Pokémon Amethyst -~- A Sprite Resource Project - Page 42

Nopie · Mar 10th, 2010, 9:08:18 PM

Might as well bang this out before I go to sleep.

Scepticallistic · Mar 10th, 2010, 9:45:14 PM

Are we doing a reservation purge soon? :o

I really want to do the Tyranitar line, which was reserved by Black Buddha-- and his reservation was 2 months ago as of today (he also hasn't posted in this thread since then, I don't think). :s

kiryu3000 · Mar 10th, 2010, 10:41:06 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Fat Scepticallistic

Are we doing a reservation purge soon? :o

I really want to do the Tyranitar line, which was reserved by Black Buddha-- and his reservation was 2 months ago as of today (he also hasn't posted in this thread since then, I don't think). :s

Yeah, I was really forward to seeing an Amethyst Tyranitar, but I have faith that you will do an amazing job at it. I'd love to make more reservations, but I already have quite a few batch of things reserved, and on top of that, FFXIII >.<

Arch · Mar 10th, 2010, 11:01:28 PM

Oh uh.....you wanna do ttar......

I was planning on doing that line next.

Nopie · Mar 11th, 2010, 6:33:26 AM

Yeah, actually, I've been dying to do Rotom and its various formes ever since I started this project. It was reserved by XandZero2 six weeks ago and I haven't heard anything about it since.

Alchemator · Mar 11th, 2010, 3:53:23 PM

As I said before (I think) I will not be doing a reservation purge. If you list the reservations that you would like to be considered to be removed I'll contact that person to kick their ass into gear I mean ask if they will still be completing the sprite.

I'll contact Black Buddha and X. I'm not keen on adding Pokemon with size problems, as there is no real time limit on this project they should just be redone. The highlight on Quilava's left (looking at it) seems a tad out of place.

UUUUPPDATE

wickdaggler · Mar 11th, 2010, 4:42:41 PM

I implemented suggestions for these two.
If nobody else has any comments, they can go through:

Scepticallistic · Mar 11th, 2010, 6:33:52 PM

Thanks for contacting Black Buddha for me. :D ||| Proposition: inappropriately-sized sprites are the responsibility of the original creator to fix right? So if a sprite is deemed the wrong size it should be removed from the QC (to prevent clutter) until an appropriate replacement is made. ||| Darkanine the outline of the Shedinja is all black and the halo needs to be a bit more curved. It's a bit U-shaped right now. The Aipom...*scratches head* I'm not really sure where to start. :x Maybe I'll let someone else critique and I'll come back to it later. ?_? ||| Paragraphs are denoted by "|||" since for some reason it's not letting me paragraph my posts.

Blackhawk11 · Mar 11th, 2010, 6:45:49 PM

Posting to say I'm reserving Golduck (and by reserving I mean I'll have it done shortly, I just don't want to get ninja'd). Also, I plan on fixing up Machop, I just haven't got around to it.

In addition to that (because I just used the word 'also' and hate sounding repetitive), I posted Shinx awhile ago but it isn't in QC. When I post Golduck in a bit I'll post it as well.

EDIT: Ahhh, it appears the HGSS sprite is based off of the Sugomori art. Not sure if I should continue spriting it. Here's what I got:

The lineart is still a bit rough. I just noticed that I'm pretty much resizing the HGSS sprite. Should I use a different pose?

Scept I agree 100% on Aipom. It looks...rough. Make the lines smoother. Make features more defined. The curves should be curvier. Atm the face looks like it's a bunch of random pixels. The tail hand thing looks like it got run over by a steam roller. Make those 'fingers' more round. Make the ears more defined, right now they look like blobs hanging off of the face with a spot in the middle. I realize that could come off as a bit harsh, but hopefully you'll take it as the constructive criticism it was meant to be. =/

Arch · Mar 11th, 2010, 6:56:00 PM

Reserving Heatran, legendaries suddenly got popular.

I'll make Sentret later and maybe do Pidgey and Pidgeotto since it looks like nobody is going to touch them anytime soon. By the way, the Pidgeot link is broken in your QC list Alch.

Pidgeot

Scepticallistic · Mar 11th, 2010, 7:06:08 PM

Arch, good luck on the Heatran. I tried it once and it's simply too wide a Pokemon; finding a decent pose that allows it to be tall enough and fit inside 160 for width is a true challenge.

Nopie · Mar 11th, 2010, 7:13:09 PM

Finished up the last member of the Poli family.

