up toe to toe with major threats, unlike its competition. Overall, if you need a defensive buffer not named Skarmory, Ferrothorn, or Forretress, Donphan can be counted on to reliably utilize Rapid Spin and sponge strong physical attacks for its team.


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I'm locking this (but not moving it) because I intend to revamp this project with a new OP and new protocol later today, and want to make sure it's known.

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