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Join Date: Oct 2007
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This made for a really good read. Keep it up once again :)
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Join Date: Mar 2007
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Typo on "Latios" instead of Latias lol ;
otherwise nice warstory ; if only I could Archive it ...
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Join Date: Nov 2007
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Another awesome read. LR, your warstories are the best. Nice commentary, layout, and pics.
5/5, keep it up! |
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Join Date: Aug 2008
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great fucking battle.
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Join Date: Aug 2008
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Too bad his mence only roosts and intimidates.
Freaking amazing warstory. It didn't even feel that long when reading it. Keep up the good work. Look forward to your next story.
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Join Date: Jul 2008
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Great warstory and I must really congratulate you or Raikoulover on that Latias set. It's really neat.
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Join Date: Dec 2008
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Amazing prediction (on both sides) and format. This warstory shows what competitive battling is all about.
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Join Date: Jun 2007
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I just have to leave a comment here as this was simply fantastic. I won't bore you by repeating what others have said, all I will say is that this made my day; a great battle with incredibly detailed and insightful commentary to boot.
There is one thing that's bugging me though. What item was your Tyranitar using? It wasn't the standard Leftovers or Life Orb, and I don't recall you mentioning what it was. |
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Babiri Berry (steel resist) =P.
I was trying it out, and now have settled on a simple Lum Berry. Fooling your opponent into thinking you are a CB Tyranitar can be invaluable sometimes, so that is why I choose not to use Leftovers or Life Orb.
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Join Date: Apr 2008
Posts: 967
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So I hurd you made the bestest warstory to grace Smogon in a long tiem?
Seriously, an excellent battle that was closer than the scoreline stated and a brilliant commentary that puts every other warstory this quarter to shame. |
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Join Date: May 2006
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Well, I found one little nitpicky thing:
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However, never mind that. All I have to say to you is super motherfucking duper job. I've read lots of warstories, but I think this one was downright amazing. I mean, I like to give constructive criticism whenever I reply to a warstory, but what the hell am I supposed to say here? You did everything amazingly well. I'm glad I took the time to read this warstory. Thank you good sir. ***** |
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Join Date: Aug 2005
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As an old ADV player, the idea of 50 turns being a very long battle seems a bit silly. But of course it is rather long for a DP battle.
Excellent warstory. The comments were very well written, and that team status update thing was very nice. Great strategic play and prediction all around. |
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Join Date: Aug 2008
Posts: 1,958
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that was a great battle! I can't beleive I read it all but I did. I enjoyed it a ton. nice work LR
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Join Date: Jan 2006
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Easily one of the best warstories on Smogon in my opinion. Despite the length of it, I didn't get bored one second, the predictions on both sides were downright awesome and the comments were well-timed, accurate and interesting. On top of that, the health-recap-thingy was a really good idea; it's convenient, but also adds a nice touch to the warstory.
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[02:06] <DixieNormous> Rodan x pookar: Just Do It
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Considering the insane effort put into this, as well as the great battle that defies the ending score, I want to put this in the archive.
I'll leave it here for a few days so people can post their thoughts before it goes untouchable, though.
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Thanks Jibaku! That's really gratifying. Thanks man.
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From a long time lurker:
Spot on, good sir. Absolutely top job from start to finish. ![]() Quote:
"Salamence's full moveset is Roost/Wish/Flamethrower/Draco Meteor" This was said before you posted.
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np: Biffy Clyro - Shock Shock
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Awesome warstory! :)
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Join Date: Dec 2007
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this pretty much blew me away
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np: Michael Jackson - 'Mon in the Mirror (Dream World mix off the "Black or White" album)
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besides the ridiculous effort you put into formatting the story, you're actually a good writer. dont see too much of either in one warstory, let alone both, nice work
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Join Date: Nov 2007
Posts: 479
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Very nice warstory! Well written dude.
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Join Date: Jul 2006
Posts: 3,442
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Very nice, I especially like the status report thing.
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Join Date: Sep 2006
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Very nice, thanks for the hp bar idea.
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