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Old Apr 14th, 2008, 6:42:25 PM   #1
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Default [RMT] I've been using this team for a bit so...

Here's a team I took like 10 minutes on. I need some criticism and stuff. Thanks!

Spiritomb @ Leftovers
Ability:Pressure
252 HP / 140 Atk / 116 SpD
Careful Nature (+SpD, - Atk)
~ Sucker Punch
~ Taunt
~ Pain Split
~ Will-O-Wisp

I'm fine on this one,it's a standard starter.

Blssey@Leftovers
Ability: Natural Cure
Evs: 4 HP / 252 Def / 252 SDef
Bold Nature ( +Def, -Atk )
~ Ice Beam
~ Protect
~ Seismic Toss
~ Wish

A wish passer...Nothing needed on this one.

Scylant@Life Orb
Ability: Mountaineer
Evs: 56 Atk / 200 Satk / 252 Spd
Naive Nature (+Spd, -SpDef)
~ Ice Beam
~ Bug Buzz
~ Brick Break
~ Air Slash/Taunt

For this one, I'm thinking about changing Substitute to Air Slash,because it would've been more useful in LOTS of situation.

Azelf@Focus Sash
Ability: Levitate
Evs: 36 HP / 252 SpA / 220 Spe
Timid Nature (+Spd, -Atk)
~ Nasty Plot
~ Psychic
~ Flamethrower
~ Grass Knot

This won me TONS of battles. Nothing really needed.

Weezing@Black Sludge
Ability: Levitate
Evs: 252 HP / 252 Def / 4 Spe
Bold Nature ( +Def, -Atk )
~ Will-O-Wisp
~ Thunderbolt
~ Haze
~ Pain Split

I don't know about this one... I'm stuck between T-bolt and WoW. T-bolt helps it being NOT useless against Heatran,but I don't have much status going on in this team.

Revenankh@Leftovers
Ability: Shed Skin
Evs: 252 HP / 16 Def / 240 SpD
Careful Nature (+SpD, - Atk)
~ Bulk Up
~ Shadow Sneak
~ Hammer Arm
~ Rest

I LOVE this thing,even though I can't say the name. This annoys practically EVERYONE,and some people D/C against this,because I made a big sweep against them.

Anyway,any criticism and nitpicking is welcomed. Thanks! NO SPAMMY HARSH CRITICISM.

Edit: I'm thinking of switching out a few pokemon for a rapid spinner,and maybe another phys. sweeper.


I'm really liking Hitmontop. Good SpDef,speed,and attack! It also packs Fake Out...

Hitmontop@Leftovers
Evs: 252 HP / 72 Def / 184 Spe
Impish Nature (+Def, -SpAtk)
~ Rapid Spin
~ Close Combat
~ Toxic
~ Stone Edge

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Old Apr 14th, 2008, 6:54:10 PM   #2
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Please put a title on your RMT thread. [RMT] isn't going to cut it. Change the subject of your OP and I will edit the thread title for you.
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Old Apr 14th, 2008, 6:58:47 PM   #3
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Spiritomb- Ok

Blissey- Aromatherapy/Heal Bell + Wish = illegal... use protect/softboiled instead of aroma/wish instead... and blissey NEED instant heal

Scylant- Never played against scycant, but i think Sub + life orb = suicide

Azelf- Put timid , since u arent using any phys move...

Weezing- Think About it: Poison is onlt super effective against grass, steel is immune to it and its weak to ground and others.
Use BOTH WoW and Tbolt, so u can kill Gyarados easily, dont be useless against heatran, and burn chomps. I like him as counter to revenank, with WoW+Haze+Pain Split

Revenankh- Use Sahdow Neak > shadow punch, since u wil need to kill weakened thing before they can heal. U should put more SpD EVS over defesne , since bulk up cover it. Rest+ShedSkin>>>>>>>>>Moonlight+Airlock
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Old Apr 14th, 2008, 7:58:36 PM   #4
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@Pombo - About the Renevankh, I prefer pretty equal defenses,so I'll leave it be.

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Sorry,I was in a rush..
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Old Apr 15th, 2008, 5:50:41 AM   #5
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You dont need wish protect and softboild, remove softboiled for one of blisseys other options (aromatherapy, Ice beam, thunderbolt, Thunder wave ect)

Syclants evs are dumb, i know you just got them from the analysis but they dont make sence 200 evs for attack when you only have 1 phy. attack its not good, my advise is to change BB to Earth Power or Focus Blast, if you want to avoid being walled by bliss use a Tail Glow set.

Maybe change Expert belt to LO on azalf.

Move Defence evs to Sp. def on revenankh.
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Old Apr 15th, 2008, 10:15:57 AM   #6
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You need to keep thunderbolt on weezing or gyarados is running through this team.

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Old Apr 15th, 2008, 3:27:20 PM   #7
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The coverage of Azelf isnt that great, so u should put life, since it wont live much, or focus sash, to kill Weaviles and friends
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Thanks guys. what about H-top?
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Old Apr 15th, 2008, 8:06:27 PM   #9
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I dont like him,, somewhy.

Isnt the place, but look this l
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