Also, what's happening with Arceus? I don't see it in the Quality Control list. Does it still need work or was it just missed? Here it is again, let me know everyone!

Speaking of Quality Control, Alch, you have me listed as having just one sprite in the list when it's actually three (Poliwrath, Deoxys-N, Munchlax). The links for Deoxys-N and Munchlax are broken though, so here they are again.

Scepticallistic · Mar 11th, 2010, 8:29:59 PM

I think Politoed and Poliwrath can pass. Alch, I think you missed the Volbeat I corrected slightly. :3

Also:

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Tayla · Mar 11th, 2010, 10:29:16 PM

Reposting these as no one commented on them ever. --

Alch, it says in your list that Chansey was made by me, and it wasn't. D:

kiryu3000 · Mar 11th, 2010, 11:26:11 PM

Oh boy...

Quote:

Originally Posted by Fat Darkanine

I implemented suggestions for these two.
If nobody else has any comments, they can go through:

Read Scepti's comments for the Shedinja. As for the Aipom, I will list my comments in a list:

The palm of its "hand" on its tail should be just as big as its body (by that, I mean excluding the head and legs). I am not quite sure if its size is in proportion to the body, but I just wanted to point that out.
Its right (our right) "finger" on its tail hand is bigger than the middle one. Make sure that the middle finger is the biggest, but not by a lot.
Needs teeth line that is distinguishable, although I'm not sure how you would do that on such a small sprite.
Its ears need to be more round.
Its "mohawk" is not visible.
Its ears are not supposed to be perfectly circular. They should be more vertically elliptical and there has to be adequate space between the ears on its head (the ear on our right seems to violate that the most).

The picture I used as reference can be found here: http://bulbapedia.bulbagarden.net/wi...ok%C3%A9mon%29

Quote:

Originally Posted by Fat Blackhawk11

Linework looks great. That's all I can say for now.

Quote:

Originally Posted by Fat Nopie

Finished up the last member of the Poli family.

I'm gonna comment on the sprites that I haven't criticized yet. Politoed and Munchlax looks great, and so does Arceus. About Arceus, I was thinking that it could use some more light shading at the front of its body, but maybe the darker shading is better to convey its dominating appearance. I am not sure, but that's my two cents.

Quote:

Originally Posted by Fat Helix

Alch, it says in your list that Chansey was made by me, and it wasn't. D:

Monferno's arms look flat due to a lack of shading. The same thing applies to the flame on the tip of its tail as well.
Celebi's body looks a bit too flat and straight. Also, make its legs a but more distinguishable; I'm not sure if it's crossing its legs or not. Some parts of the feet could use rounding as well.
Nidoran (male) seems smaller than the female, although it's supposed to be the other way around (1'08" and 1'04" respectively).

Nopie · Mar 12th, 2010, 4:21:50 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Fat danilyu

About Arceus, I was thinking that it could use some more light shading at the front of its body, but maybe the darker shading is better to convey its dominating appearance. I am not sure, but that's my two cents.

Any better? Worse? Let me know.

Alchemator · Mar 12th, 2010, 2:02:25 PM

Update.

I think Poliwrath has more potential, so I'm not letting it pass just now.

The number of sprites completed/QC'd is a bit off and inaccurate due to my old system of:
*Pokemon* - going through Quality Control

but now it's:
*Pokemon* - going through Quality Control (*Spriter*)

So this won't happen again. That said can you all post the number of sprites you have completed, checked and are currently in QC. Thanks.

EDIT: Wild Arcanine appeared!

EDIT2: The eye really doesn't seem to work in any other way from what I've tried. If you want to have a go be my guest. As for the shading... Arcanine is a fire type so it produces its own light! Nah I'll have a go at that tomorrow xD in the meantime:

Arcaraid always was my favourite.

Scepticallistic · Mar 12th, 2010, 5:36:53 PM

Sprites Completed: 20
Sprites checked: 28
Sprites in QC: 7

Alch, the Arcanine looks kind of bug-eyed. XD I also think it could use some more shading, since it seems very light on the upper half.

The gallery website has been updated to reflect the Tinypic account changes.

Arch · Mar 12th, 2010, 6:53:59 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Fat Alchemator

EDIT: Wild Arcanine appeared!

EDIT2: The eye really doesn't seem to work in any other way from what I've tried. If you want to have a go be my guest. As for the shading... Arcanine is a fire type so it produces its own light!

The fur looks really flat, add little patches that stick out with shadows under them, like with the official sprite. His (our) left front leg bends akwardly. And the black stripes are always black, unless under the brightest light.

