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Old Jan 22nd, 2013, 5:54:21 AM   #1
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LATIAS @ LIGHT CLAY
Trait: Levitate
Nature: Timid
EVs: 248 HP / 8 SDef / 252 Spd
*Draco Meteor
*Healing Wish
*Light Screen
*Reflect
DOUBLE SCREEN




ARMALDO @ EXPERT BELT
Trait: Battle Armor
Nature: Impish
EVs: 252 HP / 200 Def / 56 SDef
*Rapid Spin
*Superpower
*Stealth Rock
*X-Scissor
SPINNER




GARCHOMP @ CHOICE SCARF
Trait: Rough Skin
Nature: Naive
EVs: 252 Spd / 252 Atk / 4 HP
*Aerial Ace
*Earthquake
*Fire Blast
*Outrage
PHYSICAL SWEEPER





KINGDRA @ LEFTOVERS
Trait: Swift Swim
Nature: Modest
EVs: 180 HP / 252 SAtk / 76 Spd
*Dragon Pulse
*Hydro Pump
*Ice Beam
*Rain Dance
RAIN DANCE SWEEP




KYUREM @ LEFTOVERS
Trait: Pressure
Nature: Modest
EVs: 52 HP / 220 SAtk / 236 Spe
*Earth Power
*Ice Beam
*Roost
*Substitute
ANNOYER





GYARADOS @ LEFTOVERS
Trait: Intimidate
Nature: Impish
EVs: 248 HP / 252 Def / 8 SDef
*Bounce
*Roar
*Thunder Wave
*Waterfall
ROAR MACHINE



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Old Jan 22nd, 2013, 10:01:44 AM   #2
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Hello.

This is a really cool team, utilizing Dragons to sweep the opposing team, so I give you some props for that. Anyways this team is very well put together, but as with every other team, this one has its flaws and hopefully my rate can make it better. So, without further adu, let's get to the rate! Alright, first up, I suggest changing your Latias spread to a simple one of 252 HP / 4 SpA / 252 Spe over your current spread. This spread, like I said, is simple, the EV's maximize bulk, while making it speedy enough to set up screens quickly, which is always nice. Staying on Latias, I suggest that you run Reflect and Healing Wish over Recover and Safeguard, respectively. Reflect obviously helps weaken hits from the physical side of the spectrum, which is always nice. Now, Healing Wish may seem odd, but let me explain. If one of your sweepers is crippled and or weakened, Latias can use Healing Wish to heal them instantly. Moving right along, I suggest using a Rain Dance Sweeper set over your current one. This Kingdra set makes for a great way to combat rain teams, which may cause this team trouble. Up next, I suggest running Waterfall and Stone Edge over Aqua Tail and Ice Fang, respectively. Waterfall is an excellent STAB, which is much strogner than Aqua Tail, and has a chance to flinch, which is always nice. Stone Edge is to hit those pesky flying types that may plague you. Well, that's all I have to say for this team. I hope my advice helped. Have fun and good luck with your team!

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Old Jan 22nd, 2013, 10:25:35 AM   #3
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I made some changes :) Latias gets his bulk. Not sure how Reflect will help, as not many of my pokemon are weak to physical damage (or am I not seeing it?) Safeguard has helped me alot against Toxic teams.

Changed Moxie to Intimidate. Also Gyarados got a Choice Band and new moves.

Not to sure about Rain Dance on my Kingdra. I want to use it as a counter, not help my opponent by getting up the Rain.

Healing Wish actually seems really decent. Never used Recover much on Latias, might aswell give it a go.

Thanks for your input.
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Old Jan 22nd, 2013, 7:25:31 PM   #4
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Rain Dance will help set up a Kingrda sweep by increasing his damage and speed; and severely hurt non Rain teams.
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Old Jan 23rd, 2013, 4:46:09 AM   #5
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Opening post is bugged >_> Can't make the introduction look "normal". Even when I delete the hide, it will still appear when I save, lol.

