Pokémon Amethyst -~- A Sprite Resource Project - Page 59

ColdRAIN · Apr 22nd, 2010, 3:58:48 AM

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Originally Posted by Fat Blackhawk11

Advice on its left fin (our right). Should it be there, should it be higher up, etc.
Other general advice on the sprite is welcome of course.

I reckon top left or bottom right if you thinned the left flipper (our right) where it meets the body.

Zand, I love the way you colour, shade and dither your sprites, however is left leg looks like he broke it and now it's squiggly...>.> I don't want to sound mean but yeah.

aXl · Apr 22nd, 2010, 7:11:42 AM

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Originally Posted by Fat ColdRAIN

I reckon top left or bottom right if you thinned the left flipper (our right) where it meets the body.

Zand, I love the way you colour, shade and dither your sprites, however is left leg looks like he broke it and now it's squiggly...>.> I don't want to sound mean but yeah.

Okay, I'll see what I can do with it. Prob. can fix it at my mom's school later today. Btw, this was one of the first humanoids I've custom-drawn, so it makes sense that there would be anatomy issues. +)

ColdRAIN · Apr 23rd, 2010, 4:44:06 AM

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Originally Posted by Fat XandZero2

Okay, I'll see what I can do with it. Prob. can fix it at my mom's school later today. Btw, this was one of the first humanoids I've custom-drawn, so it makes sense that there would be anatomy issues. +)

Hah, I can't scratch sprite for shit but I'm always here to critique :D

Bucky · Apr 24th, 2010, 5:31:29 AM

I tried to fix my Altaria, but I dunno. I have a feeling I should scrap it and star over x__x What do you guys think?

aXl · Apr 24th, 2010, 1:07:07 PM

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Originally Posted by Fat Bucky

I tried to fix my Altaria, but I dunno. I have a feeling I should scrap it and star over x__x What do you guys think?

Keep it. I actually like it allot. +)

Nopie · Apr 24th, 2010, 5:32:48 PM

Yeah, I'd say it's good enough to at least get itself into QC. Once Alch decides to update, of course.

That said, I should get myself a little more active too... ^^;

wickdaggler · Apr 24th, 2010, 5:37:04 PM

well, remoraid mafia is done, so things are probably gonna be picking up here, pretty soon.

/me looks solemly at alchemator

Bucky · Apr 24th, 2010, 8:33:54 PM

Yaayyy!! Thanks for the feedback ^__^ I'm so excited about working on my other ones now!

Edit: Don't sweat guys, Alch said he'll be updating soon!

wickdaggler · Apr 25th, 2010, 10:39:57 AM

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Originally Posted by Fat Alch

I'm saving my 800th post for remomafia postgame, I've been trying to get voices in amethyst to say I haven't forgotten about it and will update soon. Please be my voice D:

Scepticallistic · Apr 25th, 2010, 12:05:19 PM

Hi guys. ;^; I haven't forgotten about it either. I've just not been very inspired lately (and I'm doing a crapload of other stuff). Once the chronological sequence hits June I might be able to get active again (and hopefully get inspired). :] Gud lock eberyboby!

aXl · Apr 25th, 2010, 3:12:37 PM

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Another Alch Quote:

Anyway, I'm saving my 800th post for Remoraid Mafia Postgame so could you post an Amethyst message for me? Just that I will update soon and Bucky needs that beak higher up :P my procrastination is my weakness xD

Bucky · Apr 26th, 2010, 12:05:48 PM

Edit: I made moar!!!

Credit for Ambipom's pose goes to Cartoons!, and yes, I did get his permission (:
This Altaria's gonna drive me nuts. Here's the beak closed compared to it being open. I'm still having trouble with it x__x

Alchemator · Apr 26th, 2010, 2:37:05 PM

Consider closing the beak, just to see how it looks.

What, an update? Really? No.

Joking, I am :P

Joking again, I'm actually not, I see what things are like tomorrow xD

No seriously, I'm updating now :P

EDIT: DONE! GASP!

- Snubbull needs more shading on the foot
- Latios seems slightly plain at the moment, maybe add some dithering or highlights.

Nopie · Apr 27th, 2010, 5:25:37 AM

How's this?

Welcome back Alch.

Scepticallistic · Apr 27th, 2010, 7:59:38 AM

Bucky, you sure it's okay to use Cartoons!'s Ambipom pose? :s

Also, just a preliminary cautionary warning about sizes. I haven't checked them yet, since I have to take off for school now.

DarthVader317 · Apr 27th, 2010, 3:50:00 PM

QC on Arceus

Tayla · Apr 27th, 2010, 6:24:50 PM

I'm already working on Mightyena for the second time. D:

aXl · Apr 27th, 2010, 6:26:43 PM

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Originally Posted by Fat DarthVader317

QC on Arceus

The shading on it's tail and main body is funny, since it gives the impression of it having flat sides. Other than that, looks good.

Also, you could consider adding some reflected light on its left hindleg. Looks a little too flat right now. If you are unfamiliar with reflected light, check Electrode's sprite.

EDIT: I am happy to say that I am ~1/3 of the way finished with QC'ing Arcanine, so no one steal him from me. +)

DarthVader317 · Apr 28th, 2010, 5:07:07 PM

This better?

aXl · Apr 29th, 2010, 7:14:04 AM

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Originally Posted by Fat DarthVader317

This better?

Much. +)

Arcanine is now 1/2 done! Making progress!