Tayla · Mar 12th, 2010, 7:01:22 PM

It's front foot looks really painful..

Blackhawk11 · Mar 12th, 2010, 7:35:09 PM

I've been busy!

Sunkern was terrible. I started off by scratching it, but then realized it was way too big, so I scaled it down and down and down and down. Now it looks crappy.

So far, I've completed 4 sprites and have 2 sprites in QC. Not counting any of these.

Nopie · Mar 12th, 2010, 7:59:12 PM

Anyone got some crabnails?

So far I've completed 13 sprites:

- Azelf
- Mesprit
- Uxie
- Diglett
- Dugtrio
- Deoxys-A
- Deoxys-D
- Deoxys-S
- Mankey
- Primeape
- Poliwag
- Poliwhirl
- Politoed

I have four sprites in Quality Control:

- Deoxys-N
- Munchlax
- Poliwrath
- Arceus - No Plate

And I have checked one sprite, although I am not a member of Quality Control:

- Gliscor

ColdRAIN · Mar 12th, 2010, 8:01:56 PM

Nopie, could you enlarge the claws a little, they look a little small to me :P

TacoHawk76 · Mar 12th, 2010, 10:48:46 PM

Everything seems to be in proportion for kingler Nopie, aside from the head. And by head, I mean the red peice above the tan jaw. It, along with the eyes, seem too big for a kingler, and it comes off as childish and big-headed. Not at all the grizzled, badassed Kingler that I'm sure you were aiming for. The crown peice is great though, just keep that, whilst making the head shorter. Here is the original compared to yours:

EDIT: I Reserved Floatzel, Hariyama, and Croagunk. The Floatzel is sized, outlined, and colored. I'll do the shading and finish the finer points by tomorrow (March 13th). I don't wanna sign on to see that someone already posted a Floatzel sprite once I finish with mine. So can you please mark Floatzel, Croagunk, and Hariyama as reserved to TacoHawk?

Skymin_Flower · Mar 12th, 2010, 10:58:49 PM

2 Sprites finished and 1 in QC

Mar 10th, 2010, 9:45:14 PM	#1027
Scepticallistic Join Date: Oct 2008 Posts: 1,166	Are we doing a reservation purge soon? :o I really want to do the Tyranitar line, which was reserved by Black Buddha-- and his reservation was 2 months ago as of today (he also hasn't posted in this thread since then, I don't think). :s __________________ *Unicorn Parade \| Blogcomic* Doodles and ravings

Mar 10th, 2010, 11:01:28 PM	#1029
Arch Join Date: Aug 2009 Posts: 1,101 BLAOW!!!	Oh uh.....you wanna do ttar...... I was planning on doing that line next. __________________ *RateYourMusic* The Best Albums of: 2010 2011 2012

Mar 11th, 2010, 3:53:23 PM	#1031
Alchemator my god if you don't have an iced tea for me when i come back i'm gonna flip Join Date: Feb 2009 Posts: 3,762 Zrack attack!	As I said before (I think) I will not be doing a reservation purge. If you list the reservations that you would like to be considered to be removed I'll contact that person to kick their ass into gear I mean ask if they will still be completing the sprite. I'll contact Black Buddha and X. I'm not keen on adding Pokemon with size problems, as there is no real time limit on this project they should just be redone. The highlight on Quilava's left (looking at it) seems a tad out of place. UUUUPPDATE __________________ Twitter \| Blog

Mar 11th, 2010, 6:33:52 PM	#1033
Scepticallistic Join Date: Oct 2008 Posts: 1,166	Thanks for contacting Black Buddha for me. :D \|\|\| Proposition: inappropriately-sized sprites are the responsibility of the original creator to fix right? So if a sprite is deemed the wrong size it should be removed from the QC (to prevent clutter) until an appropriate replacement is made. \|\|\| Darkanine the outline of the Shedinja is all black and the halo needs to be a bit more curved. It's a bit U-shaped right now. The Aipom...scratches head I'm not really sure where to start. :x Maybe I'll let someone else critique and I'll come back to it later. ?_? \|\|\| Paragraphs are denoted by "\|\|\|" since for some reason it's not letting me paragraph my posts. __________________ *Unicorn Parade \| Blogcomic* Doodles and ravings