Changed U-Turn for Focus Blast. Even though 70% is horrible, I guess its worth the risk. Also still don't get Rain Dance to well. When will I use it? Also, both Waterfall AND Hydropump? Isn't that same, only with different power?

I learned back in G/S/C that it is always bad to use two moves of the same type.

Something I am missing there?

Also would like some feedback on Tyranitar and Dragonite. I have the feeling I'm not getting most out of them. They are most versatile parts of my team and I think I should change them, in order to make the team stronger.

Thing is, I have no clue how...

Change Dragonite a bit, but his moves are inaccurate. Thunder to teach Rain Dance a leason. But I miss Dragon Tail, which turned out to be a superb move while playing. No one actually did expect it, but there sweepers didn't think it was fun XD
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Old Jan 23rd, 2013, 5:21:35 AM   #6
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A few problems i can spot with this team would be that
1. since this is a dragon based team, it is bound to have weaknesses to dragon and ice, but you have exactly 1 resist to ice, which is kingdra, and 0 resists to dragon.
2. You dont have a scarfer either, so that means that your team gets holes blown into it easily by either a fast dragon scarfer, or a freaking mamoswine and a few others.
3. I see a tyranitar, no raindance on kingdra, and thunder on DNite. explain please?

I would recommend a scarf salamence over gyarodos, and a magnezone over.. uh something (maybe hydreigon?)
If i try to change it furthur, it would turn out to be a full blown DragMag team, so yeah. Thats it.
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Old Jan 23rd, 2013, 2:21:51 PM   #7
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3. I see a tyranitar, no raindance on kingdra, and thunder on DNite. explain please?
Tyranitar doesn't have Sand Stream. Why? Because the Sandstorm will hurt me more, then it will benefit me.

Kingdra was supposed to be a counter against Rain Dance/Drizzle teams. They should start the rain, Kingdra gets in and used to get a FREE Dragon Dance. Sweep afterwards. I changed the set based upon some ratings. I also deceided to give him Rain Dance, just incase.

Dragonite is almost the same as Kingdra, but got Thunder last update. Also to kill bulky waters during the rain.

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I would recommend a scarf salamence over gyarodos, and a magnezone over.. uh something (maybe hydreigon?)
If i try to change it furthur, it would turn out to be a full blown DragMag team, so yeah.
Magnezone is a big no. Only dragons, or look a like dragons are allowed in this team. I am still considering Lapras as a semi dragon, but its a no, unless someone can convince me.

A Scarf Salamence over Gyarados would make my Ice weakness even bigger. Gyarados is Water/Flying, not dragon. Maybe lose out on Hydreigon/Dragonite for Salamence?

Don't get me wrong, I do appreciate your comments :)
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Old Jan 24th, 2013, 2:03:41 PM   #8
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Hey Man, i got your request, and i think that a monodragon especially in this kind of metagame it s a great idea. You told me that only dragon s are allowed so i have some advice to give you, let s rate it!

Well, first off, i can see a weakness to Dragon types revengekillers (You don t say? XD), if you want to make a good monotype, that could work in OU tier too, your first thought should be who make me 6-0? The answer in this case is pretty simple, a random scarf dragon. For example you have not way to stop ScarfMoxiemence or ScarfHaxorus, and the problem is not that you haven t a counter or check of them but that you have not way to revengekill too. Also you have a set of Latias pretty useless, because you are not running with a Booster that abuse of double screen or healing wish to setupp on a precise moment or opponent probabily pokemon.
So these are my main suggestions:
  • You need to use a good Revengekiller, the Idea to use Latias like a Healing Wisher is really really cool and you can use it to give Free setupp fodder to some your pokemon that after we will see, but with this set is enaugh passive, and has not an useful role in the team. My suggestion is to give her Choice Scarf, in this way you have the faster competitive revengekiller of the Metagame. She allows you to win 1v1 with all the other Dragons with Choice Scarf, and also against an eventual Terrakion, that could be a problem sometimes, especially when your Kingdra is in HOKO range by one of his Stab moves. The Evs spread in this case necess to change, i suggest you to run with one of 4HP/252Satk/252Spd with Timid Nature, in this way you maximize your offensive power, the moveset could be Surf/Draco Meteor/Healing Wish/Psyshock.
    Draco Meteor is the main stab that you use to revenge, Psyshock and Surf mainly hit enventual Terrakion, Keldeo, Tentacruel or every thing that does not necess to be stricken by Draco Meteor, in this way you don t give the possibility to your opponent to have Free setupp because with two switches could be a trouble. As you can see i wanted to remain in Healing Wish, the strategy with a good abuser and with a good timing is a great idea.