Bucky · Apr 29th, 2010, 1:51:03 PM

I did get Cartoons' permission to use the pose by the way, I probably should've put that in my post, stupid me >__< Anywho, here's my Vulpix!

So I'm done with all the Pokemon I reserved, but I'd like more feedback before I go ahead and reserve some more. So please tell me what you guys think about the rest of my sprites as well!

...

aXl · Apr 30th, 2010, 5:38:24 PM

Yeah, I'm back baby!

DarthVader317 · Apr 30th, 2010, 11:19:19 PM

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Originally Posted by Fat Bucky

Anywho, here's my Vulpix!

The nose is way too angular. It's straight lines instead of a natural curve. The curls and possibly ears should be larger as well. The shading on the body seems wrong as well, coming from somewhere besides the upper left, but it might just be me.

Bucky · May 1st, 2010, 1:35:02 AM

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Originally Posted by Fat DarthVader317

The nose is way too angular. It's straight lines instead of a natural curve. The curls and possibly ears should be larger as well. The shading on the body seems wrong as well, coming from somewhere besides the upper left, but it might just be me.

Thanks. I SHALL FIX IT!!

Doran Dragon · May 1st, 2010, 8:28:56 PM

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Originally Posted by Fat Helix

Double post of Idc. Isn't he delightfully, scarily pretty? :3

would it be alright if I made a few edits to the tail and the feet?

Apr 24th, 2010, 8:33:54 PM	#1458
Bucky Join Date: Feb 2010 Posts: 410 What?	Yaayyy!! Thanks for the feedback ^__^ I'm so excited about working on my other ones now! Edit: Don't sweat guys, Alch said he'll be updating soon! Last edited by Bucky; Apr 24th, 2010 at 9:19:07 PM.

Apr 25th, 2010, 12:05:19 PM	#1460
Scepticallistic Join Date: Oct 2008 Posts: 1,166	Hi guys. ;^; I haven't forgotten about it either. I've just not been very inspired lately (and I'm doing a crapload of other stuff). Once the chronological sequence hits June I might be able to get active again (and hopefully get inspired). :] Gud lock eberyboby! __________________ *Unicorn Parade \| Blogcomic* Doodles and ravings

Apr 26th, 2010, 12:05:48 PM	#1462
Bucky Join Date: Feb 2010 Posts: 410 What?	Edit: I made moar!!! Credit for Ambipom's pose goes to Cartoons!, and yes, I did get his permission (: This Altaria's gonna drive me nuts. Here's the beak closed compared to it being open. I'm still having trouble with it x__x Last edited by Bucky; Apr 29th, 2010 at 1:51:34 PM.

Apr 26th, 2010, 2:37:05 PM	#1463
Alchemator my god if you don't have an iced tea for me when i come back i'm gonna flip Join Date: Feb 2009 Posts: 3,762 Zrack attack!	Consider closing the beak, just to see how it looks. What, an update? Really? No. Joking, I am :P Joking again, I'm actually not, I see what things are like tomorrow xD No seriously, I'm updating now :P EDIT: DONE! GASP! - Snubbull needs more shading on the foot - Latios seems slightly plain at the moment, maybe add some dithering or highlights. __________________ Twitter \| Blog Last edited by Alchemator; Apr 26th, 2010 at 4:16:42 PM.

Apr 27th, 2010, 5:25:37 AM	#1464
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Apr 24th, 2010, 5:31:29 AM	#1454
Bucky Join Date: Feb 2010 Posts: 410 What?	I tried to fix my Altaria, but I dunno. I have a feeling I should scrap it and star over x__x What do you guys think?

Apr 24th, 2010, 5:32:48 PM	#1456
Nopie Join Date: Dec 2007 Posts: 314	Yeah, I'd say it's good enough to at least get itself into QC. Once Alch decides to update, of course. That said, I should get myself a little more active too... ^^;

Apr 24th, 2010, 5:37:04 PM	#1457
wickdaggler Join Date: Oct 2009 Posts: 1,437 dickwaggler	well, remoraid mafia is done, so things are probably gonna be picking up here, pretty soon. /me looks solemly at alchemator

Apr 27th, 2010, 7:59:38 AM	#1465
Scepticallistic Join Date: Oct 2008 Posts: 1,166	Bucky, you sure it's okay to use Cartoons!'s Ambipom pose? :s Also, just a preliminary cautionary warning about sizes. I haven't checked them yet, since I have to take off for school now. __________________ *Unicorn Parade \| Blogcomic* Doodles and ravings

Apr 27th, 2010, 3:50:00 PM	#1466
DarthVader317 Join Date: Aug 2008 Posts: 525 United States of America	QC on Arceus __________________ ASB profile

Apr 27th, 2010, 6:24:50 PM	#1467
Tayla Join Date: Sep 2008 Posts: 666 Auburn University	I'm already working on Mightyena for the second time. D:

Apr 28th, 2010, 5:07:07 PM	#1469
DarthVader317 Join Date: Aug 2008 Posts: 525 United States of America	This better? __________________ ASB profile

Apr 29th, 2010, 1:51:03 PM	#1471
Bucky Join Date: Feb 2010 Posts: 410 What?	I did get Cartoons' permission to use the pose by the way, I probably should've put that in my post, stupid me >__< Anywho, here's my Vulpix! So I'm done with all the Pokemon I reserved, but I'd like more feedback before I go ahead and reserve some more. So please tell me what you guys think about the rest of my sprites as well! ...

Apr 30th, 2010, 5:38:24 PM	#1472
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