Mar 11th, 2010, 6:45:49 PM	#1034
Blackhawk11 one on one Join Date: Apr 2009 Posts: 649 Michigan	Posting to say I'm reserving Golduck (and by reserving I mean I'll have it done shortly, I just don't want to get ninja'd). Also, I plan on fixing up Machop, I just haven't got around to it. In addition to that (because I just used the word 'also' and hate sounding repetitive), I posted Shinx awhile ago but it isn't in QC. When I post Golduck in a bit I'll post it as well. EDIT: Ahhh, it appears the HGSS sprite is based off of the Sugomori art. Not sure if I should continue spriting it. Here's what I got: The lineart is still a bit rough. I just noticed that I'm pretty much resizing the HGSS sprite. Should I use a different pose? Scept I agree 100% on Aipom. It looks...rough. Make the lines smoother. Make features more defined. The curves should be curvier. Atm the face looks like it's a bunch of random pixels. The tail hand thing looks like it got run over by a steam roller. Make those 'fingers' more round. Make the ears more defined, right now they look like blobs hanging off of the face with a spot in the middle. I realize that could come off as a bit harsh, but hopefully you'll take it as the constructive criticism it was meant to be. =/ __________________ ...Take it higher, take it higher, 'til the roof is on fire. Take it higher, take it higher, let's burn it up... 1040 Last edited by Blackhawk11; Mar 11th, 2010 at 7:49:48 PM.

Mar 10th, 2010, 9:08:18 PM	#1026
Nopie Join Date: Dec 2007 Posts: 314	Might as well bang this out before I go to sleep.

Mar 11th, 2010, 6:33:26 AM	#1030
Nopie Join Date: Dec 2007 Posts: 314	Yeah, actually, I've been dying to do Rotom and its various formes ever since I started this project. It was reserved by XandZero2 six weeks ago and I haven't heard anything about it since.

Mar 11th, 2010, 4:42:41 PM	#1032
wickdaggler Join Date: Oct 2009 Posts: 1,434 dickwaggler	I implemented suggestions for these two. If nobody else has any comments, they can go through:

Mar 11th, 2010, 6:56:00 PM	#1035
Arch Join Date: Aug 2009 Posts: 1,101 BLAOW!!!	Reserving Heatran, legendaries suddenly got popular. I'll make Sentret later and maybe do Pidgey and Pidgeotto since it looks like nobody is going to touch them anytime soon. By the way, the Pidgeot link is broken in your QC list Alch. Pidgeot __________________ *RateYourMusic* The Best Albums of: 2010 2011 2012

Mar 11th, 2010, 7:06:08 PM	#1036
Scepticallistic Join Date: Oct 2008 Posts: 1,166	Arch, good luck on the Heatran. I tried it once and it's simply too wide a Pokemon; finding a decent pose that allows it to be tall enough and fit inside 160 for width is a true challenge. __________________ *Unicorn Parade \| Blogcomic* Doodles and ravings Last edited by Scepticallistic; Mar 11th, 2010 at 7:58:59 PM.

Mar 11th, 2010, 7:13:09 PM	#1037
Nopie Join Date: Dec 2007 Posts: 314	Finished up the last member of the Poli family. Also, what's happening with Arceus? I don't see it in the Quality Control list. Does it still need work or was it just missed? Here it is again, let me know everyone! Speaking of Quality Control, Alch, you have me listed as having just one sprite in the list when it's actually three (Poliwrath, Deoxys-N, Munchlax). The links for Deoxys-N and Munchlax are broken though, so here they are again.

Mar 11th, 2010, 8:29:59 PM	#1038
Scepticallistic Join Date: Oct 2008 Posts: 1,166	I think Politoed and Poliwrath can pass. Alch, I think you missed the Volbeat I corrected slightly. :3 Also: ... HI GUIZ AM I LATE TO THE PARTY? Bet you didn't know I did non-pixel art. XD __________________ *Unicorn Parade \| Blogcomic* Doodles and ravings Last edited by Scepticallistic; Mar 11th, 2010 at 9:57:09 PM.

Mar 11th, 2010, 10:29:16 PM	#1039
Tayla Join Date: Sep 2008 Posts: 659 Georgia, United States of America	Reposting these as no one commented on them ever. -- Alch, it says in your list that Chansey was made by me, and it wasn't. D:

Mar 12th, 2010, 2:02:25 PM	#1042
Alchemator my god if you don't have an iced tea for me when i come back i'm gonna flip Join Date: Feb 2009 Posts: 3,762 Zrack attack!	Update. I think Poliwrath has more potential, so I'm not letting it pass just now. The number of sprites completed/QC'd is a bit off and inaccurate due to my old system of: Pokemon - going through Quality Control but now it's: Pokemon - going through Quality Control (Spriter) So this won't happen again. That said can you all post the number of sprites you have completed, checked and are currently in QC. Thanks. EDIT: Wild Arcanine appeared! EDIT2: The eye really doesn't seem to work in any other way from what I've tried. If you want to have a go be my guest. As for the shading... Arcanine is a fire type so it produces its own light! Nah I'll have a go at that tomorrow xD in the meantime: Arcaraid always was my favourite. __________________ Twitter \| Blog Last edited by Alchemator; Mar 12th, 2010 at 5:40:13 PM.