  • Well, from the moment you need to run with a Mono Dragon, and since with Tyranitar you could lose momentum while you re setting the Stealth Rock, my suggestion is to Replace it with a more offensive one, i mean Garchomp>Tyranitar. It allow you to set Stealth rock and in the same time you have a good pokemon that has the right offensive presence that you need, you are not free setupp for an eventual Terrakion or Scizor that force you to switch and abuse of it. The Idea is to run with a totally offensive spread, 252Atk/4Satk/252Spd Naive Nature and a moveset of Dragon Claw/Fire Blast/Earthquake/Stealth Rock. This moveset allows you to cover large part of the possible setter, especially Steel Types (Eq for Jirachi, Fire Blast to hit Skarm, Forretress and Ferrothorn too), Dragon Claw the stab that hit all the rest, in place of an eventual Outrage because you can t allow that it could be locked since is your setter. Now you have two chanches of Item, Haban Berry/Yache Berry, if you want a versatile pokemon that is not only a setter, but one that can enter in the middle game and do the difference thanks to his "Immunity" to some Ice or Dragon moves or Focus Sash, with this option you make a sort of "Lead" that should start your matches in 90% of them, but in my opinion the first choice is better, especially if your opponent use a spinner that is not Forretress, focus sash is made useless by a random Entry Hazard setter and an enter in middle game has more risks.

  • Well now you have to change much sets of your pokemon but i don t want to change much more of them, because you already have changed and i dont want to confusion you. For example your Dragonite could abuse of Healing Wish of Latias, that in combination with his trait is a really fine way to setupp, especially when you take the momentum to your opponent. The set i suggest you is a standard Dragonite, with a moveset of Fire Punch/Extreme Speed/Dragon Dance/Outrage and an Evs Spread of 4HP/52Atk/252Spd Adamant Nature. In case your opponent dont run many stell types pokemon, and especially if you find against a common Rotom-W, is a good possibility to sweep. I suggest you Dragonite because is the best booster you have in the team and in case of a good electric type for example the above pokemon that can resist to Gyarados is a good alternative. The Item is obviously Lum Berry>Leftovers, this because you need to use Multiscale only to help you to boost and sweep the oppo, so lum berry it s more useful because negate an eventual status or help with the confusion caused by Outrages.

Well, sorry if the rate is not as you expected, but i have not many time.
Hope anyway i helped you and good luck with the team, i didn t change Gyarados because i consider it a Dragon and because in this team is really funny A_A.

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Old Jan 24th, 2013, 2:43:14 PM   #9
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Hey there man, I got your PM so I'll give you a rate.

First of all, I agree with all Uomo Solo's advice, they are all pretty good so I suggest you to put on them. I have only a suggestion to give you, it's U-Turn > Earth Power on your Hydreigon. The only two reasons to use Hydreigon instead of Latios are 1) the resistance to Tyranitar and Scizor's Pursuit and 2) U-Turn to give momentum to your team. You don't need Earth Power because Heatran isn't a problem for this team (and you can hit it anyway with Focus Blast) and because Hydreigon can hit already the steel-types like Ferrothorn and Skarmory with Fire Blast. U-Turn otherwise gives you momentum which is always useful and it gives you a free switch in of your sweepers too and it helps with the setup.

That's about your team. Good luck, hope I helped!
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