Mar 12th, 2010, 5:36:53 PM	#1043
Scepticallistic Join Date: Oct 2008 Posts: 1,166	Sprites Completed: 20 Sprites checked: 28 Sprites in QC: 7 Alch, the Arcanine looks kind of bug-eyed. XD I also think it could use some more shading, since it seems very light on the upper half. The gallery website has been updated to reflect the Tinypic account changes. __________________ *Unicorn Parade \| Blogcomic* Doodles and ravings

Mar 12th, 2010, 7:01:22 PM	#1045
Tayla Join Date: Sep 2008 Posts: 659 Georgia, United States of America	It's front foot looks really painful..

Mar 12th, 2010, 7:35:09 PM	#1046
Blackhawk11 one on one Join Date: Apr 2009 Posts: 649 Michigan	I've been busy! Sunkern was terrible. I started off by scratching it, but then realized it was way too big, so I scaled it down and down and down and down. Now it looks crappy. So far, I've completed 4 sprites and have 2 sprites in QC. Not counting any of these. __________________ ...Take it higher, take it higher, 'til the roof is on fire. Take it higher, take it higher, let's burn it up... 1040

Mar 12th, 2010, 7:59:12 PM	#1047
Nopie Join Date: Dec 2007 Posts: 314	Anyone got some crabnails? So far I've completed 13 sprites: - Azelf - Mesprit - Uxie - Diglett - Dugtrio - Deoxys-A - Deoxys-D - Deoxys-S - Mankey - Primeape - Poliwag - Poliwhirl - Politoed I have four sprites in Quality Control: - Deoxys-N - Munchlax - Poliwrath - Arceus - No Plate And I have checked one sprite, although I am not a member of Quality Control: - Gliscor

Mar 12th, 2010, 8:01:56 PM	#1048
ColdRAIN Join Date: Dec 2009 Posts: 228 SOUNDWAVE, Melbourne	Nopie, could you enlarge the claws a little, they look a little small to me :P __________________ Currently playing: Pokemon Black, Call of Duty Black Ops, Borderlands, Battlefield: Bad Company 2, Just Cause 2, Fallout: New Vegas. UP THE IRONS Current Pokemon Black Team: Samurott, Darmanitan, Axew, Archeops, Duosion, Galvantula

Mar 12th, 2010, 10:48:46 PM	#1049
TacoHawk76 Join Date: Sep 2009 Posts: 66 Atop a giant hawk... that eats tacos.	Everything seems to be in proportion for kingler Nopie, aside from the head. And by head, I mean the red peice above the tan jaw. It, along with the eyes, seem too big for a kingler, and it comes off as childish and big-headed. Not at all the grizzled, badassed Kingler that I'm sure you were aiming for. The crown peice is great though, just keep that, whilst making the head shorter. Here is the original compared to yours: EDIT: I Reserved Floatzel, Hariyama, and Croagunk. The Floatzel is sized, outlined, and colored. I'll do the shading and finish the finer points by tomorrow (March 13th). I don't wanna sign on to see that someone already posted a Floatzel sprite once I finish with mine. So can you please mark Floatzel, Croagunk, and Hariyama as reserved to TacoHawk? __________________ Pokemon Amethyst is goin all the way! Amethyst sprites done by me: 4 sprites in progress: Carvanha (Quality Control) Sharpedo (Quality Control) Buizel (Peer edits: 0) Floatzel (Peer edits: 0) 2 sprites completed Makuhita Hariyama Last edited by TacoHawk76; Mar 12th, 2010 at 11:11:54 PM. Reason: Complaint

Mar 12th, 2010, 10:58:49 PM	#1050
Skymin_Flower It's Seed Flare time. Join Date: Aug 2009 Posts: 894 Flower Paradise	2 Sprites finished and 1 in QC __________________ Everyone wants to be the very best, like no one ever was. Yet so few are willing to catch them for their real test, or make training them their cause. Be a real Pokémon trainer. There is no such thing as a legal hack.